Every other harem story: /happy little accidents

Roxxane: Yeah, I know what you all came for. Here you go!

Ah. That's what's holding this back. Author's writing it in a shounen demo, despite it being seinen.

Roy genuinely did nothing wrong.

The humor in this saps all life and connectivity from the story. You can't be both self-depreciating and tell a genuine work. Pick a lane and stick to it.

He likes cuckholdry. There hasn't been one MILF in the book thus far.

None of them are milfs. That's just the popular jargon being swapped anytime someone sees "thicc mature woman".

Mom
I'd
Like to
Fuck

Point out exactly which character has sired a child and you will find the MILF.

"Cleanse"? What are you talking about? The hero won the day and put the evil ones in their place. Isn't that what you always cheer for? Don't tell me you're bothered by a hero's power this deep in.

Since when were all of you assuming he only just committing NTR? He was like that from the very start.

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If you're looking for realism in an isekai, go find a shrink to deal with your schizophrenia. If your literary skills are that poor, buy some learning books and retry from a new foundation. If you're trying to impress, keep in mind I'm not your dad so my attention to you is both finite and likely not going on past this comment. Have a good one.

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>ctrl+f
>lucky guy
>0 results

Put your damned cape away, save-a-ho. No one asked for your services.

Kitami Reika proved that wrong decades ago.

You sound like you can't accept someone thinks your favorite reading material is subpar. Best get used to it. I don't have to have your tastes, chief.

I also call it how I see it. MC refuses to touch his women, who have already professed, already tried subtly seducing, and already flat-out tried to give him a night time creep. He's a herbivore, through & through.

Almost completely derailed. The editor needs to be beaten for damning the last few chapters be nothing but imouto's irrelevant quest and Caro & Marrine being horny on main for no good reason.

This story turned into utter trash SUPER fast.

The black boxes are one thing (So I guess the source aren't the tankobon), the little sister is completely sidetrecking the story with a whole mess of unnecessary shit, and the cheesecake is genuinely pointless since it's less of a antagonistic plot point and more a really awkward ploy to keep eyes on the book. It's just really out of place and obstructive. Don't they have another leg of the journey to start?

I'm not the one painting a sex work profession as something sublime or noble. Frankly that's more than a little creepy. She's a ho. She doin' ho activities with ho tendencies. This is not high level arts. It's a very idealized fantasy that doesn't stack for shit vs reality. Enjoy the fiction, but that's all it is: fiction.

I'm going to write a story where the MC dies every time he fails to realize he's established a harem.

This trash actually goes for 50+ chapters? lol

Betting it's a shitty bodyswap and whoever Mafuyu is stole Touma's body

Goddamn, this translation.
オルガ・レン・レノックス
OLGA REN LENOX (or LENNOX if you're so inclined)

Not sure where they got ORLA RENOX from but it's a miss.

Author sacrificed a bro tank for this. Shame on his family.