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Not Important - 1758929615
So here's the thing. There IS an interesting concept to be had in a cheapskate person having to spin gaccha to save the world. What drags it down is twofold:

1. This is told full on comedy style, so there are never any stakes, even when there should be obvious ones. Taking the story seriously is thusly a mistake.
2. Either by editor mandate or by the author's own hand, there's a lot of mild to sometimes heavy Ryouna mixed in with the heroine vs monster battles. If that's not your bag, you definitely will not like this book.

tl;dr this is the highest brand of empty calorie junk food, minus any actual lewdness that would at least promise somewhat of a better time. There's plenty of panchira, though.

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Not Important - 1758917762
This is an interesting concept wasted on someone who prefers to write shit comedy and shittier ryouna.
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Not Important Niafloa - 1758897293
Keep her. Keep them all. They're headaches.
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Not Important - 1758841206
If you can sit through Sex & Dungeon, you can probably brave this. It's just as nonsensical and with the Showtime level softcore erotica.
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Your fault for taking anything this writer does seriously. Did Sex & Dungeon not warn you clearly about their lack of skill level?
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Not Important - 1758763963
Ayano is just the self-insert for the author.
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https://i.postimg.cc/fLr7sr4V/i.png
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Not Important - 1758761122
>Ryouna

https://i.postimg.cc/9MF1C9rn/i.jpg
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And it's from the same author that did Sex and Dungeon. There goes any hope of the logic holding any semblance of stability.
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Not Important - 1758678164
Weak premise. The flimsy rules of the setting means that his sister should already be dead and gone, as only the devoured get erased from existence. But the author will have to write themselves out of that corner eventually.
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You've never been in a bad situation in a crowd. And hopefully, you never will.
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Because the girls have no personality, the MC has no drive, the story has no stability, and the sex has no flavor.
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