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This isn't porn. Meikyuu Harem is porn. This is just a bad trip because the author can't play to the gimmick.
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You have to understand the 8 pages of elf smut were necessary enough that shortening it a page to turn over a kidnapper and rapist to authorities was too high a price to pay.
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Reminder this could have been an 8 chapter doujin with more character appeal.

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Three days. The dark elf who could track & find a mini-onyx in a search-deterred forest labyrinth, who tracked and found her master on an out-of-the-way smuggling island, left this dude to be at the clutches of a psycho ho for three days?

Eh, who gives a shit about character consistency?
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The author glossed over a woman's life being destroyed via the death of her husband and the loss of a son whose final fate she will never find out. You can't say you're surprised with how they're handling slavery, sex slavery, and being sold out by a former comrade with kid gloves, can you?
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doll joints doll joints woohoo

(yeah sorry this isn't exciting. Author is allergic to conflict so this is just a double-bluff we're reading.)
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https://i.postimg.cc/fTGDjn4W/i.png

Obligatory response. Though in this case I empathize, since the "romance" to speak of is barely here, so it's just be an annoying add-on than anything actually nice or spicy.
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What tripe. Sweeping a revenge plot under the floorboards and stapling a few more ass shots to distract the reader. You ploy failed.

https://i.postimg.cc/zXc3sP9P/i.jpg
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Two+ chapters later, the mangaka can't remember his MC is now monochromatic and colorblind in an eye, and absolutely no part of this condition has affected his quality of life. What a joke.
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When was the cat, catnapped? Don't know, doesn't matter.
What's the fate of the elf who had the shitty master? Don't know, doesn't matter.
Where'd the Realdoll come from? Don't know, doesn't matter.

Onward, to mediocrity!
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Not surprised the scans have gone nowhere, either. Likely the group is aware they're holding a dud story and are just praying someone's willing to pay them for the shitty dark elf.

Yeah, this story's shit. It puts a decent attempt at the start to have any kind of structure or purpose, but nope–the waifu elf is a cumrag, the sub-characters are either awkwardly put in for laughs in situations where there shouldn't be any or they're there to coddle MC's fragile sense of self. MC themselves should've just suicided when his house burnt down and saved us the trouble of his weak will, his lack of bravery, his lack of spine, the unwarranted apathy...and more.

And to top that, it's another vague "endless adventure" that Japan's gotten more and more fond of in the last decade. I'm quite sick of it–I'd go back to cape slop if I wanted stories without an ending.
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And with that I don't care anymore. It can go anywhere it wants. If the writer won't put effort in their story, I shouldn't put effort in reading it.
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How fucking lazy can you get in writing a plot? There's NO meat left on that bone. The fuck were you even thinking aside of "want another elf waifu"!? I swear I can't understand these mangaka or their editors at all, sometimes.
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Did they seriously stop up an entire B plot just to fuck?

https://i.postimg.cc/hPrc05bD/i.jpg
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