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Towan
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Towan - 1732211994
It is an interesting swap. First Aqua wanting to take revenge and then mellowed out and now Ruby going from happy-go-lucky to revenge. Next step is both wanting revenge no doubt. xD
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Towan Dice_24K - 1732042433
Yeah. The last few pages were meant to come earlier after the title. Then it makes sense.
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Towan - 1732042395
Little bear. The page order is bad as the last few pages are placed incorrectly. Can you fix this, pretty please wish sugar on top? =3
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Towan - 1731792309
Poor Scriptwriter dude... He wanted to do his best, but the game of telephone made it hard on him as well as the other things he had to take into account. It would hurt quite a lot to be told off by an author you are a huge fan of.

Of course I understand the author too. She thought her wishes were ignored and the changes made only made the script worse while not fixing her problems with it. Feels like it could have been avoided if the two had worked together.
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Towan R Tuin - 1731650129
I don't think "close" quite does it justice. I mean, look at Iona blushing like a highschool girl! xD

https://i.postimg.cc/MHcnHwdG/i.jpg

Truth be told, I was rather surprised. Like, Theo, I thought you would steal Zerath's heart?! But maybe he is actually building a harem~? =3

https://i.postimg.cc/3RqwP6YQ/i.jpg
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Towan Dice_24K - 1731471271
I like that idea. =3 The only problem right now is, it is most likely not possible yet. Dokja still needs a Dokkaebi for video feed and the girl hasn't hatched from the egg yet, so they probably can only send messages right now.
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Towan Munchkin - 1731342980
I gotta disagree here. It literally reads "DEADLY POISON". If that translation is accurate, then that would mean a lot of trouble.

https://i.postimg.cc/jd5LdNqx/i.jpg
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Towan TheImage - 1731335259
Stabbed with deadly poison in his gut. At least wasn't there an item name that read "deadly poison" for the dagger earlier in this chapter? Though here is hoping Ed is well prepared. Maybe water spirits are good at healing and purifying?
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Towan Not Important - 1731154836
Well, that is the story. The villain is the underdog instead of the heroes who beat them up. Not sure why exactly this is supposed to go nowhere. Our MC is weak and has to gain strength to take his revenge on the Rangers for the humiliation, but also now for killing his friend.
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Towan - 1731153814
He's like: "This bitch is nuts! No way!" xD
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Towan GamePlayer64 - 1731151299
Theo was in on it and wanted the MC to do it. So, you are right that it was the MC's plan, but Theo instigated it and took part in it, which would count as him scamming Oren.
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Towan GamePlayer64 - 1731100904
To be fair, he is a jerk, but he was not entirely wrong. Sure, Theo didn't work together with the Goblin, but he did scam Oren pretty badly on the 99th floor. xD
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Towan Nobletail - 1731099107
Agreed. Lloyd would work his ass off to solve all problems, just so he can be lazy! xD Ukraine war? Give him a week. He will get things sorted out!
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Towan thisisHell - 1731097936
It is kinda heartbreaking, really. You can see the despair as they were brought out of their brainwashing, knowing how they had been played and deeply ashamed for the hurt they have caused Emi. There is longing too in their eyes for her.

Here is hoping that they will be humble and apologize while not trying to force themselves into her life, knowing they would have to earn the trust that was lost.
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Towan PageOne - 1730868239
Don't forget the money shot. The actual conception! =3 Dark Sentinel pointed at the dude, called him mother and bam kazam! Tentacle sex impregnation! xD

https://i.postimg.cc/7PTQ81gJ/i.jpg
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Towan Worm - 1730867909
I mean, the story could deviate and the long saggy titty woman could turn into a loli or something. xD
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Understandable, though this dude was mentioned several times throughout the story even after he had vanished, so it was hinted at that he would appear again in a sense. ^^
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Towan kdy - 1730867639
I just looked it up. Chapter 21 is the "Tentacle Action". =3
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Towan Awnurkn33s - 1730832942
I can proudly say I still remember the demon trying to impregnate glasses dude. =3 Everyone thought the tentacle getting cut off stopped it, but it seems it wasn't stopped after all. xD
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Towan Narrator Clifton - 1730832850
It makes perfect sense. I remember that demon rammed something like a tentacle down his throat and wanted to impregnate glasses dude. They cut it off and everyone thought he was not impregnated, but it seems he was. Asmodeus seemingly wasn't about to off the father of one of his subordinate's children.

Edit: The "Tentacle Action" is in Chapter 21. =3
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