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TruePurpleMK
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TruePurpleMK - 1756538754
No compass?
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TruePurpleMK - 1756529164
I wouldn't call a raft a "boat"
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TruePurpleMK - 1756525268
https://i.postimg.cc/500rb63K/i.png

And the idiocy is confirmed. Don't you want wisdom and intelligence in your leaders? Why aren't the tests for that?
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TruePurpleMK - 1756525194
https://i.postimg.cc/qRb938qd/i.png

30 minutes of this
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Well you want to give someone enough benefit of the doubt they wouldn't be that much of a asshole
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TruePurpleMK Rathial - 1756520139
I disagree. See my separate comment for more if you want.
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TruePurpleMK - 1756520114
read through to chapter 15, latest at time of writing. In one word, terrible. 3//10 at best but probably lower,

The world makes no sense. So nonhuman animals and plants have decided to "hide" from humans by dying? Turns out what plants need most is not good soil, clean air and sunlight but kumbia circle of life? good feelings and "balance", because humans suck their hatred has killed the plants by forcing them to hide by dying.. That's why plants are hiding in dark caves (see green plants don't need sunlight or even rain because reasons) away from humans and giant worms have evolved the physically impossible of being able to get calories from rocks.

It's not like humans in this world need more than a hundred calories a day to survive in this world, nor nutrition, nor oxygen to breath but still the humans miss the plants which is why they want to kill by burning alive (what is the fuel for these fires? human hatred. Certainly not wood in a world with no plants) super gardeners called witches saying they are "stealing" the plants. Because humans be hateful and stupid.

Even the beast/plant hybrids, that should be the kumbia circle of life masters, are assholes hiding unknown sinister stuff yet untold by the story but vague foreshadowing and such all over the place.

Reminds me a little of a comic where plants have grown from living humans, implanted in people and people turn into plants because plants couldn't grow from sunlight because of eternal clouds or something. That comic was a bit more complicated and nuanced but still mostly just humans suck and nonsensical world as well.

The art is good, MC is OK. Some plot hooks might keep you around with curiosity but I expect those plot hooks are connected to fishing poles of disappointment with extremely long fishing lines. I put this on follows when it was just three chapters seeing if something good would come out of it, 15 chapters is enough to judge it as bad, off follows.

Also what is a "amure" aside from the spelling changing between chapters I guess it's "plants" but why not just say "plants"
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TruePurpleMK - 1756513201
Artist makes it look like MC forgot to bring the prisoner but rest assure was brought.
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TruePurpleMK - 1756512965
What was the point of luring MC into going into a prison cell on es own? What if MC hadn't even gone into the dungeon area?
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TruePurpleMK - 1756512609
How the hell did the soldiers find some supposed opening the rock-slide just made (certainly didn't come in through a underwater tunnel) and be right there? Like it just happened, they'd have to have been right there and then gotten the telepathic or whatever message about the place staring them in the face anyway.

And why would they ever kill people who have control over precious plants, plus "burn it all down" sure that was just one crazy soldier but FFS.

Just terrible world building.
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TruePurpleMK - 1756511619
Not just powerful but emotionally unstable, seems too old for a tantrum of that level. If it wasn't for the powers it would still be em flailing on the ground pounding fists or something.
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TruePurpleMK - 1756511260
So are "witch" female only?
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TruePurpleMK - 1756510644
The story order is messed up, this training montage coming before MC learning to eat rock munchers, so what has MC been eating all this time? Especially with heavy work.
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TruePurpleMK - 1756510125
amurd=plants?

People living with barely any food (grossly underestimate how much calories a human needs to live even before considering nutrition) and plants growing in dark caves. Not a very realistic world setup.
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TruePurpleMK - 1756509602
Oak's all like 'we need to get to Garden asap' but before then just being a ass and refusing to give MC a lift even after injuring a ankle. Oaks a ass.
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TruePurpleMK - 1756508890
Why kill Tura if you value witches and their information so much?
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TruePurpleMK - 1756504154
https://i.postimg.cc/tgWthxbf/i.png

Those pants are ridiculous. It's drawn more ridiculously high in the front than from the back but either one....

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TruePurpleMK Nobletail - 1756503040
I reread back to when the slaves where loaded up and on.(not that far back a few chapters maybe somewhere around 6 or even less?) Nope. MC accidentally slaughter all their captures for sure. But this is some other will, or a echo of MC's ideals? That freed and protected the slaves.

https://i.postimg.cc/4ytcpCpg/i.png

"forest's magic power" No mention of "Master" AKA MC. Maybe the tree of life or world tree or whatever it is?
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TruePurpleMK Danske - 1756457451
Wasn't even a game skill, just natural ability.
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TruePurpleMK - 1756457197
I guess a will outside of MC is acting, since MC didn't know about the other slave children or even give vague magic instructions regarding them accidentally.

Weird they didn't inform MC of these children.
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