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FlavoredTwist
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FlavoredTwist Phyrite - 1738335117
no
it had a good chance to be interesting in the beginning but it falls off pretty fast and some of the art looks like they just took older pages and traced over them with different characters repeatedly
GATE, Summoning Japan (or summoning america novel on scribblehub), or Arifureta are all better since it has a proper plot to it and the art doesnt look like it was traced
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FlavoredTwist - 1738334768
well that shit with the dragon elder/mom felt forced and shitty

'something dangerous is coming' "what is it" 'a storm' "a storm? of what?" 'im not allowed to say' "why not?" 'im not allowed to say' "who ordered you?" 'im not allowed to say'
i feel like even some shit like "my wisdom as the leader of dragons is telling me something is going to happen but im not sure what" would be better and i feel like the "storm" is either going to be some shit like a thunderstorm that the girl is going to deal with easily or its going to be like a single demon or some shit
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FlavoredTwist - 1738271047
tbh i cant blame him lmao

if she wanted him to do it one sidedly she should have gone though a means in his world that is a way he couldnt say no to, instead she sent a private DM on the trade network, something that is as far as i know basically a private conversation
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FlavoredTwist - 1738159466
he kinda has to be a perfectionist/overly cautious since his end goal is to fight entities on par with the strongest rankers that will come from outside the tower
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FlavoredTwist - 1738092417
this whole mini arc thing with that guy was a joke

he blamed MC for something she basically had 0 say in and the little girl he is 'getting justice for' would have either suffered as a slave or suffered as a toy while she was a child and would have probably been punished if she tried to save her life
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FlavoredTwist R Tuin - 1737647627
yee but at least the author isnt just blindly pushing for a harem with every girl falling for him instantly... well they still sorta are, but at least there is a bit more going on and MC isnt a middle schooler virgin
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FlavoredTwist R Tuin - 1737567099
yup but i am now more worried about the other prince since like 95% of fantasy stuff ive read or seen where there is 2 princes and neither are the main character, one is reasonable but lacks in some way like less support or ignorant while the other is a moron but has more support
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FlavoredTwist - 1737306418
i mean its annoying that the issue was because neither of them could communicate and kept assuming shit

but at least it only lasted like 2 chapters instead of other stories where it can take 10+ to resolve it (or the whole plot, god so many female MC romance stories are just 'i dont want to talk and will assume everything)
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FlavoredTwist - 1737304253
damn, if the military basically forced the awakened to kneel and/or submit after going though the tutorial, no wonder they ended up turning the world to ruin

hell i probably would as well if i was stuck in hell for years and then when i finally got back after thinking 'this is it' only for the military and governments to turn on them especially if it was as bad as im imagining and borderline slavery
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FlavoredTwist Cat - 1737169528
same, or that it would just be more frequent updates to get past this arc

but from what i remember, MC (the kid) was kicked out of her village because she only has a Lv1 taming skill when everyone else is born with like 3 or 4 skills that are all between Lv1 and Lv4 (unknown to her the villagers who did this were all arrested shortly after and would have let her back in but she was already gone) and while traveling she decided to pretend to be a boy to avoid kidnapping

after arriving at this city she made friends with some guards and adventurers but also realized she was being targeted by a kidnapping group and got roped into it by her new friends bc they were already moving in on them but carefully since the the main perp is a noble and they agreed (with MC proposing it) to use her as bait to get the kidnappers to walk into a trap so the guards and guild can move in and get rid of them all in one swoop and get enough evidence to take up the line to the crown to get rid of the noble
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FlavoredTwist Dratini - 1737141232
i think somewhere around 150-200 years now since he left

i think that the story will end with him having spent a few hundred years traveling, maybe even 1000 years, and then heading back to the high elf forest and finding everything the same with the same high elves and basically just 'did you have a good little vacation?'
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FlavoredTwist - 1737098218
but if the dragon girl is the one that made the 7 gems that are basically the infinity stones and if one goes the world goes by-by

why does the dragon seem like an airheaded dipshit?
i am so tired of the 'this dragon has lived for X thousand years but is actually stupid/lazy but they actually did this great important thing in the past' at least with arifureta dragon wasnt a loli and is just weird because she was sheltered and alone for most of her life
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she might just be looking to try and use MC as much as possible to make herself look good for a promotion/raise like "i am skilled enough to find someone who can take on these difficult requests, so i should be the one promoted instead of everyone else"
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FlavoredTwist - 1736983067
my bet is the prince ended up blabing about MC either because he got too into talking about the sword or because the king/queen pressured him to and the knights are sent to "persuade" her to "work" for the royal family
either that or they have some way to detect magic power or magic power being used and were sent out expecting to find a drake and a vaporized village
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i predict that she will be an arrogant entitled brat who expects things to go exactly how they were in the story and then later on there is something related to demons, monsters, demi-humans, ect that caused a massive war in the original but MC had meet with them before hand and resolved it so when the 'war plot starts' MC will gain lots of public support and Mana will throw a massive bitch fit and get exicuted or banished or whatever
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FlavoredTwist - 1736517762
maybe his brother intentionally shattered his own soul when one or some other beings wanted to capture and use it?
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wonder if its a friendly joke between the 2 groups or an actual jab or not

it does remind me of a 'fight' someone had with a group a few years ago when they released a manga chapter cut into like 5 parts and were like 20+ chapters behind current so someone else started started translating and the group that was doing it to farm ads threw a massive bitchfit and i think just dissolved entirely
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FlavoredTwist - 1736293733
sounds more like she needs to learn the ways to prevent getting around detection skills

ik if it were me and i had a detection skill and had powerful friends like nobles, id 100% ask about how widely used they are and if there is tricks to get around it and if there is any ways to get around the holes
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FlavoredTwist - 1736217351
horay it finally updated

had to re-read the whole thing bc i forgot lmao
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