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Elroid Tiereon
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But I think that's the point.

The inciting incident of the story happens when two opposite sides clash. But while they both start at very opposite sides, one being too self-serving and the other too rigid, it's by their interaction that they start to understand themselves better, and in doing so, understanding the other person as well.

...or something like that, right?

I do like the dark horse as second ship tho, because the friend (Tomo) does go through something similar but from a different starting point.
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Not really. Not "killing" at least.
It's more common to try to control such people.

It's odder as the whole town turned too quick into the whole "kill" thing. If this had happened after a while twould make more sense, right? But they should still be elated by having the demon lord threat destroyed... so I always thought twas too odd a setting.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1716956152
I know there are three ships on this story but... I just really like the Mona one a lot, because of how both characters seem to be growing.
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It's honestly quite satisfying to see this archangel has such a shite character... because then the beating feels that more rewarding.

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Elroid Tiereon - 1716925644
My word there is some RAGE incoming.

And also, I'm glad there seems to be something going behind scenes... twas TOO weird that they killed the hero just like that, and it seems that there were someone pushing this outcome with quite the evil intentions.
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Proactive wolf be quite proactive!!!
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Elroid Tiereon - 1716825297
Was the last guy screaming "LEWD!" but got scared and shortened it?
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Elroid Tiereon - 1716817107
That's one hell of a school lmao
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Elroid Tiereon - 1716808472
I do enjoy these type of short rests, because they have the feel of a D&D campaign but still feel a tad grounded.
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I mean... it's called setting. You do need some chapters like this to set payoffs later on.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1716670947
That was very much in character for her, lmao.What a character.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1716484389
I do like how these two, despite being rather terrible in attitude, are actually good people.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1716409768
The mad lad did it !!!!
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Elroid Tiereon - 1716322941
Boy might be a bit slow but he is SMOOTH regardless.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1716321827
The sweet SWEET revenge we didn't know was even possible finally is here!!
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Elroid Tiereon - 1716321503
That's one way to advance the PLOT
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Elroid Tiereon - 1716232585
That's gotta be the awkwardest way to meet your father in law I've read so far.
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