Not really surface level given how frivolous DxD and this is with its setup & execution. Themes, pacing, character types, vague and entirely-translucent abilities...it takes a lot. And doesn't do much with it creatively.

He's not nailing the girls, he's not fixing his mana-depravation issue. Even bunnygirls can't make up for this sadsack display of brainlessness.

>Not killing after he fell

And I'm sorry I even took this seriously even for a moment.

So this just rips whole-cloth from DxD? That's pretty sad.

Mid

HxH author, right? Yeah, that tracks given the shit pacing and dull characters.

So are there chapters in between? If not I assume this is missing chunks of content out of the original LN/WN/whatever.

Meh.

No notes disrupting flow of the manga
No shitty translation
No flashing page opening as if their credit matters more than the author's

Nah he can play ball

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Every other harem story: /happy little accidents

Roxxane: Yeah, I know what you all came for. Here you go!

Ah. That's what's holding this back. Author's writing it in a shounen demo, despite it being seinen.

Roy genuinely did nothing wrong.

The humor in this saps all life and connectivity from the story. You can't be both self-depreciating and tell a genuine work. Pick a lane and stick to it.

He likes cuckholdry. There hasn't been one MILF in the book thus far.

None of them are milfs. That's just the popular jargon being swapped anytime someone sees "thicc mature woman".

Mom
I'd
Like to
Fuck

Point out exactly which character has sired a child and you will find the MILF.

"Cleanse"? What are you talking about? The hero won the day and put the evil ones in their place. Isn't that what you always cheer for? Don't tell me you're bothered by a hero's power this deep in.

Since when were all of you assuming he only just committing NTR? He was like that from the very start.

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If you're looking for realism in an isekai, go find a shrink to deal with your schizophrenia. If your literary skills are that poor, buy some learning books and retry from a new foundation. If you're trying to impress, keep in mind I'm not your dad so my attention to you is both finite and likely not going on past this comment. Have a good one.

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Put your damned cape away, save-a-ho. No one asked for your services.