There is no plot. Just harem.

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WORMS IN EYES.

nope. A thousand pounds of nope in a five pound bag.

Okay we'll see where it goes

Feh, yuri.

Wants to be Tsukihime so damned hard.

Who tf would bother chasing after such a bland story? Writers who don't know when the story is finished are the worst.

Worst tank ever.

Tick tok tick tok CHOP

Like many other fantasy joints, it blew its load in the first chapter and didn't know how to recover. This one fails a bit harder than usual, though.

The artwork is one of the failing points. While the inking is superb and the designs are beautiful, that itself is a detractor. The further in you get, the more you realize the mangaka's so busy making pretty still panels that they're neglecting pacing panels that would push the plot along as a better pace. Worse, the pretty art also defies basic scene logic, so actual action becomes difficult to follow.

The writing is the second and far more obvious failing. More dialogue is spent on metacraft and moping than advancing any particular plot. Because of that alone, a dungeon incident that should have been wrapped up in even seven chapters, basically stretched to the point the book was axed at 20.

Not worth the time. There's nothing here you haven't seen in a thousand other "protag is fired from the party" stories. And there's no fanservice that could save it, either.

Making less and less sense as it goes. And the mangaka has a terrible habit of wasting what should be action panels moving the plot along on pretty stills. I'm thinking this likely got axed.

Here's a question: In a world with learned magic, how is none of this very obvious, very critical knowledge about stats and shit related to advanced jobs not COMMON KNOWLEDGE among adventurers?

But there I go poking holes in a plot, again....

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Translation's choppy, but the explanation of the mechanics are natively fucked.

Wish fulfilment BS of the worst degree.

Garbage, through & through. No conlfict, no plot, MC is too OP to be bothered by curse, great evil, or even rival master fighters who will beat him into submission then rape him cause he's too OP. The artwork is excellent, the rest is dogshit.

No "own version". It's UBW minus the energy penalty.

How could art so detailed belong to such a boring story?

With enough power, it's possible to revive a dying star.

Shounen battle slop. Quit before you get dragged along into a slow-paced battle story that goes nowhere and accomplishes nothing.