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Not Important Raiji - 1722211898
Probably because it sucks and goes nowhere.
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Not Important - 1722210895
Oh. So this caught the axe? About time. It's pretty dull.
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Not Important - 1722118206
Logically speaking
- A man wouldn't be acting as this boy has the entire time so the reincarnation bit is entirely wasted
- A proper assassin would have kept notes on what the kid could do at all hours, so there's no way he goes in the woods four years unmolested
- No scars to show he had a hard time of things, either. Just another OP MC
- Author hopes no one notices that goblin had a family and the kid killed them

On with the show.
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Not Important - 1722117537
So he trades with the goblins whose family he slaughtered to test his magic. Yeah the author isn't putting thought or effort into this.
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Not Important - 1722116219
Train hard to fight nothing and go nowhere. What shallow motivation.
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Not Important - 1720892673
He's right in that she's a whore. She doesn't realize it yet, though.
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Not Important - 1720892178
What a joke. If grammy were serious about the watch over her heir, she'd have known about this dude before he stepped in the limo to be taken to the estate.
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Not Important - 1720840351
This author is pitiful.
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Not Important - 1718414828
This translation is asscheeks.
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Yeah, speed runners who do absolutely nothing but min-max their game time aren't masters of anything. Except maybe being extremely outcast.
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Not Important - 1718319467
Comments are right, there's zero obstacle in this story, so there isn't anything that's going to keep a reader's eye beyond a few chapters. Whatever shape it takes, the author will need to cook up some conflict.
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A master of the game would know damn-well to keep his advantages and go scum the low levels until he has livable gear. He's not a master, the author's lazy.
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Not Important - 1718124357
This is pretty pointless. The hero's not established enough to care about her outside of her being the author's fetish and a metaphor for a machine doll, we don't know enough about Alex to care about his petty plotting or the weakness of his ego, and MC is too busy being high on life in the middle of an active war to take seriously. I'd much rather the companions all band together, stalk to MC's shitty cottage, beat the fuck out of him with socks stuffed with rocks, and drag his ass back to the actual only point of import in the whole story: routing the demon lord's army, and the demon lord themselves.

I feel I can just tune into Isekai Meikyuu Harem if I want genuine top-tier waifu action. We're not even getting any good content out of the Hamlet MC's holed up in. We damn-well don't get any good apothecary anecdotal adventures. Author really needs to pick a lane and commit.
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Not really surface level given how frivolous DxD and this is with its setup & execution. Themes, pacing, character types, vague and entirely-translucent abilities...it takes a lot. And doesn't do much with it creatively.
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