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Not Important - 1756400188
Axe-kun strikes again, huh? No major loss, considering despite the comedy and harem antics, there wasn't a story that was going anywhere....
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Japan tends to announces celebrity & public deaths llater to give the close friends & family time to set arrangements and begin their private grieving.
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Not Important - 1753100104
"My mom used to work here."
"Imma fuck her coworkers."

Stellar logic, Watson.
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Not Important - 1753098038
"Our friends are in danger! Quick, let's waste all the time in the world fucking like rabbits!"
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Not Important - 1753097424
The gimmick for this is fucking awful. Not because of any offense, but because it's bloody-obvious the author is not going to put the time in to deal with the issues of children and rearing. Sometimes, mindless harem antics ain't the way to go.
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Not Important Chi Chi - 1752919489
There's no more information to provide. The story is structured in a weak variation of "the learning apprentice", a style of telling often in line with The Karate Kid or Rocky—protagonist has to achieve strength for some arbitrary reason and goes through a serious life change, sharpening their values as well as their body. And it doesn't do it well at all, because the author spends their time devising dry comedy and shallow gallows humor around the teacher, and none of it lands. There's numerous reasons for this, but the primary culprit is the author spent no time establishing who she is, what she's about, or what her mission entails in a way that will matter to the reader. What happens instead, is a wallowing in meta humor on RPG systems that don't even function in such a way (at least eastern titles—I suspect the inspirational source has more to do with western RPG styles).

She comes to the inn based on a rumor, she's put off entirely by the inn keeper's manner & behavior, she's introduced to a cheat of the world, and proceeds to be tortured repeatedly. In the space of four chapters, we only know her name, guess at her origin, and barely retain her objective. And then nothing else. Not if she's a kind individual, or a snobbish noble. Not if she has any active likes or dislikes. Not her personality—all of these take a back seat to the tsukkomi/boke dry execution between herself, and the meta-abusing psychopath who, in a bizarre bit of irony, isn't even training her correctly according to the tropes he should be engaging.

And sidebar to explain: Death states in most eastern RPGs are NOT necessary to "learn & grow* in those titles. In complete opposite of platformers, RPGs demand and encourage the player to take care in exploring, and try not to get you in over your head too often. And if they do, it's to teach you the gaming system or what areas to avoid until you can reliably overcome those challenges. Contrasted by platformers, where you DO actively learn from various deaths what not to do, what timing there is for a jump/run/slide/etc, what patterns enemy opponents have, and so on. Abuse of death as a learning/building mechanic fits the later far better than the former.

And so we have a girl main character who we can't be assed to care about, a strange teacher whose comedy routines aren't landing because they're about the wrong genre, some side characters who, as of ch 8, serve no other purpose than to acknowledge the teacher as sadistic and broken, and a setting that, like so many other isekai/fantasy/reincarnation stories, barely serves as more than simple window dressing.

tl;dr This is a no-calorie junk food waste of time and one is better off finding a story that has bite to it than this.
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Not Important - 1750036808
https://i.postimg.cc/hGZSnkZS/i.jpg
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Not Important - 1750033754
Cliche setup, character isn't even allowed to resolve or confront their own antagonistic force. Junk food fiction.
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Not Important - 1750031253
"Cute girl doing cute things in fantasy"

People writing these should be put to the wall.
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Not Important ORCHI - 1748251394
Read it yourself. It's no one else's job to test the water temperature for you.
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Have fun with that. I got Minecraft if I wanna build. Mermaids, elves, and demon girls need to either be lewd or lewded if they're on-screen. That's the rule.
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We all did, once upon a time....

https://i.postimg.cc/d1S9GTvh/i.jpg
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Because you're taking the plot seriously. You should probably not do that. The warning for that came with the first four or so chapters full of gratuitous sex and poorly-drawn violence.
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Not Important - 1746306718
The superior premise would be the goddess tries this bullshit, fails, fucks his life, and has to atone by not only humbly living out her life with him, but bear & continue his bloodline. Opposing pairs and a few dreams deferred are infinitely more interesting than Romance Harem Time Travel Tale #540
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