Cancel
Save avatar

Change avatar costs 20 points

Not Important
1495 points
531 Comment(s)
130 Upvote(s)
Not Important - 1714936484
"You aren't telling me to put all these in my ass or something, are you?"

https://i.postimg.cc/qvhwLL3Z/i.gif
KEEP HER
0
0
Not Important - 1714927197
Narrator: Happiness was not, in fact, waiting for them. Their neighbors declared war the very next year.
0
0
Not Important - 1714918408
Fine, I'll be the one to say it:

Okay great chapter see you guys next year for the next release
0
0
Not Important - 1714907818
I'm genuinely surprised anything in this chapter was confusing. The issue is simple: Amy is a sociopath. She sees every person in the world around her as meaningless NPCs, and is working toward the harem end where she's convinced she'll be pampered and pleasured for the rest of her life, despite the setting not genuinely supporting that in any way. She's taking the role that should by now be extremely familiar to readers, as this ain't the first rodeo that character type has been played.

The big theme and hook, is that she relates to MC in just that way. We are immediately told (and shown) MC cherishes his new mom, new guildmates, new life, new everything—his meta knowledge spurs him on to protect them and their city. In contrast, FeMC is selfish & manipulative, cherishing only herself and those that can bring her lasting joy, and won't care if the world around her burns down to achieve that.

Textbook linking of antagonistic themes. I applaud the author's effort.
1
0
Not Important - 1714906792
I wonder if it occurred to anyone that the simplest solution toward resolving the otome plot was not spend 8 years grinding in hell, but instead finding and immediately subduing the FeMC while she was still in the village to the point she was nothing but a hollow puppet that took care of the kids and house.

Guess that wouldn't have made for a good story, though.
0
0
Not Important - 1714875299
So...effectively, author penned a premise that was almost interesting, meandered for far too many chapters, lost readership. Axe-kun then forced a wrap-up, but author felt the premise was too good to give up and tried again....

...but this one also got Axe-kun'd? Am I putting this together correctly?
0
0
Not Important - 1714874301
- Read
-> Don't Read

There's better around than this.
0
0
Goosh Goosh. Definitely Goosh Goosh.
0
0
Not Important - 1714835883
Author avoids writing out the fantasy they harbored while being bullied in school challenge (IMPOSSIBLE)
0
0
Should be. It's Berserker's.

https://i.postimg.cc/KzCk8XbZ/i.jpg
1
0
Not Important - 1714834237
Also when was MC's birthday, again? Cause otherwise there's no R-18 material until 2 months after he rescues his sister.
0
0
Not Important - 1714834032
She said the quiet part loud as fuck and with her chest

https://i.postimg.cc/NMDf9WRh/i.jpg
0
0
I lived in your heart rent-free for ten seconds and you'll never get it back.

https://i.postimg.cc/Mp37RFbQ/i.jpg
2
1