Ice Guy and the Cool Female Colleague

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Your english is fine my dude. The only two things I can notice is you misspelled syndrome, and didn’t have an initial pronoun at the start of your second sentence(should be keep her in mystery).

snitches get stiches bitch.

Youtube comment sections can be some of the most toxic places in the world. You're a stronger man than I for venturing into them.

He TLs Dorei wo Choukyoushite Harem Tsukuru on this site, go read it (specifically his credit pages) and you'll see what I'm talking about.

you've been listening to Kyuukei a little too much there my dude.

Because the fight itself is gonna take at least a full chapter or two. They’re just setting things up for the show.

???? why the fuck would the guy who you fully know actually uses curses, attack you for doing the same? There's being naïve, but that's just plain stupid.https://i.postimg.cc/LXzKH3DS/i.png

dumbass about to get his shit rocked.

then just be okay with death.

True. Its just the fact that he’s supposed to represent us as a people on a global scale is kind of humiliating.

Also the most BS, but yes.

Yes. I don't think what I'm saying is coming across clearly. Im saying that the one from presumably Japan that is now possessing/reincarnated as Mana bullied the one that is now possessing/reincarnated as Lunaria before they both died/transferred into this world.

Or, if you’re talking about the problem of being American, it’s half because of the orange man and half because of all the CEO drama/corporate greed.

Biggest problem I typically see is sentence structure over spelling.
A there vs. they’re vs. their issue is nowhere near as frustrating to read as a poorly constructed sentence.
Cause when sentence you build this way like, I have a lot harder of a time wrapping my head around what was said.

Its because they're handsome.

if grammar was a problem here, you wouldn't even make the list of people who need to work on it.

I honestly feel like i should be at this point.

has it only been a week? the time dilation in this series is all over the place, built i could've sword its been a few months if not years since the war.