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Noissar
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Noissar - 1725515523
I want to say it: "goes fast". Tells its story without wasting panel after panel.

The most refreshing thing on this one for me is just the straight up lack of "filler" panels or chapters. The prime example of this was his first time leaving home after regressing, he made his intentions known to his Private Butler/Assistant, then we got a panel with directly relevant story purpose, and the next panel after that he was at his intended location.

Most if not all of MC's advantages are "knowledge from the future" that for me felt like it was done rather well. It is not just some random power boost or asset that he should not have known or have access to in such a life, excluding arguably the origin of his primary sword style that is the basis of his power. Even then everything is explained or has some kind of backstory.

For me this was (reading from chapter 1 - 45) really good. All the needed information was there. Everything was explained really well. It pulls hard on a few troupes but that is neither here nor there. If you do not like it you should know within like 5 chapters.
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Noissar Mangaguy - 1725513335
Oh man, yeah... that would have sucked the big one if they did! Even possibly just break the story's pace...They have magic and monsters but it still would just not feel right, the focus is more on "course correcting" his life.

I think a good point to help describe what I mean is: they do not even really do any 'travel' related story type things that are not... overtly relevant? We only say him preparing to 'run away from home' so we would know what his is doing and the scene change would not make sense without it. It just skips loads of travel related things and even the 'time skips' are just a few panels that give relevant points that may have generated confusion later on if not mentioned.

There is not an over abundance of "filler" panels . I do not even have any that come to mind and the things that do, most of them were actually funny - so I myself would not even count those.
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Noissar Hello - 1725499155
So that a regular villain cannot poison an arrow and shoot it super far away without Special Powers that would oust them near instantly and get them kill. My take on the topic, it is just that thing where 'if everyone is special; no one is special' bleeds into the content far too much or too soon - depending on content.

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Armors (battle/fighting) are mainly(?) to deflect weak or non true/accurate attacks.

Death by 1000 cuts is really a thing, any cut that bleeds drains a the very least a tiny bit of your life. That becomes more and more true the longer you bleed and the deeper the cut/stab.

The body is also highly "flexible" and rather resistant to crushing attacks IF the force is spread out across the body. Think of people surviving getting run over by cars...
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Noissar Arche - 1725428255
That is a WOW without a hint of mirth.

Actually it is kind of funny, is there even a comment that is Derogatory enough to describe turning your back on a person whom while kind of covertly LITERALLY STABED HIM FROM THE FRONT! That is some species does not survive level stuff right there.
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Noissar MKAZ - 1725427583
Explained it in a hopefully helpful way on the main comment, if you are interested in what he would actually gain.
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Noissar Arche - 1725427489
It was answered in an indirect way by User-6734959883. There is something that is there but not explicitly stated. If he Duels and wins then that solidifies that the Guild in the Trade Town has messed up huge, With an S class as the Guarantor The improper management regarding Kanandia can no longer be completely sidelined with some Black Hair Bigotry, him winning in a solidifies her injustice.

The true kicker though for benefits is his pride and reputation. All he needs are witnesses, what can they say? That he cheated right in front of an existing S rank, that she was a co-conspirator and would give up her reputation for some random guy that everyone was of the understanding that he was dragging the party down... or that the very same party that called him useless gets beaten or even cleanly wiped.

The benefits are actually massive. He just needs witnesses to spread the truth, a very hard, nigh impossible to refute truth. It actually would do them oh so DIRTY if he did not ask for anything, Just one spark of the rumor: "He did not ask for anything because he knew they would not be able to pay.". That is sending the dead horse to the butchers.
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Is there an Evil MC tag, actually that guy was going to murder what are effectively random people and children. Becoming asymmetrically below the waist wholly and completely deserved.
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Noissar Dat Folk - 1725423183
Human Nature really, Lazy writing is easy to put out. On the whole - expectations - make or break a story. Cheap story, plot so buggered up you almost want to drop it (but it just not THAT bad) and the content streams in steadily.

A "lazy" thing can make many mistakes and just roll on by as long as they do not mess up horrifically. A "good" story on the other hand, those things would never be forgiven, the have a higher bar that the HAVE to meet, there are just so many more things that they have to stress about. Worse off if the profit per page/chapter is about the same. Greedy corporations are going to take 50 lazy over 7 good, then you add in that if the last fails.... the effort was not really anything extreme in the first place...

As for why he did not use daggers, He was told his lot in life was a 'Potion User'. It is his GOD given roll in life, why question such a thing if not given a really good reason to question it? It is a very human thing that have that stripped out of us when we are children. "because I said so." invokes fury within my very being, especially when you learn that a lot of those things was based on bad knowledge.
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Noissar GuardOfEden - 1725421904
Absolutely true. For me personally the issue is just how common it is, obviously there is a lot that goes into it but the major factors Life Expectancy/Lifespan and the ability to maintain a healthy body really do not match(?) well?.

If the regular farmer in a given world has access to magical healing that can take care of fever and broken bones/mangled limbs ...a 60 year lifespan/expectancy does not hold water, if there is no constant fighting for survival it starts to make less sense.

The standards should align more with our present day if those two points are "easily" met.
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My innate bastard of a mind/heart wants to disagree, but I feel I know what ya mean lol. Got to stay positive!
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Noissar nate_higgers - 1725420213
Hit the character cap, actually had to trim it down.
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Noissar Quad - 1725420152
Depends on the system, I would think? For example if they have a Quota or Dues system that the Adventure's Guild manages that is paid monthly or is somehow built up over time, they could take the earnings of a standardised quest or a - like I mentioned a 'monthly fee' and bank that money for a solo adventurer or party.

The likely reasons the party would get compensated would be: in regards to a death - Healing for injuries, burial/ceremony for the dead, new contract (if they need to pay for such services), potential training costs.

As for the family part, not sure, but I am going to blindly lean towards parties generally being Honourable.

There was mention of him nuking their lives by (double checked) 'Suing' the party that attempted to kill him as: "killing one's comrades is forbidden".

I really am having a hard time with the whole "suing" business, but it basically said there was a pretty big chance he would fail because he would not be believed....


PLOT, that is the answer, good 'ol plot, and to possibly make the Party easier to hate? Because they know he has family and Tommy the leader made a point of not committing to sending the money to the family, which makes sense ....cause they were killing him for the money... the way the translation said it the party had control over the compensation. Messy things here.
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Noissar Truck~kun - 1725418671
That or Ka-Na-Dia? maybe sounds so similar... who knows, maybe the K is silent? lol
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Noissar elver galarga - 1725416729
So because a claim was made it is true? If you hold the opinion that I believe you do and confirmed it. Make no mistake, I would certainly call you a moron straight to your face.
To my understanding you (more or less) took one comment, from one side, then made up your opinion as if that statement was an objective fact and not a subjective one, and then you wrote as if that one thing is a justification for all that she did. I personally consider that as moronic, if that is what you truly meant to do.
The behaviour she displayed, and they way she acted were not the behaviours of a rational mind. She could have been left for dead instead of being taken in, and the general attitude the tribe showed would suggest that any form of "abuse" as suggested would have had to have been expertly hidden to the point no one in the tribe would have noticed/ was aware. (this can be a terrible generalisation as it is trying to compress several points into a usable framework)
Is it your intention to claim I bully and harass people, then act the victim? Prove it. I do not have anything hidden on this site as far as I am aware, find something that is not justified, my comments should be easily accessible to go through. What you wrote was from all I could discern and understand was ignorant (to me and my understanding you have given far too much importance to things that could be objectively true but are potentially not an actual "truth" while not giving proper allowance for the opposite to be a truth and/or true thing) , this is a second time (as I have explained I find what you said, once again, ignorant but I would discount this <the current instance/reply> because they were born more from emotion and misunderstand in the moment than that of pure, properly filtered logical communication ). I hope that you just got caught up in the moment and did not consider things too deeply in the that moment or perhaps became hyper focused on that one point and made a mistake as I would say that even if I did; I would not revoke what I said.
Maybe my words were too harsh; I do not believe so. I actually spent more than a full minute to make it that "tame". If you found my words hostile, you should have, they were. What you said was absolutely disgusting. if you meant it that way or not, that is how I recognised what you wrote and that is how I feel about what you did write and the way you wrote it. If you want further explanation why and how I came this conclusion, then please ask. A specific point put into a question would likely be best, if that is something you would like to do.
There is a chance that I was wrong, and if I am in the wrong then I will apologise for such. I just do not see how I am wrong in this specific issue. If you do think what you said was perfect then you should consider dismissing yourself for participating in making comments. No one is perfect, and English is a pretty terrible language its written form is especially bad.
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Noissar Dirtmask - 1725175343
This made me chuckle, cause I actually came to check these comments after having this sit at chapter 80 and false starting on reading it SEVERAL times over a long period of time (4 months).

it is just so mediocre across the board that its faults are like pushing a plate of food away when the food is not bad just excessively bland and there is a teeny tiny things that is bad but you just have to nope the whole plate after two bites. That is the kind of done I am with it, I'll put it on the shelf and see if I can be bother to ever come back to it.
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Noissar GhostBlood - 1725174170
I feel this comment, graphic might be too high though. lol

The left panel could almost fit in the 16bit category.
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Noissar elver galarga - 1725172266
That is suspect at best, it could be true or it could be that the Evil one was delusional and thought she deserved things she did not. Not enough information to make a hard judgement. She was not even a member of the specific race/species/tribe, she did not claim to be abused, the only thing truly known is she wanted the position and did not get it.

Murdering the mother and attempting to desecrate her body, because she did not get what wanted... you call that Karma... GROSS, get some help or dismiss yourself.
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Noissar Skay24 - 1725170884
Sorry to hear about the poor relationship you have with you family...
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People in the modern day are conditioned to obey in many ways. It is not just humans either Primates of many kinds are also like this; an "Alpha" can do many thing even ridiculous things as long as it does not cross the line, but when that line is crossed it is a death sentence. I think there was a documentary of Chimpanzees(?) that explained the behaviour, got a bad memory can not confirm.

I guess the point I am trying to get to is that, the average person does not want to lead or be a person of focus. So when another shows talent and likes the attention they will be pushed forward so others can stay unnoticed/hidden. Obviously there are more factors but this a huge thing with a large number of people that seem to become door mats to people with the 'enigmatic' thing call Charisma. I have known a few people that have an innate charisma, nearly all of them were walking garbage that had people bending backwards to please them...
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Noissar Geo Sky - 1725098019
Truth. The negativity we feel is near always greater than what is done to us, that is why it is a truly horrific thing and why a 3rd party is the closest to even one can generally hope for when settling a score in the name of 'Justice'.

Hard to feel bad when an abuser is abused.
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