I wish this would only catch my attention when there are just "boring" chapters to end on...

Please use the secret passage for your first visit, it is behind the thing that looks very much like a door.

Is it translation, segregation, life is so full of mystery!

Spot on, for some reason, likely I let this sit for too long, I just thought he was a pervert... or a strange mix of dirty fighter that is emotionless.

It really feels like the vibe of this one is completely set by chapter 3 or so. They do start a letter thing towards chapter ~15, do not personally care for it but serves its purpose well enough that complaining about it feels like a low IQ activity.

Good in a a funny/fun way if you synch with the vibe it has.

Yes, it does. Normally the chemical rush wears off after a time and they think things through IF they are smart. The reaction to run above all else (classic fight or flight), might be easier to understand as a biological reaction that exists on a similar level to the one where people whom see blood faint (near) instantly.

Extremely useful in overall species survival when everything is a predator (or just a gigantic Dinosaur). Not so much now in modern day now that nearly all that stuff has died and we actively try to keep most everything else that would qualify, alive. Humans have already killed most them off directly or destroyed the homes killing them indirectly.

Watched quite a few Roanoke Gaming videos on YouTube, He tends to reference the blood thing a fair bit and references the other parts on occasion. Helped my understanding a fair bit.

Two losers with opposite dynamics, that just go along with the other one's loser level activity. I feel like I should want them to mend their ways but IRL just has me wanting them permanently put down, just like the unforgivable tier scum that are protected in prisons around the world. Or worse released to offended again.

30 pages...I mean I like that they are not wasting massive amounts of time on repeating things, but these chapters are feeling so content light...

No one mentioned that Bro was cleaning that Rug with a Mop....

The sword spirts eye finally have pupils...

If everyone is dead, then there is no one to call for help or make a report... They would be relying on someone for the outside making contact.

There was actually a story about a guy Whom always ordered Dominos Pizza with clock work consistency, He stopped making his normally order. Dominos actually asked the Police to make a Welfare Check, the Guy was massively oversized and fell and broke his leg or something; but the key point is that he got stuck in his bathtub. If Dominos did not make that call out of concern he may not have gotten help, he was lucky in many ways. That was just something that went well, people sadly die all the time and no one knows until a lot of time passes.

Also 'the master sword sect' is the one that put out the kill list, so... reasons... I guess? But ya it does not really make sense, unless they all got wiped out in like less than 6-12 hours or something.

The thing he made with the heat block could actually be the whole answer. Just make it so that the heat/wind goes straight upwards then rig it with a lever that can redirect the flowing air into a wind turbine in varying amounts. This would make it so there is always downward force on the base unless it was going full throttle; which would likely be disabled from even being able to go full throttle by a hard stop on the adjustment level. Though piping in a forward facing vent/exhaust would also assist in braking.

the downward force would also help with braking by adding friction, good for a prototype / small set up but would have an increased wear and tear axels and other load baring parts.

I wrote all that and realised that the turbine is not even needed, just a big ol' lever that defaults the propelling force upwards and can be held down in a direction for feeding either forward or backward pipe. Cruise Control can be a rope that connects to hooks on the lever at varying points for varying speeds.

The chimera research is not happening in the school. They are at a fort in the woods that is at the very limits of the magic mirror [whatever that range is it was enough for them to go to the capital's shopping district] but the other key point is that the bad guys used horses to cover the distance to get there, the good guys flew in on a griffin. Not to say it is an extreme distance but they did use horses and are further from the school than the shopping area, enough so the copies went 'out of bounds' and got smoked by the ban hammer.

I get what people mean by giving up the Vampire Essence.

The regen is really great but the main thing that made it the next level [from what I was understanding] is that all the other factors that were supposed to keep him alive were severely lacking.

There is information that is 'withheld' and justified with his 'I beat the game' knowledge that makes things unknowable at this point but justifiable later... but another thing I think is a key factor before making a judgment is: being able to regenerate/revive from nothing but a heart - loses a lot of its appeal when the foes can maim your body into pieces in just a few moves; if that itself does not kill you then there is also the potentially high likelihood that what ever managed to that, would just eat the leftover heart and flesh anyways...

Though, writing this made me think: "What would happen if those Barbarian Heart Hunters did actually manage to get his heart when he had this Essence.".

His shining power up let his enemies see the light before sending them to it, other potential powers that could do that are light magic and flashbangs.

You would think that any and every organisation would have his portrait everywhere. Not only is he Royalty, he has been the Minister of Justice a few times, he has even executed an 'untouchable' minster at this point in the story...

I know they do not have internet, they have paper so newspapers might be a thing... but the is a invent the blender, then electricity, proceed to F*-- it, though the have Magic so they could possibly skip inventing electricity....

It really is a inherent problem with the writing, you were actually rather spot on with that. It is ends up as a two-fold [time sensitive] issue really. The first one is because we do not have the full product we have to wait for releases and that can degrade our ability to follow along with the story with the wait in-between and potential 'cross contamination' from reading other stories.

I really want to compare it to a Cliff-hanger, it is a plot/story point(s) that do not get defined/explained in the moment; you have to wait if you want to know and when you have to wait a chunk of time and are not just clicking next, it multiples the annoyance/load on your brain to remember non key details as if they were important. That issue can almost disappear if you bulk read, but that is only viable if you are able to wither remember everything prior or just do not care enough for it to matter.

That really is the kicker though, even if it is frustrating the "problem" only exists until that portion of the story is done. So even if it is wrapped up neatly in the end, in the moment you have to go full detective to properly understand what is going on while the MC flashing about like they are teleporting and you were only given half a thought as to why... but again the solution to the problem is the 'next button'...

It is more or less the reason I will only really bulk read this story, and a number of others.

They skip over the travel a whole bunch, apparently far too much. The distance he has to travel is not small, it is not a distance expected to be done in a days time. The first City (if I remember correctly) is relatively close, even if it was not he needs resources (clothes, money, etc.). His Niece also needs training in manners, also it would be foolish to leave her in reach of the deranged Shaman. It is a secure and most importantly safe location for her to stay.

There was no "finding out he has to travel to another city". They already pointed out that the Saint has the power to purge the plague, so assuming troupes - there would be a 'Holy item' that could act as a cure, that he would know exist(ed) from his previous life. There is just no guarantee that the item in question would be available/on hand; how would he know even where it was stored or if it was stored/ready somewhere. [This is likely a nitpick, but he actually started a pandemic, fabricate would kinda imply it was not actually real. He did things that would make actual people actually sick.]

This is in addition to the information that this 'Holy' city is heavily fortified as shown by the strict entry procedures, mentioning of the heavy enforcement on doctrine within the city itself. It should be safe to assume that without creating an opening or inducing the production of the product he needs there would be a lot of excess time and work to steal the product locked up who knows where, than it would require to spread a plague that he already had access to and grab it from just about anywhere when it floods the streets (or the Holy workers start preforming active production that is far easier to investigate).

Lastly (I think my memory fails me a bit here, if it was ever mentioned), by framing the other families and inciting conflict between them. He is weakening their powers so he can more easily fight corruption or something, ya know standard: MC = Good Guy, Everyone Else = Not MC.

They did him dirty with the Handgun even if he is supposed to have the "bodyguard" vibe, possibly his power is too weak for rifles. I just think a .50 Cal bullet rain would have have made him could off as less of a weak A$$ punk, come on gotta get with the times.

Think of how it would have looked if it was tank busting Sniper Rifles, or something that should only reasonably expected to been seen mounted in/on a gun emplacement.

This is more like a child playing cops and robbers than it is fighting back monster annihilation... this is the same vibe as me saying I am Godzilla's heroic bodyguard and they could do nothing without me.

That is actually more or less what I meant by idiocy and apathy. Your Enlistment likely would have felt a lot different if those people were properly taken care of with good opportunities so that they did not turn out like that; if they failed those opportunities then Exile should have been the most positive outcome they could expect [excluding any obvious exceptions that may exist]. Criminals are treated far too well and current life in general would be much better without them, making it so people would not need to do those things and removing those that willingly/joyfully harm other would be good. The unity is supposed to come from pride in serving with your fellow countrymen, but how can you have pride in unity with criminals that ruin your country when you are a good person that they ruin it for.

MRI availability would still fall under Apathy I would argue. It should be standard practice worldwide that Hospitals are built within one bus stop distance from a train station. It is not a perfect solution but I feel it would make it far more reasonable for the average person. Ideally every hospital should have one, so it it would lean towards Apathy that the do not. On the other hand it is Idiocy that Hospitals are not easily accessible {where I live parking is a needless challenge/expense}.

It really is good to have things that 'Unify' a population... but idiocy and/or apathy can be truly terrifying...