The story is kinda fast, but I know what you mean... I feel like I put this down over a year ago and came back to like 2 chapters. I think a big part of it is that a chapter ends and even if something gets solved in it there is just a cliff-hanger that leaves you going: wtf is that about. Then when the next one drops so long after... it is just like "yeah, ok".

Really fails to hit on any meaningful mystery type aspects for me. Ends up being more 'lack of info' than 'building suspense'.

It is good to see a Villain die, but I can not help but just sit here and say: "Finally." 

lol, thanks for the UP vote very kind of you. Though I can not really be upset about the downvote, what I mean is: in the end is that not exactly what was described? Person just kinda outed themselves...It really ends up like: Tell me you are a emotional self saboteur, without saying you are a emotional self saboteur. 
- I just wish everyone well.

Yeah, Sometimes people can just be down on their luck and need a kick in the rear to get back into the right mindset. It is nice to see that in a story, better that they did not become some no brained followers...

This is what happens when you get blackout drunk on depression while double fisting some self doubt/loathing. Basically drowned in the De-nial river but did not die. Far too many bad brain chemicals, needs to take a hit of Jet and go off the rails.

Gotta put this one into storage till there is a stock of chapters. Hits a lot of good point, in the right ways, but is WAY!!! too short!

Expecting? No...
Surprised? Also No...

You are both right and wrong, let me ruin your view of people a little more.

You ever see a dog on a leash run around this way and that, get tangled up in said leash then proceed to have a freak out? Ever see a dog do that day after day, how about a few times within a short period of time?

You ever see a person walk into a table in their own home more than once, how about stub their toes on the same piece of furniture as a near daily affair? Ever know someone that complains about something but instead of just taking some steps to fix it or putting in the effort for it to not be a problem... they leave the problem there and act like the world is against them.

If vomit did not taste awful to humans do you not think there are some that would do as dogs do? 

That is hilarious!

[Dear Diary: I have done the lords work today.]

They do have tie down straps or a system of cables and hooks to keep them locked down... but Yeah... what it would take to impale the mood should have just made them stop existing...

Worst offenders are those Helis though...

Yeah... took a few hours for that one to click for me. Was a bit of a mess before they added in the Red Exclamation Point error like icon. Though I have noticed how the new point system has really killed the amount of likes on posts...

This is too on point, well done.

I am not sure why but I will support your hopes in this.

If he does get trapped, I feel like he will break out one way or another because: 'Sister'. I just do not see him leaving her on her own for 10 years.

Watch that shirt not even fray at the seams.

After Elves and Dwarves, I can not find it in me to be surprised. Predictions on the next type if there is one?A Cait Sith may have been cooler to a degree but I find them too off putting with the amount of times they have been depicted as too cute and adorable or massive Edgelords. 

It would absolutely suck in many ways. Though in reality it is actually not that big of a deal outside of cosmetic reasons. For daily life stuff you would just need to adjust and form some habits with depth perception and likely a few other things. Outside of things like sword fighting and the like that require awareness of attacks from both sides, other things like crafting jewelry or detail oriented task really only require one eye. Modern day examples would be using a microscope, reading/writing/typing, painting ...I am actually having a hard time thinking of anything that has a mandatory two eyes kind of limit outside of sports like activities?

It upsets me how deeply I align with this rabbit. I wonder if there will be another one in the next batch of siblings.

Sadly.... it actually does make sense. 
At the very end he had the life that rebirth would have gave him, he just worked for it all, instead of having easy mode throw it in his lap.
He caught some feelings along the way. People that would give their lives for him - I imagine that would be one real dozy of a connection to have.

It is just and ending with out the finality of a permanent ending. (Even if he killed the super Evil Villain and saved the world with sacrificing the "Ultimate Reward") It basically ended with him shifting into "normal mode" without a reason to constant try to have his life ended by proxy. That basically cleared the meaning of the title, Kind of rare that the Author was so on point from my personal experience.

This is really just a twisted story of failing upwards... I almost want to root for his death, but at this point it feels like dying and getting immortality would actually take longer.