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Cookie Muncher
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Cookie Muncher - 1736798943
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it was hinted that farming dungeon is what caused the destruction of the world. as time goes on, dungeon resources are continually being taken out but monsters also get stronger. Based on that MC wants to close dungeons instead of collecting resources
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Cookie Muncher - 1736791965
<Midknight> who blocked me
Guess this guy realllllly just wants half the arc being the mc walking from point A to point B between each rescue huh? Maybe we should watch a debreifing circle too so that mc can continuously waste half a chapter to explain where they are going. Lets not forget like 6 frames to restock ammo. Or maybe we should see like 3-5 frames after every battle to watch mc put steel in his "furnace".

Tf you mean disjointed. How long do you intend the same scenes to be shown with slightly different words. It just gave us perfect insertion. Kids run away to escape, get kidnapped, mc "chances" upon them, as she passed out she asked to save her friends. What do you want? Another scene where mc deduces she came from the school with little evidence to show he came from the future? How else can it be disjointed? MC knows the major events and stops them. Do we need to have a layout of his plans before we see? It's obvious MC will set out to resolve major incidents and kill key villains.

To me it seems like a smooth transition to hold mystery to bring up planning later in flashback once all the pieces are in place to not give up the surprise (although its done too often I feel)
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Cookie Muncher Noissar - 1736789855
Honestly it doesn't make sense english wise.

Deterioration would be the breakdown of something
Erosion is the change of something while deteriorating physically.
Corrosion is the change of something while deteriorating chemically


Deterioration. Erosion would be like how paint chips over time or how wood rots
Erosion. Corrosion would be how metal turns to rust
Both breakdown but erosion corrosion changes fundamentally

Your analysis was correct, but translation still got it backwards inefficient. Its erosion corrosion because its the process of an area deteriorating, eventually turning into a corrupted zone.

Edit: Was thinking corrosion vs erosion and mixed them up. In this case, deterioration would make a better word, but the best word would be corrosion. Used bold for changes; used strikethrough for errors
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i mean coming in to support in the dire situation itself is a sketchy situation (not talking about just before they were attacked). Of course its not reason enough to avoid, but even arms dealers support both sides of a war. Sensitive information like active operation bases, weapon R&D, personnel, ect should all be highly controlled.
Reasons to invest
• keeps the group together
• know general operation area
• know general plan
• have general number of troops
• understanding of assets (if funding that was relied on is sliced at inopportune moment [especially when counted on])
• counter-intelligence (supplying fake info, real info that's been prepared for, or obtaining info on the group itself)
Ect

Its not like wasting a bit of money or resources lacks merit. Companies even today spend millions for this kind of benefit to keep themselves ahead. So just by being a "supporter" doesn't translate to ally unless they put skin in the game (at that point in time you didn't survive unless you were strong)

Although its not exactly proof, its enough for someone to reasonably doubt an investor of no matter how long
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Cookie Muncher - 1736755359
Villain: you cheated....
Sword Saint: Says the guy who launches a surprise attack of undead while buffing undead, nerfing holy power, and still refuse to come out of the mist for a straight attack
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priest bro is closer to assassin. His primary is stealth w 2nd sniper. He clearly abandoned 1st team, ratted out guild sensitive info, hindered rescue squad, exposed rescue squad just to escape. In what apocalypse type world does he deserve to be spared
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Cookie Muncher Jesse-D - 1736749035
thief - quickly realizes expensive and important objects with a desire to steal them
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nah necromancer isn't resurrected yet. More than likely "villains" that are contracted via the system are the subordinates of the "high tier" villains. Villains may possibly be able to open gates as a way to free the contractor. But who knows at this point
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Cookie Muncher Anubis - 1736733161
let's not forget that it's actually coming from this guy and mc is lifting 50kg without counting the bars weight (even though an Olympic bar weighs 45lbs or standard bar weighing 20lbs) vs 2.5kg
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i mean he did stall when thinking about the damage assessment report... He was probably thinking of killing him for fucking up his plan
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Cookie Muncher - 1736731319
read through all the comments but failed to see 1 mention how an F rank got the nickname Great Steel Emperor
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I mean a curse is a curse. He was probably born as a sword god, so no matter how good it is the curse will fuck enemies up, he could do it himself if he wasn't restrained
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dont think so... When she first spotted our little dragon, it was during the daytime (although the hood was up)... Which caused the secluded visit as mc was about to stop taking applications at night
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Cookie Muncher Gakuku - 1736727299
Fixing depression is learning to let go of the problems that bother you and changing the state of your mind. It's hard but can be done... This is part of the safe space problem too. An over reliance on meds instead of learning to cope with issues (my opinion)
And i just really like cookies lol... The real ones
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lets be real here the reason why some aspects aren't used is because they are too overpowering. Its like a story limiter.
Time
offense - just go and kill stuff at creation, ff to death, rw until its unborn
Defense - put self in separate time space in same dimension
Space
offense - put space between body creating a split, absorb and compress (black hole), control space to always hit with attacks
Defense - put infinite space between yourself and attacker
Utility - space storage, teleportation

Ultimate expressions of some things are story breaking and have a lack of counter which is why they are directly not included. Elements usually have counters which is why they are used. Light is usually considered a non attacking force (unless the energy is depicted as heat vs refraction of colors). In a dark vs light senario, light can be used to amplify or weaken darkness as light creates darkness, and a lack of darkness births light. Dark is usually referred to shadow manipulation, whether controlling others shadows, stopping movements, or blending in. Light on the other hand exposes the dark, removes the corrupt dark energy, and travels at high speeds.

All in all its not other elements can't be used, but are predictable or become too overpowered in a step chart. Only by using an "unattached element" can it make for an interesting storyline. Attacking isn't used with light so we get darkness. 54 stories later its boring
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Cookie Muncher yilo - 1736710053
well... The elf was subdued by the pack of orcs, which he could easily beat. She knows Sarante, which is at least a connection to him. Sarante helped mc with curse. Without seeing the engravings, it'd be hard to piece together she's an enemy. Especially because Sarante claimed people "lost their faith" not betrayed him. This is his fault for concealing info even after mc revealed their existence himself.
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Cookie Muncher Gakuku - 1736708161
i used to be prescribed for depression until i got sick of their nonsensical run around game. But i have friends who have been prescribed within dosage. And mdma is easy to make; was a science nerd in school (did AP Chemistry), so combining chemicals is a breeze. It's not like I'm a dealer or user, but the point was some drugs are just as easy to get but aren't as big a problem because school kids aren't interested in the knowledge. But drugs are a huge topic that is like a rabbit hole.
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it was mentioned that aura is learned through grueling life threatening experiences... Idk about mages but it holds true for swordsmen. For mages maybe critical thinking and creativity is better developed under duress? At least experience in a real fight is better against measured stronger opponents.
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Cookie Muncher Segan - 1736658480
Its that person that was at that place and did stuff.... Yeah... You remember? It was that one time with the thing and it happened after we saw that other guy. The only other way i can describe it is it occurred at the school

Don't you hate it when ppl describe like this?
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Based on current progress you can see they target mythical/fantastical beasts. For what purpose is unknown. It was mentioned they will kill any though. The main point is they will kill and kidnap as well. Just human trafficking and murder is enough to make them a criminal organization where any recognized affiliate is considered a wanted individual.

So is it really necessary to list a mobs crimes? You'd end up with a list a mile long without including what every law is. For example: Is it necessary to list the difference between killing demi-humans and humans. What about where a slave fits in the equation. How many years for each? What is defined as a criminal sentence? Whats the criminal process like? What does a prison sentence constitute if there is one? This is just the questions for 1 of the aspects they do.

Most people don't need this kind of world building unless the story revolves around these. So far out of the 2 times they've come up, they attempted to murder while they were targeting fantastical beasts. Good enough to draw the conclusion they are "bad people". Unless you want a whole chapter to go in depth pointlessly, the same thing can be achieved by periodic mentions as mc comes across them doing crimes.
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