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Cookie Muncher
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it's been about 9 months since the platform changed... Ik this. It's not reaching out but to continue the conversation on a new thread
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Cookie Muncher - 1722357969
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The problem with your paragraph is that
• The person who caused the trouble is a military soldier
• even if the soldier was found to be guilty by the bureaucrat (as they would investigate their own territories) no order would ever be found
• even if there was evidence, the involved parties would make sure to cover it up as that's what most nobility do (can't allow nobility to be disgraced)
• given the lack of evidence to connections, killing a noble would only make him an enemy of the entire kingdom vs one territory
• if he refused to become the lapdog of some noble (like before), then even if evidence is found to prove his innocence, they'd just bury it to get rid of a nail that sticks out
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it depends on far i am from the gun. ½m-100m is hard to dodge, but outside that range, you'd be shocked at how easy it is to dodge
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Cookie Muncher Segan - 1722350683
the author had reasonable ways to make the characters grow (change) when setting the outline of the story. It's more that s/he didn't want to have a MC development and focused on the development of the side characters.
My point was: to do all this work raising a side character, why would they kill them off at the first real conflict?
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Cookie Muncher - 1722349724
So far a child could write a better story
Chapter 1
• My dad sucks
• I inherited money and became a NEET
• I got sucked into a video game
Chapter 2
• I'm somewhere I don't know
• Recall that my dad sucks
• realize I'm in the video game
Chapter 3
• I need to lie to survive
• Now that I know I'm in a video game I'll use its skills
• keep moving slowly and use skills to plot an escape
248 pages later - Chapter 4
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Cookie Muncher - 1722317431
time to rat out the location of #1 demon lord
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Cookie Muncher - 1722314313
its a fucking roach
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Cookie Muncher - 1722311038
A warm welcome... Pshhhh its going to be a cold shoulder
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Cookie Muncher - 1722303955
I always hate how they say knowing more doesn't help you
Everything I've read always gives milestones for perfect ascension and without hitting those milestones, it cause the future ascension to have a lower chance or impossible
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Cookie Muncher - 1722285037
This is TOATALLY where I parked my car
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Cookie Muncher - 1722275196
ummm. there's a thing called supply and... you know what? I'm just gonna retard this logic
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Cookie Muncher - 1722218330
What's the use of more money when he already has an unlimited black card lul
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Cookie Muncher - 1722215867
Monster Trainer vs Murim analogy

level = steps between realms (1-9 of each realm usually)
tier = cultivation realm (bone forging, transcendent, ect)
grade = (average, excellent, extraordinary, zenith {peak})
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Cookie Muncher - 1722208911
<HiddenHand> tryna be funny over here but forgot to add a "0"
20 = 8 year

200 = 80 ≠ 2000 credits
2000 = 800 years
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I'm back to reread the novel again

why does wang shu look like a cross between trump & napolean with ball hairs on his chin
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for sure
• how can police have time to investigate
• literally self defense
• dude was obviously just going to keep after him if spared...

Fuck this story
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I'm more thinking it was to comfort but once you get further into it you are right
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I'd have to disagree. It's not like he lacks consideration for morals but rather he considers the least despicable action for progression.
Immorality would be when someone purposely goes against the general consensus of morals ethics or practices where amoral would be when someone doesn't understand morals
A forced decision will have anyone pick a lesser evil to live (unless psycho). To say you wouldn't only means you've never been in danger 😉
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