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Ballsdeep69
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Ballsdeep69 - 1725868480
This series feels like I'm just watching the cutscenes between gameplay of a fantasy game, like a lot of stuff's happening but also it feels like nothing ever happens, while also constantly feeling like I'm missing just a little bit of context for everything..
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It's making me think of steins gate,
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Ballsdeep69 - 1725867863
At first it seems absolutely aimless with a main character with very little motivation, ambition, charm, intelligence, perseverance... he's kind of a leaf in the wind, but it gets a bit focused after that. Not much more focused mind you, but technically more focused. The setting of The plot could perhaps be a bit clearer (I'm never 100% on if he's in a game he's played or if he's just making guesses,) and the emotional stakes confound me because he goes from not giving a s*** about the stuff in the game and wanting to leave to carrying immensely about the stuff in the game back and forth through several lives with the only real justification for that being that he gets the memories of the life but how that manifest is him just becoming that character like 90% of the way with no real input from Korean him other than the occasional flash of "maybe I'll do this instead." Before deciding to just...not. off screen. During a time skip. It never goes into enough detail or emotional depth for me to care about any of these characters at least up to chapter 12 where I quit. It has this tendency to just have a Time skip anytime they're supposed to have characters get closer instead of actually showing them getting closer, just a lot of "a couple weeks past and we got close", " it's been a year since I got here and I'm familiar with everyone" " a month passed and I just want to be happy with Lena", it's got real strong Last Airbender "they became fast Friends" energy. And the female lead is not particularly dynamic or interesting so far, I'd give it points for an interesting concept but I value execution far more. This feels like if someone tried to write re:zero but they're a slightly worse writer so they just can't get their point across and can't get the emotional weight to have any heft.
It feels like watching the cutscenes for a semi interesting jrpg that never got a sequel that has some really cool gameplay concepts but I never get to see any of the game play so every cut scene feels like it's missing just a little bit of context. 5-6/10 if it gets its footing at some point past where I quit I'd rate higher but right now this is all I can give it.
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Ballsdeep69 - 1725867566
I'm fine losing this life it was kind of a burner, I just hope next time he can get any indication as to what he's supposed to be doing or wants to do cuz so far it just seems like he's just doing whatever the character wants to do.
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Ballsdeep69 - 1725867327
So has he played this game before and knows this storyline or is he just making educated guesses? I am so genuinely unsure. Also so help me God if he fucks his sister in this life I'm going to be done with this man, cuz that would have made three lives where instead of actually trying any strategies or figuring things out or trying to make moves, he just followed his dick.
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Ballsdeep69 - 1725866968
I really hope a plot starts to happen because this kind of feels like this man is just getting dragged around while making as few choices about his life as possible, which is probably thematically significant but is not particularly entertaining at the moment.
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Ballsdeep69 - 1725866688
I am consistently confused on what he does or doesn't know, as well as his mental state, cuz it really seems like at the start of every life he has a mix of his real life memories and the characters memory but within a month he's like 90% the character, like his whole goal this time was to not get attached to her yet he's still immediately got attached to her. And it probably isn't helping that they keep having nebulous time skips of a couple months to a year.
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Ballsdeep69 - 1725866067
This man went native way too fast, didn't second guess himself or nothing.
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Ballsdeep69 - 1725817013
"I'll be at you to death with my broken hands to prove how weak we both are"
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Ballsdeep69 Lamer5799 - 1725767759
https://i.postimg.cc/GhvPRpvM/i.jpg
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Ballsdeep69 - 1725767718
Damn! all caught up.
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Ballsdeep69 - 1725766320
https://i.postimg.cc/7hKbXgSt/i.jpg
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Ballsdeep69 - 1725765331
Oh so this is going to be more of an odyssey, I'm game. It's also funny if you consider that guy made three separate mistakes that stacked. he helped out a murderer without knowing who he was, which wouldn't have been a problem if you didn't decide to snitch on Said murderer after helping him out, what's that mean and he didn't use his family heirloom to save his people he waited until they were all dead or dying.
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Ballsdeep69 - 1725764205
The horse is named tachyon? Does it travel through time?
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It's like someone tried to make Bulma from Dragon Ball again, but forgot that bulma was both useful and humbled constantly by the situations she got put in.
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Ballsdeep69 - 1725763495
Interesting vibe so far, I do not like the chick her behavior is erratic - she seems a little selfish - and she continuously ignores others.
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Ballsdeep69 - 1725730038
I feel bad for baek ryeonha because I definitely prefer her amongst the three choices, but I feel almost certain at this point that she does not have much of a chance.
Also it's way too late for you homie dad's already on the way.
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it's more setup for what comes after the blast/ that man fight, odds are after one or two more chapters of this it will cut back to that fight either in development or at it's conclusion. like how the martial arts tournament arc was all there to setup monster cells and the existence of the monster association while bouncing to various hereos in conflict and garou in development, reading it chapter by chapter it does feel worse though.
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while offscreening is when a character gets their ass beat offscreen(off camera, unseen but otherwise acknowledged event), the reverse is for someone to Beat Ass offscreen, a notable recent example of this is the character Shanks from one piece defeating a notable Pirate crew that rivals the main character's own, offscreen. no clue what character he is saying had that fate though.
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it's General Kyoukai.
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