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Seraph
336 points
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171 Comment(s)
198 Upvote(s)
Seraph User-4114662197 - 1763430458
I read the other chapters and the characters suck. The author just treats them as puppets to create the typical wish fulfillment revenge fantasy slop. It isn't bad because it's depressing, it's bad because it abuses your emotions, rubbing ntr in your face to make you angry and switching to romance and friendship to make you feel happy and vindicated. The romance is forced af and none of the characters act like sane people, but since it feels good you get tricked into thinking that the writing is good. There are way better mangas about romance and bullying, hell there's ntr hentai out there with better characters than this
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Seraph Do Exist - 1762764606
That sounds about right.

other "players" get introduced later on and he still wipes them out without getting stuck on morals.
I don't think the author cares about his backstory at all, it was just a convenience so that he could use "game knowledge" to explain MC's choices and leave a door open for relationships, like with jelly and future companions
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Seraph - 1756076179
https://i.postimg.cc/QMFXVt4w/i.jpg
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Seraph Red Crow - 1753567025
Have you read knights of sidonia? The author is into a lot of weird stuff
https://i.postimg.cc/s2DvmwKs/i.png
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Seraph ILOVECUNNY - 1749095215
Why would you want to read a story about a girl who is internally a man instead of an actual girl lmao
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Seraph - 1748915309
Spooky
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Seraph Glass of Juice - 1748319354
Hey I'm not sure what else you would call the first half of the chapter being hentai. The only manga that managed to do something like that and redeem itself imo was team medical dragon.
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Seraph - 1746767714
What??
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Seraph - 1746598049
Lmao @ the collar, what's the deal with Ena?
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Seraph alligator - 1746243501
Idk the age gap seemed bigger in the flashback
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You knew what to expect from the cover art tbh
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Seraph Red Crow - 1745822021
He is but at least he isn't actively making things worse.
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Seraph HateMe - 1745707098
Maybe this says more about me than the manga but I can't relate to that kind of story tbh. Also it really makes EVERYTHING lemon's fault, and it took way too long for her to try to explain things to him, although now MC is also trying to avoid talking about it 🙄
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Seraph User-8520969107 - 1745101754
No it isn't, these characters are morons
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Seraph Red Crow - 1743900819
It's weird, it's like the author retconned his reaction. The dialogue is the same as this panel from chapter 1
https://i.postimg.cc/d03XdS98/i.png
but now he's not visible while speaking and he doesn't have exclamation points, so it doesn't seem like he's emotional at all.
Anyway this whole situation has become more nonsensical as the author introduced more details, it's clear MC knows there is something going on with lemon and it makes no sense for him to take the breakup the way he did. Lemon's behavior was also stupid, but at least you could have anticipated that from the beginning.
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Seraph - 1741549444
💀 this manga is insane
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