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In other words, he was a hermit first.
Not to mention that the transitions from one event to another are a bit haphazard.
The Veterinarian Aspects seem almost an afterthought, and while the details aren't bad, due to the previously mentioned issues, it makes them a bit hard to follow...and I normally have a high reading comprehension rate, so if I am noticing it, it's probably not going to go unnoticed by others, even if they're not aware of what the issue is.
Next, I clearly stated that my commentary was on the "Inital" Premise, which logically means that it's not the whole story, as you have clearly assumed I was commenting on... Despite the fact that I clearly stated what I was commenting on directly was the first two chapters.
Your reading comprehension score is at an entirely arbitrary 3 out of 10 so far. 🤣
Translation:3
Art:2
Two chapters read... Very little setup, relies on back story exposition, and has less than ideal pacing and exposition
Sounds like a good premise, but it's a bit different from the one on the home page.
Intial Premis: middle school PE instructor gets offered a spare account by a student after showing interest in the game they were talking about, because it gave him a way to compete with others without causing harm, and therefore not violating the precepts of his martial arts instructor and father(?) that prevented him from competing with others. Unfortunately that spare account was already setup as a mage class, and therefore wasn't what the MC wanted.
MC gets in a tussle and wins in chapter two... No wonder I haven't read it in a while, and had forgotten I had already read some of it. The pacing/story telling style, is definitely sub part.
As nothing here is dated more recently then "2 years ago" I'll ignore the trash talk, give it a go, and then report back after reading as far as possible.
Will it be good, will it be bad... Or Along the lines as one said "MI-MI-MI-MIIIDDD!"
The following are the criteria I'll comment on later
Plot
Translation
Art
And the scale. Will be the following four integers
0 - they did something, but that's it
1 - passable, but nothing special
2 - not bad
3 - a reasonable way to pass time