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aFFi - 1732307638
This is so nonsensical.
They never asked for the money, as it wasn't a debt, but an investment.
So you can't compound the interests, which would be the only way to get to this amount.

So, let's say the village is 100 years old, to be generous, that's a 100% interest rate annually. And the village isn't 100 yo, the old dude was clearly present when it was created.
No contract, no initial arrangement, no proof, nothing.
Also, it was clearly stated that the investment gives access to part of the profit, not the whole shebang.

I'm wondering what would be the consequences if the village defaulted on the debt... like, violence? If so, and if I was the MC, I would probably instill fear so that they don't get any funny ideas...

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aFFi - 1732271495
Hey guys, just a quick question, I'm kinda confused, maybe I'm mixing some of the VR Manwha I read.

They make money playing this game, right?
Like, a fairly big amount, if I'm not mistaken.

So why is the MC still acting like he's poor?
He is the biggest streamer on the most popular game, right? He should be swimming in money by now, no?

Did I miss or forget something?!?
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aFFi TheImage - 1732080781
I really hope he doesn't bring nukes to this world.
That would make the witches quickly obsolete for war, energy, warmth, light, some medical applications, ... and the implication of nuclear warfare isn't really a good thing.

Also, uranium or plutonium aren't really found in big chunks like shown in this chapter, at least not on Earth's surface.
Copper would burn green...
Aluminium would be pretty good for the future, tungsten too... or titanium, but they have nothing to do with green.
Coal, copper, aluminium and steel are probably the best things one could find to induce an industrial revolution, I think... but I can't remember what type of materials the MC is already using.

I'm guessing the green is actually the witch's powers.
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aFFi - 1732022210
What's the point of the rules and the system if the constellations can just willy nilly invade and ignore it all...
I hope next chapter shows that constellation getting kicked out by the system... if not, the rules of this world are just... shit.

Don't establish rules in your fictional world if you then go and ignore them for the most insipid reason...
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aFFi - 1732018311
This was utterly useless.
A chapter full of only teaser, cliffhanger and probably situations that "aren't what they seem to be"...
What a waste of time.
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aFFi Knight Zornnah - 1731902762
The author (Liz Takayama) is actually not a doctor.
She apparently consult heavily with actual doctors tho. No official information about said doctors were made public, but there's rumors that it could be the whole Tokyo U Hospital...

I think that's one of the things that makes this story incredible, and above the rest of the medical manga/manwha.
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aFFi - 1731500942
Oh.
Good.
I was upset when the MC just let the girl die, but they've acknowledged the mistake. Turning the mistake into characters development.
That's new.
I like this.
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aFFi - 1731183088
I love Her Majesty so much.
She really is Lloyd's only equal/superior.

Now, I really want to see Her reaction once his curse of ugliness is dispelled one day. She judged him only by his merits, skills, intentions and devotion up till now. It would be fun if it's revealed that he is actually fairly good looking without the curse.
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aFFi Pegit Purple - 1731180607
They have a bad or newbie TS (Volt), I'm guessing, and he has trouble reading the TL note maybe?
What's for sure is that their QC (Dinger) is really bad at his job. Seeing the credits, that was actually his only job...
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aFFi Emu - 1730937796
He's not just that anymore.
He's the Swords-master of the Kingdom now.
His status should be pretty much the same as the Mage's now.
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aFFi - 1730908991
But how?!?
How broken your mind must be to think that ruining that girl makes you the automatic winner...
I mean, wouldn't that make the MC even more pissed, and make sure he focuses 100% of his wrath solely on you?

How is that winning?!?
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aFFi Emu - 1730907418
Well, no.
The said Royalty already attempted to kill him and other nobles of his country, not by following protocol and tradition, but by assassination.
Yeah, killing that mage would create issues, but the MC has enough reason to kill him legitimately, and ultimately, that would create less problems.

Breaking the propriety, using power and violence to threaten and inflict fear on the mage, and verbally menacing him in front of witnesses isn't something that would be acceptable either, and would probably lead to war anyways.
If war is bound to happen either ways, killing the most destructing weapon, best strategist and also the General of the enemy's army would be a pretty good move, actually.
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aFFi - 1730835592
Soooo, the supposed hero just let someone who tried to directly kill his father...
Someone who has mind-controlled multiple woman and is effectively graping them all the time.
A tyrant who kills and steals and grapes and destroy.

What a wonderful hero he is.

It's like the trolley problem, but on the side where the trolley is originally going, there's thousands of people, on the other side there's only one person, and that's actually Hitler.
Inaction can become the worst evil.
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aFFi DandyOppai - 1730638837
I'm not saying I gave up, I just thought this was a pack full of missed opportunities.
But tell me, do you think the fight we just saw would have been any different, at all, if it happened before his training montage? No, it would have been the exact same.
Which make me wonder, what was the point of that training then? What in the world convinced the super strong tribe to give the MC magic deus ex blood after this pitiful display of cockiness and weakness?

I'm just sad about the missed opportunities, not the whole story. It's not ruined for me yet.

Now, if the magic blood makes the MC so strong that all the training we went through becomes meaningless, that would piss me off a bit...
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aFFi od Bandit - 1730638510
Well, you're right that the opponent wasn't the weakest, but he is definitely not strong in the tribe.
They don't order THE BATTLE KINGS by strength... but ordinary brothers and sisters are definitely weaker. But you're right that he is not the weakest because they mentioned that the first Battle King doesn't like the MC, and would chose a tough opponent...

I wasn't expecting him to flat out win, but at least struggle a bit. He not only couldn't do shit, he wasn't even able to comprehend what was happening..
They've shown us months of hard training and character development, but at the end of the day, it was for nothing... hard work is for chumps, let's just dope the MC with special deus ex machina blood.

I'll even wager, from what was shown in this chapter, that when the MC is done with his training with the strongest people on the planet, he'll get accepted as one of the strong too... but immediately meet someone stronger as soon as he goes back to the "real world"... which should be impossible...
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aFFi - 1730600078
What was the purpose of the training arc?!?
If the MC get trounced by the weakest of the weakest of the tribe right after it...
That's just dumb storytelling... he should have been beaten BEFORE the training arc...
Or even better, he should have barely won against that chump, get more cocky, then get destroyed by a mid rank in the tribe.

This was a pretty bad chapter IMO...
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aFFi - 1730499001
Insanely talented young actor, crazy genius writer, legendary director...
Dude, this movie will be epic... and chaotic.
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aFFi - 1730355837
Yeaaah... Kinda hope the end of this fight marks the end of the whole story.
I don't really see the point of this insane power creep, especially when suddenly, everybody is getting dumber.

The whole point of the story is how the MC wasn't happy at the end of his life for having focused only on martial arts... and this arc purpose is, it seems, to have the MC completely focus on martial arts...
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aFFi - 1730254785
I'm fairly sure she's been perfecting herself from childhood because of something that happened in their past.
I think that in her mind, if she keeps being perfect, and she keeps ridiculing him, he will only have eyes for her.

That's pretty fucked up, and should be considered abusive behavior... but it makes the story interesting.

I would love if, in the future, the MC starts dating someone else, an honest girl who asks him out herself... and then Takamine would get desperate, try to be honest too, fail, try to get back in time, but it would be pointless somehow, because the MC would still keep his memory, then she'd probably try to be sexually aggressive or something...... that could be a fun arc or two.
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aFFi User-7665957845 - 1729955890
Jealousy? I thought it was pretty clear, no?
I mean, she clearly has a crush on the FMC, a one-sided and hidden crush.
She's been hiding her feelings because she just decided on her own that she wouldn't be appropriate to be the FMC's partner.

Then an old, depressed and pitiful dude comes around and steals the FMC's heart with no effort, while she was away.

BTW, I hate Kawakami.
She was clearly forced into this story, but is utterly non-essential to it. You remove her, and the story doesn't change AT ALL, not one bit. Only my frustration would get better.
You remove any other supporting character, some changes would happen, good or bad, but Kawakami is just a waste of panels.
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