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aFFi
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aFFi - 1770818234
Man, I still think these release schedules for webtoons are crazy.
They release weekly high quality full color 50 pages chapters... when mangaka do 7 black and white page a month, and still complain...

No wonder they all get sick or hurt... they should do shorter seasons, or get like a week of relaxing every two months...
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aFFi - 1770817660
Yeah, when you ignore everything that would make your world move, the world actually moves on without you.

You can't ignore everything that would break the status quo or makes you uncomfortable forever... or you'll end up alone...
Glad she starting to grasp her actual situation here, it seems.
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aFFi - 1770817222
Such a dumb and poorly crafted tension.
I was soooo sure the MC would make a "Goku" remark upon arriving late without a good reason, and he did exactly that.
"Sorry I'm a bit late"... yeah, fuck you, you knew the exact time to come back, to save the actual world, and you're "fashionably" late.
Dumbass.
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aFFi - 1769636324
Great move from the MC's dad!
I mean, his direct actions pretty much destroyed the allies of his son, forced his son into exile, gave more power and restored his worst enemies' reputation, was the reason the last hope to make the Zipple at least descent got kidnapped and brainwashed again, and just proved to the world that the Runcandel aren't that big a deal.

Way to go Patriarch! You're probably the worst leader this family ever had!
I don't know what game he is playing at, but it seems to me that it's the dumbest brain-dead move ever. Not doing anything would have been better...

"Yeah, he is doing so to give the role of main flag-bearer to his son", or whatever bullshit excuse will come later won't cut it. Who the fuck would want to lead this shitty family.
I hope the MC never becomes the Patriarch, but just dissolves or destroys the family instead.
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aFFi - 1769632229
I like having multiple things going on, a few unresolved issues, to make the main story interesting...
But maybe don't keep opening more plot intrigue while closing none ever.

This story is getting a bit messy for my taste, I would like the author to resolve some plot points soon-ish...

Up till now, the arcs of this story were well defined, and most plot points where resolved before going to the next arc... I have a feeling that the School Arc will leave the story in a shit state...
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aFFi - 1769626949
Maybe try to talk before pointing your weapon at a group that JUST DESTROYED AN ENTIRE GROUP OF MONSTERS...
Especially when you had trouble fighting the monsters 2v1...

I know she thinks they might have broken the "peace" of the forest, or whatever, but I'm pretty sure anyone with two functioning brain cells might understand that if those "demi-gods" have bad intention, they could kill you like just by sneezing in your general direction... maybe don't try to actively antagonize them?

And she seems like an instructor or someone with a higher position... I hope not, or this new civilization might be dumb as shit.
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aFFi - 1769271790
Whoa, that's actually the first time this happened to me...
I don't care about the MC's fight, like, at all... but I'm really interested on what is happening on the war front.
It's usually the opposite for me. Strange.
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aFFi - 1769205556
What's the point of having the MC struggle now... and get an OP random power-up dropped on his laps by the power of the Deux Ex Machina...

Just finish the story already, I can see the end of the tunnel, I hope they don't stretch this any longer than needed... it's already a pretty meh story, don't go making it just plain shit...
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aFFi SpinelesS - 1768700793
Oh... I was thinking that the version of her that came back multiple times died, and the fact that the MC was the one going back this time just reset the whole timeline, meaning the version of her in this timeline is actually going through the tower for the very first time.

She seems to genuinely be new to this now...
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aFFi - 1768542479
Yes yes, the zombie invasion, the elf's artifact bandit, the chase of the sword spirit.
Even the greedy but intelligent noble.
I'm so hyped.
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aFFi - 1768539752
Dude got water, honey and tons of other produce that could yield yeast...
If he wanted alcohol that much, he could have made mead, it's really not that hard.
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aFFi - 1768111594
Yes, that's how you make an interesting story.
Make your MC go on a (forced) adventure, then pepper here and there info about shit happening in the world (the undying curse, the elves, ...)
That way, when the MC meets the elves about the tree, it doesn't come from nowhere, and the story doesn't become of "and then, and then, and then" story.

It's gets even better when not everything happening is centered exclusively on the MC.

I'm really curious where this is going. It feels a bit like an interlude right now, but the world still interests me.
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aFFi - 1767798392
Why search for them.
They are so sure of their dominance in this region that they won't flee. At least, not yet.

This is a good strategy, if he can avoid having to deal with every grunt that would sap his stamina.
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aFFi - 1767721553
The fucker is actually enjoying this.
Charon's plan totally backfired. He is patiently waiting for the MC to give up, but the guy is now fully enjoying the process of learning by dying.
He's becoming a full blow psychopath... I mean... he is becoming a worst psycho.
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aFFi - 1767567717
Yeah, I saw this coming, and that's the issue.
I'm really hyped for the next fight, so I couldn't hype myself for the student's fights.

It wasn't bad, a good earthy meal, but I can't wait for the desert.
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aFFi - 1767477959
OK, the pig was a fun villain for a while, but this is getting boring.
There's so many more things to explain, expand and discover about this tower, why does the author keep going about this useless plot that only creates frustration.

Go more about the conflict between dragons, about how the MC got transported this far up the tower, about the ongoing conflict with the invasive species of bugs, about curing the administrator of the tower, about the expansion of the farming and its business, about the reconstruction of the bunny kingdom.
And this is just the shit that is currently ongoing. I'm not even talking about what could be happening on the other floors, about the status of the human expeditions or the current state of the MC's family outside the tower...

Just kill the pig, it's getting tedious.
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aFFi - 1767304367
Poor kids, they keep accumulating trauma...
I can see a bloodbath coming...
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aFFi - 1767303475
How the hell are the bat and the chicken gonna explain to Dex what they've done...
They know how he is, they know he can pretty much crush Heaven and Hell like nothing if he so chooses... so what kind of excuse are they gonna try...
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aFFi - 1767174869
The thing that I love the most is that the MCs are all really one person, there absolutely no doubt about this, no possible betrayal, ever.
This type of stories usually starts showing signs of differences between clones because of experience, abilities or other influence, but with the hivemind they have, they still are only one mind.

No discrimination, no judgment, no jealousy. Everybody has their part to play, and they play it wonderfully.
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aFFi - 1767098659
Weeeelll... that's what she wanted, no?
She wanted someone to let her be a knight, and fight like the others.

Yeah, she clearly has feelings for him now, but he was pretty clear from the beginning that he was interested in her combat prowess, not her beauty, style or status.
And maybe if you want to be romanced by your liege and fiancé... maybe don't go out on a "date" in full armor, doing only bro things.

Now, he did fuck up at the end a bit, but she will have to put much more effort to get what she wants now.

As they say, be careful what you wish for.
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