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aFFi - 1726129403
So much better.
This is a pretty good translation, it look fine to me, especially compared to the shitshow that was the one before...
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aFFi TheImage - 1725959234
Yeah, that's kinda dumb.
One panel he is super cocky and confident, like:
"Hehe, he is the strongest hunter ever in terms of pure strength. I also know his skills by heart, their effects and power levels and all. His weapon is stronger than unique type weapons."
Next panel, he has the Pikachu surprised face:
"OMG, he can actually use skills?!? OMG, he is strong?!? OMG, my rare rank daggers are losing in terms of durability to his scythe?!?"

This level of inconsistency is kinda meh...
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aFFi vanila - 1725742328
Fuck yeah!
And with a bit of wincest on the side too!
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aFFi - 1725647616
Sooo, I wonder how he'll find a way to scam Heaven now.
Also, what's left after this, God himself?!?

You know what would be funny as fuck.
If God had the same face as Lloyd, but everybody couldn't stop being in awe by his beauty :D
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aFFi Awnurkn33s - 1725633009
Not "almost as bad", worst.
Killing them would be deemed unjust, but also could be considered mercy.
Letting them live and leaving them alone to fend for themselves is worst that killing them.
They suffered, simmering in their hatred and anger for decades. They also caused a lot of misfortune, death and pain for others, which would also be at least partially Hu Gong's responsibility.

That's easily the worst thing we know he has done up till now.
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aFFi - 1725227482
Yeah, let's add useless chapters in a story that has been going for 4 years with 45 total chapters.
The suspense was already built. Last chapter, a pretty important character lost an arm and we knew the mercenaries were from Japan, so we are at the same exact point now, nothing was added, nothing was removed.
Maybe when your workflow makes you release ONE chapter every 2 months, maybe don't waste your reader's time and attention any more...
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aFFi - 1725119952
I feel like the fun sense of adventure and discovery is completely gone from this story.
This is boring to me, I hope it goes back to its roots a little...
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aFFi - 1724878202
The timid girl that was stuck in a kindergarten's mindset, thinking that being rude was showing affection, and regretting it every time.
OK, why not, still redeemable.
The girl stuck playing the role of the mean maid because she thought that's what the MC wanted.
Not as redeemable, but still, she was doing for him, not for herself...

But I'm sorry, the ex-girlfriend who broke up with him directly, clearly enjoys fucking up every attempts and efforts the MC makes to re-establish basic communication, and, worst of all, who seems really possessive, getting pissing seeing HER EX THAT SHE BROKE UP WITH with other girl, meanwhile keeping a constant posse of 5+ men around her.
She can get fucked. I don't see any way for her to actually not be selfish as hell.

I'm really curious how the author will try to twist this to make her "selfless". That might be a make or break moment for me.
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aFFi Casual Reader - 1724270896
Weeeellll... More like "Six eyes for an eye".
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aFFi Just me - 1723838817
Yep, you are right about Hua, that wouldn't be a Clan, I concur.
But Tang is pretty much a Clan. It's actually one of the 5 Great Clans. I'm pretty sure the leader position is hereditary, and the family name is actually the name of the Clan.

Also, the nomenclature really depends on each and every authors, but:
- Sects are usually the group of people around the a single purpose, religion, family or martial art.
- Schools are usually centering around a martial art and way more meritocratic.
- Clans are centered around a single family, and leaders are selected from the main family.
Meaning, all Clans and Schools are also Sects, but Clans and Schools are opposites.

So yeah, I could have used "Sect" for both, or should have used school for Hua.
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aFFi - 1723755836
This manga, man... I swear, it takes all the clichés and just spits on them.
That was probably one of the best confession and result I've seen in a while... maybe even ever.
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aFFi - 1723679635
This story is getting a strange rhythm.
Like, the chapters go like this for me:
Meh; Meh; Good; Good; Don't care; really don't care; don't care so much it's pissing me off; meh again; ...
We are currently in the "Don't care" part, this will get tedious to read, I guess.
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aFFi - 1723679337
I know!
Now I know what this makes me feel.
This BS story is like watching the movie Ocean's 11, watching the whole building the team, then the research, then the preparation for the heist, the training and the team banter. Then, just right before the heist starts, the police miraculously raids their safe-house, kills two-thirds of the team, and tries to arrest the rest. The rest of the runtime is spent with the team improvising a shit plan that gets thwarted by the bad guy at every step.

This is really really really unsatisfying.
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aFFi - 1723657454
So, there are kinda 2 love interests.
One from his clan, utterly uninterested in anything mundane, obsessed with martial arts. She doesn't love him, but finds his combat skills mesmerizing.
The other from the Tang clan, completely devoid of any feeling of love, embracing practicality to a deviant degree. She wants him for the freedom he'll get her, and nothing else.

This is actually kinda perfect for this story.
I feel like he will see potential in her in martial arts, and maybe kinda train her with the skills his friend taught him in his previous life. Like, secret Tang clan skills.
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aFFi - 1723412279
I feel like the author went so far up his ass that the story lost all meaning.
I was so invested before, but I really can't care less now.

For the sake of my completionist mind, I hope this story ends soon.
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aFFi - 1723267045
How.
The only time the MC has been alone with someone, since the very beginning of the story, is when it's sexy time... and that's with the best swordswoman in the world, or the best mage.
It incredibly convenient that he just happened to be alone that day, coincidentally with a traitor.
And the most important asset for like half the population of the world doesn't have a bodyguard or even surveillance.

I get that the author tried something, but maybe he should try something not completely and utterly dumb next time...
It makes me think that the whole demi-human army is actually full of morons.
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aFFi - 1723263712
Holy shit. I was expecting violence, but that was so much more satisfying than expected. He really treats them like pests.
And that call at the end... i would even dare to say that was a perfect cliffhanger.

So much so that I think this meme needs a revival for such an occasion:
https://i.postimg.cc/xdSc7LTG/i.jpg
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aFFi - 1723253222
How... just how...
How can this story be this good, this funny, this interesting, this well paced, this touching...
and other stories by the same author (I Became the Chef of the Dragon King; The Crown Prince That Sells Medicine) that are in the same universe are sooooo shit.
The first one is about the lazy dragon and his future wife, and the other about a descendant of Lloyd...

I know the Artist is godlike for The Greatest Estate Developer, but that can't be the only thing... right?

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aFFi - 1723189969
Yeah yeah, funny funny.
If she manages to escape, I'm dropping this.
At this point, it would have become a trend in this story.
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aFFi - 1723148088
OK, so, if I understand this correctly, after denying us the proper meeting of the MC and his family, the author decided that this would be a good point to go back to shit nobody cares about, about people nobody cares about, in places nobody cares about, on history nobody cares about, with a subplot nobody cares about.

Yep, that's it from me, time to drop I guess.
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