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Croaker512
1497 points
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Croaker512 Mangaguy - 1716515535
Hopefully he at least strips him of his title
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Croaker512 - 1716503423
She's mega stupid for that
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Croaker512 - 1716452733
I'm not gonna lie, for a long time I wasn't sure how I felt about this story. However, this shit been going hard af.
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Croaker512 SpinelesS - 1716452177
Okay I could see that
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Croaker512 - 1716432798
Damn john was so close to the one with a recovery ability but he couldn't get it.
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Croaker512 Chun 0w0 - 1716428651
I disagree. Forcing the new heroes to complete a dangerous mission against their will that isn't a main mission could seriously hurt morale.
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Croaker512 SpinelesS - 1716400735
She's cannonically a bad guy in the mythology so obviously she's rarely going to be nice in works of fiction.
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Croaker512 Bungus - 1716122660
Because it's a climactic moment and that's how stories work?
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Croaker512 KingToyo - 1716094382
It's a flashback dude
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Croaker512 beruga - 1716072490
Probably hard to draw the aftermath of that.
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Croaker512 The First - 1715978683
I actually think that funnily enough that's a good representation of him throughout the story. When his hair was shiny and charming he had hope for the future and was getting stronger because he wanted to. Now the whole weight of the continent rests on his shoulders. If anything is going to take the luster out of your hair, that'd do it.
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Croaker512 Kurisu - 1715912880
Lmao ain't no way you brought up machiavelli. I like machiavelli but our mc isn't a psychopath.
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Croaker512 - 1715847987
I want them. The childhood friend seems okay but I don't like the tsundere types that express their frustrations physically. I went on a few dates with a girl like that and it was really annoying. I also think that being unable to control one's emotions like that is a red flag especially for someone like him who will be in dangerous situations and needs calm teammates.
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Croaker512 LostCause - 1715844421
Hard to run a functioning country without the support of the populace no matter how strong you are.
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Tbate started airing again and as much as I love this tbate is definitely better by a longshot. World after the fall. Return of the mount Hua sect. Nanomachine. And I agree with the ones Crmsn_rain said.
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Croaker512 - 1715577237
Improvement I guess
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Croaker512 GBcyphers - 1715507646
This is not the big bad. This is the second in command. Plus there's that dude in the cave.
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Dude. You're probably the same type to complain and say you don't care when a side character dies because "we barely know her and they didn't develop her character." If it were 5 chapters of backstory for one side character I'd agree but suck it up and be a big boy. This is how stories work.
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