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yilo Donny_Dont - 1709678793
that'd be me, https://i.postimg.cc/MG3tKnZf/i.gif continues to smash next chapter button. mwahahahahaha
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coming from you, i am sure he will appriciate that compliment.
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yilo Ong - 1709463031
i think i read like 2-3 chapters off of that before i clicked [ X ] because the story was mind nummingly bad. i did notice the smut/erotica tags though
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yilo - 1709425854
for those of you with 0 survival skills, dig the ground in a circle, place large stones around it and leave the middle open, now place smaller stones and pebbles between the larger rocks. and also put some sand/ground around it. try to at least get the rocks on the same height, next find dry branches from nearby trees, break them into pieces and place them in the empty middle, now go find twigs and leaves. place them on/around the logs in middle now you are prepared to start your safe campfire. after you manage to start your campfire, go to a nearby tree, cut like 6-7 young tree branches, these branches will be used as your skewers for your meat. congratulations you have now unlocked the following achievements:
1 make campfire
2 create fire
3 make food
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yilo - 1709424900
dude i love most animals in general, although i am scared of a few, and horrified of 2. but i love cats so much if i were to choose what my own heaven would be like i would choose one with puppies, kittens, cats and big and small. different shapes and sizes and colours and patterns. i would pet them, play with them, sleep with them. run with them everyday untill time runs out.
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yilo Enes - 1709423466
he is a genius and fighting god. he lives for the thrill of the hunt if you will.
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yilo User-2683052461 - 1709423393
zoinks my technique now. https://i.postimg.cc/MGZK8XgJ/i.gif
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yilo - 1709423297
bro myamoto is the fucking man... https://i.postimg.cc/6396tqSN/i.gif
man casually smiling while fighting for his life and having a conversation with someone who is most likely going to kill him like its monday morning at the office speaking with a co-worker.
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yilo - 1709421943
because he is stronger than you, and not just by a bit... you are like an anthill that has been freshly created by a queen and her 10 worker and 10 fighter ants. meanwhile your brother is a goddamn naturally formed volcano that is tens of thousands of meters in the sky about to exploade and devastate your whole planet.
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yilo Kang Han Soo - 1709421403
if you tell/type your wish it will no longer come true. so keep it to yourself.
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yilo Hent A.I. - 1709400466
big, small, medium, flat, humangus, black, brown, white, yellow, green, purple, inverted, erected, large areola, small areola, it does not matter. all that matters is that they are shared by someone with someone, to be loved and carrassed.

-yilo, elder of boob alliance.
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yilo gustavofoxy1 - 1709268059
i dont think we can use the "it should have been me" memes enough when reading this one.
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yilo User-8871353662 - 1709268009
if you want to reach bot, click on a chapter of any manga/hwa/hua. scroll to the bottom of chapter, there is a report button. in that field you can write your complaint/request to the bot. since bot cant respond you never know of it is added or not.
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yilo Dragorize - 1709267905
you arent using your imagination brother, he has pole powers, aka extendo dicku. no height is a pain to reach for this man, he could probably stack 50 of them and still reach the top and bottom with ease.
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yilo Segan - 1709264917
you can contact bot via going to a chapter of anything, at the bottom of chapter there is a report button/feature. you can write your request or complaint to the admin via there. as for you not being to delete your post. i'd recommend just unblocking them for a few mins. going back to that post(s), deleting them and then blocking them again. as far as i know you cant do much with the new comment system in your profile page. i hope this helps buddy.
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i read this story after reading your comment, i was like is it actually that bad? i agree with everything you have said, some of the stuff author has written make sense so it doesnt feel bad. but later on when s2 rolls around. things go from decent manhwa to kill time to absolute dogshit, then to a baby diaper dumpster set on fire rolling through the streets.

s2 makes me like reading the chinese manhua more. at least i know what to expect from those stories. even if all else fails they make me laugh with how absolutely stupid/ bizarre they are.
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yilo yilo - 1709263828
Q: should you as a person read this story?
A: absolutely... not, s1 was fking peak. it could compete for one of the better/best manhwa's on the market. s2 feels like its written and drawn by amateurs. like i read up ch59 which is latest chapter as of 1st of march 2024. all i could think of was, i know i am reading scion of the mages, but am i perhaps reading a fanfiction version? i go back to s1 to read a chapter come back to s2 ch58. it just doesnt hold up. what an utter waste of time. it just left a shitty after taste in my mouth. i loved s1 so much but s2 has pretty much killed this series. truly a disgrace.

conclusion: dont even bother honestly...
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yilo - 1709263809
REVIEW TIME WOOOOOOOO!

premise: shitty author of a shitty story dies because he cant handle valid critisism, he gets told by god/angel/higher being: "your writing sucks balls, as punishment you shall go into your story and fix your mistakes", he gets reincarnated as one of the side characters and has to survive, crazy siblings, assassins, poisoners, dipshits and crazy scenarios all with the help of a little thing we call plot armour.

ratings:
[ art s1 8.5/10 ] in s1 the art looked fking stunning, it wasnt on the level of "her summon" but you could easily compare it to the best manhwa's and it wouldnt fall shy.
[ art s2: 4.5/10 ] they changed either artists or they started to use ai for the art because it feels generic and it feels dead. there are some scenes which have alot of detail in them those look pretty but the rest of it feels cartooney almost.
[ story s1: 7.5/10 ] it was fun to see how the mc was tackling challenges he wrote himself into, him discovering stuff he didnt mean for or happened because of accidents was nice. the fact that he got rewarded for even farting was a little disappointing.
[ story s2: 4/10 ] the accidental discoveries were dialed up to 11, the plot armour easily saving/ giving mc all of the bullshit rewards felt shitty, the characters who were developed and well fleshed out in s1 being absolutely wasted in s2 felt like a slap to the face. i am referring to ch58 and onward. what disgrace and waste of all that time and effort.
[ character development s1 7/10] we learn about the sidecharacters, their backstories, we see them grow and understand their feelings and they dont just feel like carboard cutouts.
[ character development s2 3/10 ] what the fk man... the only person who got a little bit of development was lucia. rest of the cast felt like they downgraded and lost alot of their charms, they feel like static pieces on a chess board just moving to make the story progress, they have essentially died. or might aswell have...
[ manhwa overal rating 4/10 ] what the actual fk happened between s1 and s2... it feels as if the author of the story died irl during the writing of the story after the end of s1 and an assistant took over to write s2. the art took getting used to at s2, i didnt hate it at first but as time went on and i was comparing it to s1 it felt like a shitty ai ripoff... the characters and worldbuilding in s1 were pretty good, not the best but pretty good. in s2 they feel like garbage, the story tries to focus more on the worldbuilding in s2 but its so baaaaaaaaad... idk it left a very shitty after taste in my mouth.
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