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Elroid Tiereon
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Elroid Tiereon - 1710706688
Oh, I felt this question might've come at some point!

I doubt he will but that might get into his mind for a while, huh?
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Elroid Tiereon - 1710507550
She has that "Bakugou" from My Hero Academia attitude, where she doesn't want to accept a childhood friend that was beneath is able to amount to anything today.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1710452495
Wakana seems to be only thinking on dresses, so nothing personal gets in his head...
Which is why I REALLY want to know what was with that complicated expression after the cosplay event.
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Elroid Tiereon KRAUGEL - 1710162729
Honestly, I complained before that this story had a boring MC at first, because of how straightforward he was towards that one goal. But now he has more human emotions and I am LOVING IT.
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Not really... since the whole revenge story started going a bit out of whack when he found a place to return to, in the tribes.

Before that, he didn't have anything but revenge. It all was a set up for the moment he was able to realize the truth.
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Elroid Tiereon Bruce - 1710100744
Oh, that's a bit what I mean.

The reason he can't act is because he is trying too hard to do that. It's like the whole weight of her mother made him wooden, it's what I think.
...or at least you could write it like that, so it can have some pay-off.

Still, I agree. The "natural kindhearted" Yuu is what people keep really falling for.
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Elroid Tiereon Bruce - 1710100271
I mean, if it was acting related, it could work with her mother backstory.

But maybe you are right and the payoff to the family story can come another way.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1710098966
Boy I would love if he found out he CAN act at some point, get a chance to do so... and decides that still wants to stay with the sisters.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1710086080
His abilities might be evolving; instead of just "hearing" things, he might be developing a skill to put thoughts into other people.

Now that looks like an amazing development.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1709992922
So, they finally met!
Took a freaking long time !!!
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Agreed.

Tho, at least that helps keep the story moving forward rather fast instead of, you know, getting lost in the "happy go lucky life of the MC" that other stories like this get so often lost in.
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It's really the first time they show off, but it's to either stab or jab their son, and all LOVINGLY!!

My word, this is a great story xD
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Elroid Tiereon - 1709819669
It's actually sweet how much of a child this lil kid is.
Because it's not easy to write "child" characters most of the time, not in this sweet and heart-breaking sense.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1709763203
How to assassinate, the Crusader way: LEAVE NO WITNESSES.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1709754836
That's one hell of a boob silencer!
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Elroid Tiereon - 1709656653
It's nice to see Asa is still Asa.
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Elroid Tiereon KRAUGEL - 1709642538
Revenge really is best served steaming hot, innit.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1709574395
This story is just having so much fun with itself not giving a single F lmao
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Elroid Tiereon - 1709405245
So this is a bit of a flash back.

Got it? Got it.
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