Ah. So THAT'S why I caught hell trying to get through this. This author doesn't like doing any kind of work without a distinct taint to it. The girls almost all have to be actual scum with no impulse control, his MC always has to be a feckless pervert that is only a responsible adult away from getting them properly arrested. The supporting male cast are just walking rape doujin stand-ins except with illustrated faces.

And that's not abhorrent to my scruples, since doujin of that caliber I eat like Skittles. But in actual serialized stories, it's just exhausting. There's no one to cheer for as they're all worthless humans and it's not told ironically or in sense to make fun of it. Hell, not even as a cautionary story. You can eat that kind of flavor in brief bites. In two years, I've made three unconscious attempts (as in, tried, left, forgot I tried when it crossed my browser again) and met the same conclusion each time. The worst part is, like most other "push the drama" books, it relies on the absolute dumbest contrivances to advance the plot, which usually ends up making everyone look stupid, feckless, or both.That's a staple in romance dramas, but paired with the already-scummy characters and you're right back to being super-exhausted with the whole thing.

My advice: If you read/watched Nozoki Ana and weren't repulsed, you can get through this easy enough. If not, then this book isn't for you. Find a doujin to scratch the itch. As for me, I'm blacklisting. Tired of forgetting I've tried to dig through this book.

Enough. I've done this three times in two years to see if I can get through it, and I ultimately can't stand it. The MC is a worthless weenie and the women are almost all scum to a fault.

Hope you blocked yourself, then.

So what I thought was a shitty and predictable fake-out to take care of the Chinese devil was, instead, axe-kun telling the author to wrap it up. Typical.

It is fun. You're right. But in general, these stories written these days suck because the authors are terrified to ACTUALLY lewd the men in female bodies. They're scared of what it implies, so use shitty gimmicks and plot conveniences to avoid addressing it. Back in the day, writers gave no fucks and had all manners of fun. These days, they're almost all toothless to a fault and won't buck the system.

"Oh hey, a rejected paladin with the best defense, those are always good—"

Yeah, Imma stop you right there and hopefully save you from wasting your time. There is NO plot, the characters are cardboard cutouts, the artwork goes to shit way too often, and even the translation group fucks the pooch with the bad grammar and often-incomprehensible translations. Any one of these factors, you could normally take on the chin and enjoy yourself. Combined together to such an extreme makes for a terrible show all around.

And so it's known, I actually had a breakdown for all my thoughts to this work, but apparently the site has 3000 characters as a limit and I can't be assed to edit.

tl;dr There are four other Tank stories on this site and they are WAY better. Don't bother with this, even as a light afternoon snack.

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So to get this straight: You knew there was a corruption plot afoot, you knew there was an oncoming war campaign, and you chose to instead shirk your identity and LARP as some big-tittied, good natured oneechan valkyrie in another kingdom? And didn't warn ONE PERSON the entire year and a half you kept this lie up, not even looking into what happened to your brother, or forming any kind of counter-campaign to what you knew was around the corner?

And I bet they won't even quarantine her for this severe, kingdom-threatening transgression.

Yup,I'm out.

Meh. Editor needs to be slapped for letting this pointless B thread drag, then picking it up in such a clumsy manner.

Yup, it's dragging. When you can skip segments of the chapter and not really miss a beat on the plot, that's a terrible sign.

This got dull in less than three chapters. Give it four more then I'm out.

So Seig is either demon prince or god-sent.

The translation is straight up ass.

My satisfaction can be found in NTRing yuri couples.

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Fun fact: A guillotine is not a "quick" death. Your severed head stays alive for a minute or so if you so happen to be super unlucky.

You already will be cucked. There's no escaping the inevitable.

If the city is a seige point constantly hit upon at every angle, then just getting a warm body to hold a sword is likely enough for the higher ups.

At a guess, crotchless panties.

The maid deserved worse and got off light. The knight should lose his head for daring to grab the lady of the house.

That's good for you, I guess. Glad you enjoyed it. Or somesuch.

I promise I'm older than you, and I STILL don't like my time being wasted so pointlessly. You do you, though.