Kyuukei's jokes are wasted on this slop.

Cry more.

High key hate when people don't use their brains. Antagonistic forces in a B and C string plot are the meat & potatoes of a drawn out saga. You can't have a good saga without various smaller plots that show the growth & development of supporting and even minor characters.

She didn't develop. She just gets over her antagonism in the span of a few page panels after spending several chapters entirely off-screen and out of mind. Meanwhile, MC got a whole arc out of having determination and the will to confront his demons (pun not intended) beaten into him over a dozen or so chapters. Were she important to the story, she should have gotten WAY more progressive development over the last few.

And somehow you all are satisfied with these subpar results.

The author failed to take it seriously. Go through the previous five chapters and look for the parts where you see her development happen. She's gored and maimed, then spends four chapters effectively in the same huddled corner of the building while MC flipped personalities entirely.

Juxtapose that over her earlier presentations. Vibrant, firm, standing even when danger is afoot, upbeat despite the severity of the world, heartfelt and passionate even in the face of her loved one COMPLETELY giving up and seeking his own death instead of having it hoisted on him from monsters. You quickly realize that they are two separate characters instead of being the result of a character hitting an antagonizing wall in their journey.

Take careful note of how she didn't even come out of that journey in any meaningful manner. It was quick, without real prompt, and with no weight of tension given how blase MC is acting over planning to kill the boss while basically carrying her.

It's bad writing.

Hold on lemme find something just as great and entertaining for you

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Something else entered her before MC could.

Also, this is shitty and entirely unbelievable. The man can transverse METERS in measures of tenths to even hundredths of a second. Like hell he couldn't have saved her from being stomped & stabbed. This is why I don't like dealing with authors imitating Superman powers. They're never consistent.

... This is a manhwa isn't it

Superman power are not interesting.

Hell yeah useless NPC carry, you're as shitty as you are in games.

That's not how karma works, so you can relax and laugh at this dumb broad all you want.

Fuck yes torture that useless thot

Her use was finished. Kill her.

Yes, she is. So was this chapter.

Gay.

And there it is: The re:zero hero worship bullshit.

I'd rather be playing a rougelike than reading this. I wish that writers would get that not everything translates well into a story concept. Playing meta with stats and BS mechanics just means you at some point failed to design your own video game.

Hook is pretty soft. Don't make things hopeless while dragging MC through a tutorial.

My soggy knees shoujo trap. The positions are undeserved, the characters are undercooked, the MC develops deep relationships with emotional cardboard for little reason and with NO actual display of character development, the gore & violence is largely portrayed by the men, only two out of the half-dozen men presented are any means of Lawful Good—the rest are rapist, conniving assholes because either plot demands it or just no reason whatsoever. Oh, and the edge just exists for edge's sake. You'd think the author would have theming or reasoning to be dipping into Lovecraftian horror like premises with the monsters, but it's just done for cool factor (spoiler: the cool factor wears off fast).

Characters appear out of sheer convenience, and plot tends to happen without flow or coherency. The first big bad is TOLD as intelligent, cunning, charismatic, and influential. He is, instead, a bumbling dodder that explodes kids in a church for zero reason, stalks slave girl MC without manipulating or exploiting her...think SAO villain. No nuance, no brains, just rape. And all the men characters are like this.

The art is good in stills, but the action scenes are shoujo-esque in their awfulness in conveying motion, action, reaction, gravity, etc. You will not be able to follow a scene with any coherency, up to and including combat where she's ripped literally limb to limb but it's the wrong limb not one frame later.

The yuri is a pain in the ass because none of it is justified, displayed, or played out. The author is using heavy undertones to all but take the dolls in their hands, slam them together, ans scream "NOW KISS!" at the top of their lungs.

3/10 would not recommend to anyone.

- He's super smart and has taken over with influence & wits
- Kidnaps a girl in broad daylight
- Beats up a nun in broad daylight
- Defies a general's aide in broad daylight

Yup. Dropped.

And that's my cue to leave. This one isn't going anywhere particularly fast and the edge is done with no rhyme or reason. It's all pretty superficial instead of holding meaning or reasoning.