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Cookie Muncher
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Cookie Muncher Urimiya - 1720053992
pretty sure its not a typo. Considering the panels, he was dodging while writing. Its not impossible to put the dash before the line and miss the line in the middle.

To conclude its a joke lost in translation thats meant to say "idiot" sloppily

Also bc i dont know korean, ty for the correct translation
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Cookie Muncher - 1720048872
I've seen this shit with a SGM of Division before. It puts real stress on chain of command.

Honestly my 1SG did this to me and made me carry him over my shoulder (275lbs) because "everyone else was teamed up" (he made the teams while staring me down)
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well... Without the ruined storyline, its already shown saintess sending corrupted monsters to earth
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The biggest reason i hated military training is because of this motherfucker right here. Needs to explain EVERY fucking detail because someone MIGHT not know by the 42nd time
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better that cpl fucktard saw it before it disappeared
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Cookie Muncher - 1720001653
so we learned 2 main things so far that we can hope MC will take advantage of
• Black magic uses life force
• MC has unlimited life force
MC can become the god of black magic
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based on the terms "hostile" it's a word to designate monsters who inherently hunt humans rather than the territorial fairy (neutral?)
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Cookie Muncher - 1719995315
To be honest, given the fact she doesn't use healing magic itself disqualifies her from being a healer.
Pharmacist or herbalist makes sense.
Given her job is more support, caps her utility for her to be ranked, and given she doesn't need to be there for her drugs to take effect removes her healing rank.
• provides drugs (don't need to be in person) (highest worth) S-rank
• search skill (there are monsters at higher rank that counter this) (caps utility) B-rank
• uses collection (misc skill that can be used on poison) (caps utility) D-rank
• map reading (can be taught) (worthless w other who know) E-rank
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Considering there are 7 elements and 4 martial techniques, one would think there are at least 2 more seasons to write.
Obviously one of the two is the full 2nd season lol
Also, other than his family there seems to be a greater enemy. Especially if you consider that his path is the combination of 2 great houses. This path was also laid before a successor with heavenly eyes and body specifically.
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Cookie Muncher - 1719959937
glad 2 others caught
"the reason why Loyd can use martial energy and magic is because he is not bound by this world's rules"
this means he can use swordsmanship too but uk... we haven't gotten there yet
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honestly, this is probably half the reason its so expensive. He also mentioned him gaining more mana with the pricier ones, meaning more herb %. Its also possible that the low quality are mixed 1:1000 and high quality are mixed 1:100.
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Cookie Muncher - 1719934833
<Fuck your Feelings>
You'd be correct to say there is no transmigration explanation
But he gets his OP power from inherent martial arts ability which is the same setting as the protag. Leaving specifics blank for explanation, the world gave him what was detailed for protag.
What's wrong with side characters? You act like nobility don't assign assassins or spies. You also act like nobility would never have assassins under their employment

And if you're truly hellbent on the logistics of a modern building, its not unreal for glass to appear but not weapons when magic transcends what weapons could do. Especially when you consider the viability to the application of magic. Its better to research knowns than unknowns. When you think logistically 1 magician could decimate armies worth of troops alone, guns or not
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Cookie Muncher - 1719921743
<Kaim the Fang Enjoyer> it's possible she is telling the truth. If you consider the fact that she's the spider she'd know all the heinous criminals. So there are lives in which he was a dirtbag with no potential (kill), lives where he was a dirtbag but served a purpose (throw away later), lives where he was just but wouldn't stood in her way (kill), just and followed her will (keep). Not every life was the same
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Cookie Muncher - 1719921203
Waiting for him to realize he's not free... He's under dictatorship. AND lost his position. Putting him in more danger now that monarch doesn't have enemies anymore
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This is the problem with your generic in list format. If you even use 1 your story becomes generic. Seriously think about something that isn't listed with the goal of being isekai.

• once the first i was transported into a novel was well received about 100 more came after
• then as a derivative, i was transported into MY novel
Or
• i was transported into a video game
• i was transported into a different world via summoning
• i tripped into another world
• i was born in another world
• i regained my memories from my old world
• the new world became my world

Who are the enemies
• monster
A) come from portal
B) live there
C) inside dungeons
D) outer-space
• humanity
A) factions "backstabbing"
B) Guild or 1entity vs world
C) Independent (individuals not connected via organization randomly pop up to cause trouble)
• demons
A) same story no matter how you try to change it
• robots
A) ^ this is a sub-genre
• Aliens
A) what do they look like without being green martians or just monsters
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Problem
How do you write a story without the MC having plot armor
1 you make him OP
2 you make antagonists weak
3 MC will have plot armor
How do you write a plot
• pick antagonists
• pick a goal
• create events that go towards that goal
How to create fights
1 Longer flashy
2 keep it shorter but POP
3 completely overpower
4 mc loses but keep life following 1-3 through plot armor (or they aren't real antagonists)

In this day and age when you say generic, its not a good criticism. There are 1000s of manga, so its impossible to not touch base on generic ploys. Like the fights, there is only 1-4 as an option, without plot armor you can only pick 1 or 2 on MC's power. CONGRATULATIONS you've just entered the generic criteria. To write something truly original it would take way too long to the point where when it was published, at least 3 original ideas you had would have made it in someone else's work. And if received well, would have been repeated 10 more times.

Just to test, how would you insert a mc in a new world that hasn't been written about b4
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Cookie Muncher - 1719891742
personally i thought she would look down on the fakes and he'd switch with them to instantly kill her
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Cookie Muncher Adam - 1719888005
i think its closer to his class was rewritten, not skills
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then one of their contractees start a fight with MC
Antagonist ends up dying pathetically
Cause? Constellation one sidedly terminated contract
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