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Cookie Muncher
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He did say he was going to find a party to compete against the hero's party.
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lol "thumping bibles" was to refer to hardcore fanatical preachy people. Not a term meant for common believers. I'm religious as well. But yes, enjoy your read 😁😁😁
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too many people thump bibles and refuse to understand that not everybody can afford to live with their head in the clouds. It's understandable that some girl's worst day is breaking a nail, but there are also women who have acid poured on them (yes this HAS happened before). The problem is the moral police who know this shit happens but think that everything will fall in place because everything is black and white
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I'd go one step further and say that the guild master said he only knows of one other person who can make their own spells at such a young age... The prince...
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Cookie Muncher HateMe - 1 month ago
I just wagered as I remember so isekai romance novels like the ploy of "became the villain but found out the heroine is actually evil" plot. Given the circumstances I'd even wager if she's willing to falsely accuse the dukes daughter, it wouldn't be out of it to frame her for the resurrection of the evil dragon
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Cookie Muncher HateMe - 1 month ago
I'm a little curious because they said the dragon was mad when she had her engagement annulled. The dragon would know if FL was actually picking on Rifanna, which shows its interest in FL doesn't it?
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Its actually better if you use crΓ©me but yeah, it adds a richness to the eggs so as long as you don't overcook them
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there are plenty of better titles I could come up with. Best one probably being "The Blind Girl with Sacred Eyes". Its not a trap, it conveys what it's about, and isekai is usually better left out of a title if there isn't a constant comparison of the 2 worlds
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Cookie Muncher - 1 month ago
if you remember right, the reason why MC started improving the land was because their citizens started to dwindle. If his territory is only starting to get on track enough for the citizens to JUST BARELY start to need to build new homes, Isn't it obvious that the citizens for the most part were his to begin with. If anything, I feel like this dude likely stole them first
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Cookie Muncher Cursen - 1 month ago
no assassin didn't get redemption. He got suicide instead πŸ˜‚πŸ€£πŸ˜‚
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A couple of guys from the craftsman guild was literally what was said
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Cookie Muncher - 1 month ago
actually kill the caster. And that leaves negotiations left with the remaining living
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Cookie Muncher - 1 month ago
Without reading any further than when it narrated that the hero party started to gain strength at an exceptional speed i already felt like someone cursed the MC and the hero knows which causes him to be regretful but at the same time says nothing because without it, he wouldn't be so strong. The fact that they also had an archmage was also a little suspicious
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Cookie Muncher Demonh8 - 1 month ago
was hoping for an execution of the duke for disrespecting the kings guest (an extension of the king would put him only slightly less than the king a minimum) or for the MC to walk away to another kingdom
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Cookie Muncher - 1 month ago
These last couple of chapters really are nauseating. The whole reason this jackass joined is literally because she wants to cause the mc to suffer
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Cookie Muncher Irem - 1 month ago
The [FAKE HERO] and [HERO] occupations given at ceremony were inscribed on MC and other guy.
Based on this fact, whether the king agreed on this faux party BC
β€’ MC wasn't outgoing and would be bad for publicity
β€’ It was mistakenly documented in reverse

The fact remains that the "hero" was captured by bandits, and after announcing to sell him as a slave, rumors cropped up of the [hero] killing a demon elsewhere. This caused the authenticity of his claims to be a hero questionable. As a result, he was purchased for a low currency where a slave's status is determined by their worth. This would make him the lowest status even among slaves. His last chance to assert his position from being sold for so low was lost when he cowardly ran away.

Meanwhile the MC continues to try to hide his identity so that he can avoid the unwanted attention, and pursuit of the kingdom who falsely claimed charges being framed by the "hero". Although the capital may have been destroyed, the royalty and "hero" were missing. Meaning they could spread these false rumors to other kingdoms.
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Cookie Muncher Chuunico - 1 month ago
The Brave VS The hero is meant to be a lesson on how just being manipulated by fame causes you to lose in the long run.

Being able to accept a woman who was a prostitute for who they are is the definition of romance. Not sure about #2 but fighting for #3 to save her from death and gain the right for her hand is also the definition of romance. Fairy tales are often short and involve princesses in towers or in peril where the MC fights dragons, royalty, or situations to save the damsel in distress. While others involve one side to accept the other for who they are (Beauty and the beast / Cinderella)

I feel like the main reason this novel feels off is because it became a hodge-podge of different fairytales abbreviated with a setup that doesn't stick to its world building. Examples include
β€’ weapon lying to him about true form
β€’ TWICE
β€’ the fact that a spear became a sword
β€’ the author had to explain why the MC knew swordsmanship despite only practicing the spear
β€’ SEVERAL CHAPTERS LATER as if to address previous comments to cover up ineptitude
β€’ Although it's clear the brave invited MC to push his superiority on him there isn't any sign of him showing opposition
β€’ when the brave did show opposition it felt out of character because there was no setup besides his selfishness of wanting to be respected
β€’ MC keeps forgetting or its redundant speech for weapon to "secretly increase weight to train his body". It'd be better to exemplify it by having mc realize it by himself rather than being surprised. It feels disingenuous.
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Cookie Muncher - 1 month ago
good moral to the story

Those in high positions (The Brave) are often pushed by the populace to treat the effect
While those in lower positions (The Hero) often find the source of problems because they aren't busy with fame
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to be fair, the brave who wanted MC to come along did it out of pride. He practically forced someone who held no interest in an attempt to gain admiration. This is no different than trying to assert superiority as a higher existence
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