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Cultured Lost Clone
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SOmething along the lines of "cultivator against hero society"
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Cultured Lost Clone - 1725931505
https://i.postimg.cc/QM0cvmM2/i.png Can we not do this? https://i.postimg.cc/F15S0nPL/i.png
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Only thing he was missing was the closed eyes https://i.postimg.cc/7YSR2Xgy/i.webp
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they took her armour and made her a country girl immediately. i expect the rest cause you know but atleast let her keep the cool armour https://i.postimg.cc/Y0yjtsgW/i.jpg
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Yoink https://i.postimg.cc/ZnSfYw8V/i.jpg
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https://i.postimg.cc/CLy0k0NQ/i.webp
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STOP RETURNING THIS TO MY RECCOMMENDED https://i.postimg.cc/q7BrLjyW/i.png
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Why is this the first thing you think of? Anyway im hoping for a yandere in there https://i.postimg.cc/V66mgd91/i.png
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NO SAUCE https://i.postimg.cc/tTCCcrjK/i.jpg
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i actually hit the character limit for this one and had to revise it. thats crazy https://i.postimg.cc/L6yPxCWf/i.jpg
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Cultured Lost Clone - 1725667321
I would say read it even though i personally only like the art since its enjoyability is pretty good. 4/10
chap 28
listen to 'Terry's Taxidermy' by Teddy Hyde

Art: TOP TIER all the scenes are well done and the fights let you feel every panel absolutely nothing to complain about there and the only reason i caught up with it.

Characters: MC IS GOATED, UTORI FOR PRESIDENT.
Their alright, some are stupid and some are too insanely dumb to try and pose "interesting questions about the death penalty' since its basically like joker and batman except every criminal is comic book joker and shows no remorse and theres only one batman.
Plot: its alright. the prologue just ended but honestly the plot is off due to horrible world building that requires a failure at every level of organization.The whole "should a person be allowed to execute unchecked" thing is useless due to what he's fighting.
i think their trying to make Authority the bad guy since he shows up like one but he is quite honestly along with mc and the female warden a pillar of intellect in a sea of ridiculous ideals for the situation their in.

Worldbuilding: I HATE IT I HATE IT I HATE IT. PRISONS FILLED TO THE BRIM WITH SUPERVILLAINS AND ITS FILLED WITH REGULAR GUYS WITH BATONS?
A BLANKET WIDE RULE FOR HEROES FOR SIMPLY NO KILLING MAKING IT HARDER FOR EVERY HERO TO DO THEIR JOB CAUSING THE DEATH RATE TO INEVITABLY GO UP AS WELL AS THE HERO COUNT GOING DOWN due to honestly crazy heroes turning to villainy? ABOLISHING HERO CATEGORIES? (mind you they still use it even though they say stupid crazy ms marvel ideal lady abolished it).
LEAVING A PLANET BUSTING CULTIVATOR ALIVE FOR 30 YEARS BECAUSE AN ORGANIZATION HAD A "DISAGREEMENT", ACTIVELY PUSHING BACK THE EXECUTION DATES OF CRIMINALS THAT MURDERED THOUSANDS? ITS SO BAD.
MIND YOU THE NORMAL GAURDS HAVE GOD DAMN BATONS, NO GUNS? ION LIKE GUNS IN MY FANTASY BUT SERIOUSLY?
also step sister pisses me off since she can actively see how those monsters murdered people and how many yet she still says after seeing it first hand AND ALMOST BECOMING A VICTIM TO IT (that dog didnt look friendly and she didnt manage to convince it) that those monsters should be saved, all of them? pretty damn evil.

i slipped in the shower inbetween reading this and was still just as frustrated. The idealistic people in this have to be literal fanatics for how bad the situation is.
Utoriti is def a good guy and i wont be convinced otherwise unless you have a good argument or yandere manga to bribe me.

off to something idk maybe kagura bachi to see how much of a liar the hyping memes are https://i.postimg.cc/XvB9GfQ5/i.jpg
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the stage set up was pretty horrible honestly. most of the things required for it to get this bad make Utoriti look like a good guy.
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Cultured Lost Clone - 1725664476
Bro there is no need to debate the execution they are not getting out of sentencing with just years especially with the murder of most of the prison gaurds property destruction and terrorism. like this isnt even a question to be debating in this kinda environment.
also get this guy a team or something bro
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No he still would but this is just to see if he becomes a vigilante claiming to be a cop or a lawful executioner
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Cultured Lost Clone - 1725663173
https://i.postimg.cc/YCS5wZ03/i.png i wanna hear this from the victims families.
Utori for president fr maybe then we'll have some damn SUPERS HEROES GAURDING SUPER VILLAINS WHAT WAS ROSA COOKING?
they have the damn Akatsuki with world busters openly saying they plan to murder humanity and they still trynna capture these people. mind you they most likely dont have another prison as "secure" as that one
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Cultured Lost Clone - 1725662655
https://i.postimg.cc/W45cZVyx/i.png the audacity to say that after almost all the prison guards died and the actual thing that happened to the prison. IT WAS WIPED OFF THE DAMN MAP WHAT IS HE TALKING ABOUT? also i complained about rosa enough so yeah but this guy should really be put back in charge honestly, he really wasnt the best but its better than letting a world ending threat sit in prison for THIRTY YEARS. cant completely stop crime but can control it and all that.
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He REALLY loved his brother, like the level of parental love and stuff since they only had eac hother and what not
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Cultured Lost Clone - 1725661591
ngl this feels like a cop out to forcefully make the story longer by widening the scope of the story, after all she literally could have just stolen him at anypoint in the prison since it lacks any sort of super on there. im less angry about the actual end of the fight where he should have aimed for the haed but simply didnt and more angered by the contrived insanely stupid things needed to get to this point from a worldbuilding and common sense perspective. also i hope they killed the pregnant lady cause ngl they kinda just forgot her
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No the other strong heroes got put down by this guy. we learn earlier that most of the people here were captured by MC's team (NO IDEA WHY EXECUTION SIMPLY SEEMS TO MEAN NOTHING THOUGH)
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Cultured Lost Clone - 1725660803
They deserve that for the idiocy this whole plot has in relation to simple security in a building holding thousands or hundreds of highest tier supervillains and not simply doing a same day or same week execution. it took world ending shota two weeks to get executed so no wonder the other ones were still alive also tha fella in normal clothes terrifies me making me think he's some isekai character
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