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Vivaldin
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Vivaldin - 1716421788
Chapter 55.10

In which the wife makes A GLORIOUS RETURN

also, relatable.
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Vivaldin - 1715973608
Two short oneshot, though they're.... Let's say, Minna Watashi no Hara no Naka was the author's better work, though unfinished and abandoned.

First one is the better of the two, that's the title, cover and description you see here.

Second one however... Yuri incest, but not only that, ''I will ruin everything for my twin sister and all her relationships because I love her so much'' type of Yuri incest, it wouldn't be better even if the story changed to that if they weren't twin sisters.

I'd recommend finding better Yuri somewhere else. In term of oneshots, F.U.S.S.A or First Kiss (Mira) are way better, if for a series, The Sheep Princess in Wolf's Clothing is your best bet, or maybe Between Philia and Eros would be the closest thing to the first oneshot here, as far as I remember. Sheep Princess is the best out here, but Philia and Eros is really good and underrated.
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Vivaldin - 1715973060
Yuri Incest, what an abomination.

Also, it was hella' confusing. They both look somewhat the same, sometimes I forgot who was who and who we were following.

The first oneshot was better, this one... It's just a weird twin sibling ruining her sister's life because of her obsessive love for her, ugh.
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Vivaldin - 1715972611
Cool Yuri, not the best, but it was good nonetheless.

Capitalism and reckless consumerism corrupt everything, but I never though it could ever reach the blessed Yuri !
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Vivaldin - 1715972174
Huh, so Eyes-brain guy is certainly dead, that's... Not something I expected here in this chapter of all things.

I guess this mango is over now ? Or will be soon ? T'was a good run, but what about that one Hero girl ? What happened to her ? Did she die ? Run away ? Did I forget because this mango only update twice a year ?

And will we never get any information on why this GIANT SHIP is here or how it crashed SPECIFICALLY there ?

Was Eyes-brain guy an alien ? What about the very scantily-clad nun of that one extra chapter ? She just left to build a religion of nudists or something ?
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Vivaldin - 1715959675
Oh so that's a chapter I missed somehow.

That sure makes more sense than ''another giant appeared from nowhere to fight her, wow.'' in the next few chapters.
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Vivaldin - 1715571603
Wake up homie, Peak is back from its NINE MONTHS absence.

Also, this would means this weird arc is almost over; now to think what will happen after he learns all this information about her past...
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My brother in the digital ink pages,

It was always supernatural from the moment this whole mango started.
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Vivaldin - 1715569973
If he doesn't want his wife, I'm willing to sacrifice myself.
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Vivaldin - 1715375266
Good for them, but why is he in such a hurry to get married ?

Buddy, she loves you, there's no need to try to bind her to you like that, she's not gonna leave.

RIGHT ?!
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Vivaldin - 1715372786
This reminds me of my old days as a member of the Sith Empire's Dark Council.

UNTIL I GOT CRYOGENIZED FOR 5 YEARS.
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Vivaldin - 1715372214
A threat to the Polycule has arisen.

And it's worse than the home invader, it's a division from within !
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Vivaldin - 1715371822
Why are they, with even one of them from a rich family too if I remember, not buy a bigger bed for all 4 of them ?

Are they stupid ?
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Vivaldin - 1715290206
I kinda like the design of the funny black robes guy, though I'm pretty sure he can't see shit with a eyes cover like that.

Also, big boi is a very nice boi and I hope nothing bad ever happens to him (please).
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Vivaldin - 1715289845
Wow, this mango is a lot more popular than I remember, good for it.

Anyway, this explanation got me thinking; did he send her to kill our boi as revenge for something I forgot, or did he knew very well she'd be unable to finish the job, hoping she would get executed and out of his own way ?

Because when you think about it, if she is given the time to explain her story, even if it's in a trial before getting executed, then... The Womanizer's in deep trouble if everyone knows he tried to have someone assassinated. He HAD TO expect she'd die one way or another before telling her story, right ?
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Vivaldin - 1715289315
Makes you wonder why someone send this woman to assassinate him instead of hiring a professional to do it. (Assuming the Nobles in this universe back stab each other with assassins often, I don't remember if assassinations are common here).

Someone that, I don't know... Knew beforehand that a dagger wouldn't kill him because of his magic ?
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Vivaldin - 1715288228
Sorry that took so long reading this, too much going on these months.

Also, I like that magical beasts can be everything, like evil wolves, to giant unicorn bears.

But this one ? It's just a BEEG horsie.
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Vivaldin - 1715287162
My dumb ass though I was reading a size-difference Yuri with a heavy side of Dark Fantasy.

But know I understand this was all leading to Fantasy Titanfall with a side of Ancient Aliens.

Mango was gone for such a long 9 months, it evolved into another genre.
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Vivaldin - 1715286332
I know my plan to OVERTHROW THE TYRANNY OF THE MONARCHY AND ITS DECADENT NOBILITY is maaaybe a bit far-fetched (in the current timeline and political situation of this particular fictional universe), the Nobles might revolt into a civil war or something because ''waaaah ! I can't oppress my people anymore !'' so I'm gonna entertain another possibility (that people here already said, and was probably put in motion in the adaptation, which I didn't watch, but know has skipped a lot of stuff to get to the end of this arc);

...Why can't the Noble lady gf becomes Queen ? Everyone loves her, she received the education all her life already because they selected her as the Prince's consort, and... She was supposed to be Queen anyway, though not the actual ruler, I know Prince guy would have had that role, but she's Is genuinely the only person I trust with the role in this whole mango.

It's not as good as the AWESOME POWER OF DEMOCRACY, but at least it's placing the country in the hands of someone who won't try to do a civil war or theocratic regime, which seems to be the alternatives if our Magic Nerd Princess does not take the throne.
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