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Vivaldin
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Vivaldin - 1722965494
I don't even remember her being with any friends in all the chapters we had.

It's SUSPICIOUS.
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Vivaldin - 1722375167
Okay that was cute.

My Cook-boy is living the start of the househusband dream. I'm kind of jealous (if it didn't involve waking up hours early to make ALL THAT food for her before going to school).

Man I wish that was me.
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Vivaldin - 1722372982
They should come clean about it, but at the same time, HOW do you come clean about this to your own mother ?

I guess we should start by asking if having a lot of grandchildren interest her, 'cause they either won't have any or...

My boy gonna bump Japan's birthrates statistic graph into a mountain.
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Vivaldin - 1722371749
I'm calling it now, she's only that like 'cause she's a femcel and she wish she had boy too.

We'll probably see her more in future chapters. For better or worse remains to be seen.
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Vivaldin - 1722267442
There are complaints about it ?

Huh ???
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Vivaldin - 1721879471
And just like that, the Yuri is gone and we're back in our usual romance genre.

I liked this chapter, though it took me a minute to remember who this other girl was since it's been so long.

But then, don't make out in the planetarium ! Planetariums are supposed to be about watching the stars ! Not making me depressively jealous !

Speaking of jealousy, I lived the exact same thing as he just did, well not really, but back in high school my ex got interested into this random ass guy in our friend group behind my back for a week, always getting closer to him and trying to get his attention.

I get our guy, at times like these you really want to believe your relationship is strong and she's just making friends with people close to your friend group (though the guy in my case kinda.. Latched onto us for no reason really that he knew a guy we knew). Anyway, you look at them and you can't help but feel jealous of what's happening, thinking that something is wrong but you don't want to mention it 'cause you're afraid she'll think you're paranoid and overprotective aaaand she's cheating on you with the guy for like weeks until she eventually decide to tell you so that she can be openly in love with him, at your expense.

And then drop him too for a guy at her workplace that offered her drugs or something, or so I've been told.

Aywaaaay, glad THAT didn't happen to our couple here, that shit sucked for me, I don't want to read about that.
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Vivaldin - 1721878484
What is bro doing, you know she's already dating someone what are you doooing brooooooooooo stooooooooop

Also, uh... About our main guy, could he..

I wouldn't mind if he kept wearing that girl wig a while longer, maybe he could... Continue looking like a girl so that this peak Former Delinquent gf x Girlfailure gf almost-Yuri can continue, I kinda like it and wish I'd find an alternative somewhere.
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Vivaldin - 1721877673
So he WILL become her stepfather, I wasn't wrong about how things we're going.

Although, I don't think there was a need to spoil this part, why not let it play out without telling us beforehand ?

Also, they went to another world ? The spirit world ?! Are we in a rom-com or an Urban Fantasy ?
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Vivaldin - 1721877381
Does she have autism or is she just like that ?
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Vivaldin - 1721877110
Her sister's gay too, isn't it.
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Wow, you must have such a fun personality. I'm sure everyone cares about how you hate entire genres and... When a woman is a main character ?

Nah, you're right ! ALL stories should be about a REAL man doing stuffs. Literature really stopped being good once we inserted those.... Women in our stories ! In fact, why add any women at all, just to be sure they don't become too important they overshadow our main MALE character ! Oh wait that's Yaoi.

Ooooooh, I'm a gay ghost mango ! I'm going to haunt you forever and make you gaaaaaay !
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Vivaldin - 1721770644
Oh no !

Now they both don't want to talk about something unimportant about themselves !

First-Yuri World problems, much ? There's gay mango girls out there who are stuck in extremely suffocating love triangles ! Or their social status prevent them for loving each other openly ! Or one of them doesn't understand what love is ! OR worse yet, their gf dies of a disease ! And sometimes all of those at the same time for some reason...
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Vivaldin - 1721450038
See ? Wouldn't have happened if it was a Yuri !

...Unless he too would be changed to be a girl, and we get plenty of love triangle and other geometrical shapes in Yuri, sooo...
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Vivaldin - 1721449648
Nooo don't remind me of the crossdressing scene !

Now all I can think about is how better this mango would be if he had been a girl that looked liked that and we'd get a delinquent girl x normal girl Yuri.
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Vivaldin - 1721449158
Our girl is an accidental lesbian magnet, but with all that ''oh, she loves me. Ah, okay. I don't feel anything.'' it's like she's asexual or aromantic, or at this point I'm starting to think she has no feelings at all.

Oh wait, what if our main girl just has dancing-autism ?
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Vivaldin - 1721448622
You know, it's a bit weird how they try to portray adult themes like nudity and sexual assault, twice now for the later too, but then they decide to censor it for some reason ? What, are they really trying that hard to keep a PG-rating on a mango about a guy who punches other guys who abuse women ?

I mean, I'm not into that non-consensual stuff anyway, but it really got me wondering, if you want to add that kind of stuff to your story, why going to such length to censor everything to the point where we can barely see what's going on ?

Even the consensual stuff was heavily censored too, I don't think the artist understand that this mango can't be both about these themes and these actions while also keep everything away from our eyes.

Not that I care that much anyway, I just find the extremely persistent censoring in the face of this story really strange and kinda funny too.
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Vivaldin - 1721359408
I cast Love-Triangle-deletus.
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Vivaldin - 1721336813
Please, I swear to the Universe,

LET MY GIRL BE HAPPY !
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Vivaldin - 1721332002
Yuri tainted by how messed up and evil our other girl is, like she makes our main girl do some real fuck up shit under blackmail that'd ruin her entire life and say ''Oh, but it's YoU wHo DiD tHiS'' every time something bad happens, which is every chapter.

It's a downward spiral of abuse and corruption, ain't really my style. Read Kimi to Tsuzuru Utakata if you want a Popular Girl x Loner Girl Yuri and don't mind the feels that is both way better written and not as toxic as this chemical waste of pages.
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Vivaldin - 1721101276
Chapter 84

In which we get to read half a chapter, just to create an unnecessary cliffhanger.
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