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Vivaldin
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Vivaldin - 1727212800
Two months of wait, just to get to read ''See you next chapter !'' ?????

At this point, they have more romance development in the non-canon arts at the end !
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Vivaldin - 1727151111
She has the Booberinaroos.

The Badonkadonkers, even.
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Vivaldin - 1727150673
He misses more shots than when I use my Direct Hit.
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Vivaldin - 1727066520
Slightly toxic Fdom x msub who is already in love with his childhood friend but then surprisingly (or rather unsurprisingly) develops feelings for the Main Girl too, over time.

It's... Kinda good, from the few chapters I sampled ? ...If you forget how she sexually assaulted him on Chapter 4, the dynamic is nice but still, you can't help but feel something is wrong with her, and I'm not sure yet if that makes me see her as evil or hot... Maybe it's both, actually.
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Vivaldin - 1727065781
Nah man, the sexual violence tag is well-deserved.

This girl just assaulted him despite him telling her to stop, that's fucked up, bro.
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Vivaldin - 1726952447
It's really good and funny, but the ending has no conclusion or ANYTHING; it's like just another chapter.

I really liked reading this, but come on ! Why end something this good on such a non-satisfying way ?
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Vivaldin - 1726952301
No real ending ? No satisfiying conclusion ? No confession ? JUST some slight (theoretical) Yuri ?!

https://i.postimg.cc/FRk65n7j/i.gif
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Vivaldin - 1726867040
I know it's not completed yet, but I'm doing my review after 12 chapters early since I can't take much more of this.

This is a series of different oneshots, all in different worlds, with nothing (except a weird-ass ''God'', who is only there some chapters) connecting them. It's not always Fantasy, there's a Virtual Reality one on Chapter 8, a particularly weird one of the bunch, but therein lies a problem:

It just got one joke, a single joke, all chapter, all mango, we've got underage teenage girls, we're gonna strip 'em of their clothes one way or another, do not expect it to make sense, do not expect anything else to come out of this but this singular joke and A LOT of consensual and (far too many times) non-consensual exhibitionism.

I guess it's kinda funny in a way, some times. But... Eh, it's definitely not taking itself seriously at all or trying to do something interesting with its premise.
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Vivaldin - 1726866755
Man, look how they massacred my favourite trope of Knight Girls !
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Vivaldin - 1726866511
Bro got beheaded at least 50-100 times, WILLINGLY, just to see someone naked.

I don't know if I should be amazed by the dedication, or terrified someone would go through such pain for such a vain, selfish goal.
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Vivaldin - 1726866222
Okay this one was good, IF THEY DROPPED THE WHOLE UNIMPORTANT CLOTHE REMOVAL THEY DO every SINGLE chapter.
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Vivaldin - 1726865906
One Joke,

I don't know why,

I'm reading a mango wih only one joke to try,

Keep that in mind that they designed this comic to be about adolescent girls in other worlds going through puberty,

and that's all I know.

Time is a valuable thing, watch it fly by as I continue reading this thing.

Watch the productive hours countdown to the end of the day, the clock tick like the waves of clothes removed, it's so unreal.

Didn't look how much time I wasted below, watch all that productive time thrown out of the window, trying to hold on but I didn't even know I wasted it all just to read a weird underage exhib mangoooooooooooo

I kept believing it might turn good if I stay inside, and even though I tried (to like this), it all fell apart, whatever good this could be will eventually be a memory of a time I


TRIED SO HARD, TO LIKE THIS MANGO,

BUT IN THE END, IT DOESN'T EVEN MATTER.

I HAD TO READ ALL THIS, AND LOOSE IT ALL (my valuable, finite time),

BUT IN THE END, IT JUST GOT ONE (1) JOOOOOKEEEE !
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Vivaldin - 1726864947
....Wouldn't that mean that in some incomprehensible, esoteric way, they're all reincarnating into the world of the Hot Springs chapter, and that for some reason, it is both the world from the book of said chapter, and a Virtual Reality game ?
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Vivaldin - 1726864774
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaand we're back to the weird exhibitionism trope of this mango.

I don't know what I'm doing here since I don't really like it, this IS what this mango is about.
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Vivaldin - 1726863898
....

...Just tell them you need to go to the toilet ?
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Vivaldin - 1726863777
That was... Actually a good story. I'd kinda read this if it was a series, maybe.

And there was only one (1) sexual harassment joke ! Well, 2 if you count the windy skirts caused by... The bird's roar ?
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