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Oooo, big surprise. Fuck, if this shit surprised anyone then this must be their first romance plot.

for those people, welcome to the world of literature, get used to this. Its in every dramatic romance ever.
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yeah, but they all need time to process first. so we can only hope none of them do anything stupid until then.
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no, they said next to impossible because the conflicting powers would typically drive people insane or just straight out kill them, and also there's assistant manager panda whos an immortal and a bear shifter.
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yup, probably disguise magic. either through a tool or a skill.
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as i do in all things. i have had a long and storied past and intend to keep it as such going forward.
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that an evil grin you got there, but its nowhere near the immoral loch. recognize your betters and bow to them, peasant.
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With the system forcing these scenarios and events on her all the romance just feels wrong(forced and unnatural to be specific(big surprise there(not really))) as a wise man once said "love is like a fart, if you try to force it, it'll probably just end up crap."
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the whole "she's a really nice girl, but if you talk to her the world collapses" bit just sent me.
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whelp, that's over now.
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i don't mind the backstories in and of themselves. it's interesting to get to know the pasts and mindsets of these other characters. the problem is the length and timing. they should only be a chapter, two maximum, and definitely shouldn't pop up in the middle of a fight.

Give me a backstory after the fight as they lay dying of something, not right in the middle of the fight. It drags away form the action and loses all the built up tension from the fight, so when it goes back to fighting the battle feels unimportant or downright meaningless.
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how the hell did you manage to get your cursor in the shot?
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if i remember correctly the problem lies in the high sugar content of carrots.
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oh she clearly has, she just doesn't want to admit it.
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two sides of the same coin. Truck-kun creates stories, and Axe-kun ends them.
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so tonight is the night bitches die i see.
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and the axe falls ever hard. god, this shit was awful though so I'm not surprised. the only reason it was good is because it was so bad.
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congratulations. he got rid of your Cancer.
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girl, yandere or not, abducting him is a mistake. cause if you do you'll have at least 5 other yanderes coming for you.
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alright, what petty political bullshit are the dipshit humans tryna pull now.
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I hope Monica becomes a good friend. Naviah could definitely use one.
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