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axed. cant say I'm surprised. there was potential for a good crafting isekai at the start, but then it went down the basic shounen route and got rather dull.
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I'd say it's impressive more than bad, but I'm not a doctor so i wouldn't know.
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so he can turn day to night is his surrounding area, thus nullifying his greatest weakness. well played keeping that card hidden.
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More of the same really, if you didn’t like it then you still wouldn’t like it now.
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The strong devour the weak, but you need to recognize that you are the weak.
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I agree, but Atie says shes over it, and as the main victim she gets the final say.

But for arguments sake let’s say Atie did want her punished, what kinda punishment would be worse than her current situation?

She’s completely isolated and forced to fend for herself in all aspects. This dungeon is only good if you have searching/navigating skills, and given how much she’s getting lost she clearly doesn’t, meaning shes only here cause of the free entry, meaning she cant afford to go to a safer dungeon, but still has to go in dungeons to make money for her own survival. She has no guarantee of a next meal or even a warm bed to sleep in at night, and given how easily she got caught in that trap she doesn’t have the survival skills to take care of herself either.

She’s essentially homeless and ostracized from the community, forced to risk her life every day just to get her next meal barely clinging on to life. If thats not a fate worse than death I don't know what is.

And if you think that she should also be sold into slavery that would still grant her basic care, which would be slightly better than how she is now. Even the worst master would give her some stale or rotten food to eat and a straw mat to sleep on, currently she doesn’t even have that. So again what worse punishment is there for her?
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It's more about your phrasing here. it feels more like a demand or threat than a request or reminder. if it was phased like a request, I would've scrolled on without a second glance. But when you say things like "you need to" vs. "could you" it makes a whole world of difference.

Also, this isn't reprimanding its just pointing out a clearer picture. I'm not saying you've done anything wrong, I'm just pointing out your way of going about it isn't going to get you anywhere.

To add to this, I'd like to question why choosing to display a picture of a lightly dressed, not in just underwear or completely nude mind you, demon(dragon?) maid girl considered evil? Is it kind of erotic, sure, but evil? would you mind clarifying that, or was there a different previous PFP that I didn't see?
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that's a fuckin wild ass take but alright.
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Is this really a website you'd want kids to be on anyways?

Regardless, if you want to block someone, just block them, threatening is pointless in an anonymous space like the internet.

You facilitate you're own experience and you're free to express yourself however you choose, but you can't stop others from doing the same.
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living with her actions actually seems far crueler than just flat out killing her. She was completely abandoned, and the other party members likely told any would be new party members to steer clear, so she's been struggling on her own all this time. Atie's being very nonchalant about it, but to me it seems less "lighthearted' and more "not worth the effort".

Looking at how this story has progressed its likely that she'll join the party, and at that point I'll feel that this is dumb. But until that happens I'll just say she got what she deserves and she should be left like that for the rest of her miserable life.
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my question is why are there so many orphans that they've formed three(four if you count Phillips group) large gangs.
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I kinda hate those kinds of people. Those who try to "help" others without actually helping, just pushing forward with their own narrative, fully convinced its for the others own good. please, just; talk to the other person, see what they really want and need and then discuss what you want to do to "help" them.
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it essentially is. author entered their own book as their op oc
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maybe he was too strong. labyrinth master feared usurpation.
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Is an option. Could also go towards child of the first witch, thus a high affinity.
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To let the creators rest and plot out the story’s future.
Leave a little something to make sure the readers come back for the next season.
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Could be, but that feels like a cop out.
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