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I demand Sauce
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I demand Sauce - 1720588862
The relationship writing could use some work, imo, but I honestly don't think I'd be able to do much better than this.
If this is 3/5, I'd probably be able to do 3.5/5, 4/5 if I tried my hardest and did a bunch of rewrites
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I demand Sauce - 1720504420
Love weird npcs, but she's not weird
She's just a bootlicker
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He should die like a dog even if he wasn't
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I demand Sauce - 1720338296
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Sauce: "My Divorced Crybaby Neighbor" or something
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I demand Sauce - 1720170251
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Submissive, huh? His aspiring gf will like that
https://i.postimg.cc/PJbZHQpm/i.jpg
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I love his character, I'd hate him if he was real

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More or less
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I demand Sauce - 1720065531
Flash cut to the leader being the only one alive, on his knees with his hands in the air, and Lee Geon fending off a frothing scorpio-lady
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Rereading definitely helps with remembering people and it helps kill the anxiety a bit
I personally keep rereading because I value how much thought the author puts into every stretch of the story. I imagine so many others would have skipped something like this altogether since it isn't nearly as flashy as the fighting
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I demand Sauce - 1720062407
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Oh dear god you're right
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I'll admit my comment was mostly to poke the bear, it was on other pages that we actually argued
I've had a bit of a talk with some more knowledgeable friends about neo-pronouns and I've somewhat accepted them more, but my feelings over "xe/xir" have remained (they're apparently supposed to be a sort of replacement for "Miss/Sir" as well as "They/Them" which doesn't make sense to me)

She's literally a psychic loli with a little sister that has a more endowed body than her, I don't understand the dislike bombing of that one
Other people are dislike bombing TP because it's neopronouns, yeah

It's okay to overthink on the internet, it's pretty inconsequential at the end of the day
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I demand Sauce - 1719998545
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I demand Sauce - 1719984882
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They've done this for other characters in other stories, and we've argued about it before
I also haven't disliked them, but I'm giving them crap about using the incorrect pronouns for someone whose pronouns are already established
If the author wants to use neo-pronouns, I'll be fine with it, but this "xe/xer" stuff is pointless since "they/them" already exist as gender neutral pronouns
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