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yilo - 1712428311
REVIEW

premise:
guy fights against strong demon god and its helpers and dies in the process. thanks to a certain book he returns back in time to fix his mistakes and prepares to fight against the demon god once more.

ratings:
art: 5/10 its not bad but there are things that are lacking, but i like the style.
story: 6/10 its reincarnation into the past with the OP powers of future sight. he abuses every little inch that is given to him. which i like about him.
world building: 4/10 the places we see, the interractions between different characters that shape and change the world is intresting. but this is a story that revolves around its main character. if the main character were to cease then i feel like the whole world would stop and everything would go to shit. so yeah kinda weak.
character development: 7/10 the characters are funny, quirky, deceitful, hateful, prideful and they grow maybe not in correct ways but they do. we see that each action that mc takes has massive effect on the other characters growth.
overall rating: 5/10 the story begins very slow, first 200 chapters are spent in glory city alone. then 100 chapters are spent in the tianyun plattaue, the nether realm and back in glory city. the chapters from 299-500 are spend in the draconic ruins realm. the first 400 chapters are very slow. but then all of a sudden around ch370s it gets kicked into gear 11... we go from going march 1 to march 7-8 breaking our necks in the speed and the pacing of the story is off. so yeah that sucks.

my gripes with the manhua:
i have been reading this story since like 2015, i remember waiting for new chapters to drop everyday and would read them thursday mornings during my uni classes secretly. it was so fun, but as time went on this manhua was being translated with its chapters chopped in half. which meant i no longer could read the whole chapters. like imagine if someone said i had an accident and my penis got chopped in half and you'd be like: D: omg thats horrible. then he goes to say yes i went from 3inches to 1.5 inches. and you are like: bruh. that is exactly what is happening with this manhua. meanwhile all the other manhua's are releasing x10 the length of this manhuas chapters almost weekly. so i wonder what keeps them so busy from doing more.
final toughts:
anyways i have been following this manhua for a long time and have loved& hated it for a while. it used to be the best manhua in my eyes. but it has long since lost that spot unfortunately. but i still love it and i think you should give it a try too honestly.

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yilo - 1712426949
the fight against the sage emperor is drawing near. now that we have collected the treasures from the tiny world, revived ye zong and the saved the people. we only have 3-4 more things left before manhua ends.
-fight the demon god sect and its 2 smaller factions. after winning the war unite the draconic ream for real this time.
-go to the god land to conquer it
-fight the sage emperor
-marry ye ziyun, xiao ning'er, long yuyin, xiao yu and goddess yu yang. the end
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yilo I watch Anime - 1712423566
but i already mastered this law. do you have any other laws that are superior?
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yilo - 1712417958
hohohoho nie li is a true bro, he set up 100 thousand people together in a single move. but he needs to get their sect leader to lead the charge otherwise its gonna be troublesome.
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yilo Sanosuke - 1712417555
what drama? she is gonna join them for a treesome. https://i.postimg.cc/MHYG59vC/i.gif
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yilo The_Demon - 1712417105
I am a servant of the Secret Fire, wielder of the flame of Anor. The dark fire will not avail you, flame of Udûn. Go back to the depts of HELL!!! https://i.postimg.cc/zB6v3y4Q/i.gif https://i.postimg.cc/65sTXGr2/i.gif
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yilo - 1712386200
well bro didnt even lift a fking finger or threw a fist. that was a bust...
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yilo - 1712346399
myriad painting of thousand mountains and rivers. nice, its time to initiate the duplication glitch.
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yilo - 1712346146
its time for nie li to form his alliance by pumping the stocks of gu bei, long yuyin and li xingyan. so they can all become patriarchs of their respective families and help nie li become the sect master. the plan is start to take form now.
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yilo - 1712318211
https://i.postimg.cc/pr4tqL6v/i.png
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yilo - 1712291387
how to tame an evil witch into being your bitch:
step1 talk shit to her to provoke her.
step2 make a bet with her
step3 whip her to submission
step4 hehehehehe
step5 ???
step6 profit
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yilo Ullr - 1712282935
https://i.postimg.cc/CMH24F3D/i.jpg
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yilo Saitama Sakuta - 1712204156
hmmm she is his 2nd wife.
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yilo - 1712203665
yezong punishing nie li by spanking him shall forever remain in our minds. https://i.postimg.cc/zXdNjrHx/i.gif https://i.postimg.cc/0NSqPKW4/i.gif https://i.postimg.cc/JnWCn7Sz/i.jpg
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yilo Saitama Sakuta - 1712203430
join the party pall, we all mad. that demonlord is gonna pay for his momentary lapse in judgement.
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yilo - 1712199812
https://i.postimg.cc/L5SJSpmc/i.png
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yilo User-6822758295 - 1712196988
be bold or go home bald.
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yilo - 1712195013
https://i.postimg.cc/q7pmYVdF/i.jpg
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yilo Sleepless Bonk - 1712177363
sorry i really dont know. i have had it for so long too without the sauce.
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yilo Saitama Sakuta - 1712174795
which part? the cultivating together? the tundergods meteorite sword? or the whole manhua?
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