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yilo - 1715040539
review:
----------------------------------------------heavy spoilers below this point read at own risk------------------------------------
premise:
idk how to honestly describe the premise because its a fucking hotpot of multiple genre's mixed into one. the guy who is mc, is aparently an author, a hunter, a god, there are constellations, RTS-game like feature. all of that shit mixed into one to make this thing.

story:
a struggling author, finds an app on his phone while he struggles to write a new story. the app lets him become A MIGHTY GOD OF ANTS! ants? wtf??? alright, after killing worshipping ants, he gets the evil god perk. he also now has access to the first plot armour of the story, aka the god store. as he purchases powers with the coins he gets from killing ants. he wants to see if he has awakened as a hunter. ah yes this story also has portals, hunters, monsters and items. he then has a chance encounter with a hunter to make her his deciple.... this is gonna take a while so i will leave it there.

ratings:
art: 8/10 its pretty good, no complaints about it, the characters look dope, and monsters look incredible.
character development: 5/10 its not great but its there. so a passing grade is due.
worldbuilding: 2/10 what the actual fuck am i reading man... look not being able to decide between 2 cool ideas and implementing both is fine. example: murim login. but like 10 different ideas smashed into one is a horrible fucking idea...
story: 4/10 idk like every 3-4 chapters a different thrope takes the lead and nothing makes real sense.
overall rating: 4/10 i dont hate this manhwa which is weird... but i dont like it either. this manhwa doesnt have an identity because it has too many of them, the actual author of this story, thought it would be a fantastic idea to mesh, constillations, civillization building, hunters and dungeons, inception of authors entering their stories, downloading an app on your mobile phone to make you become op and a sysyem thropes all mashed together to create this steaming pile of shi... and i still was entertained.

final thoughts:
i honestly dont know what to say, i hate it but i dont hate it. i enjoyed reading it even though the idea of this manhwa alone pisses me off. just stick to 1 or 2 ideas and go with it instead of this shit. author feels like he is competent enough to take on anyone of these thropes/genre's on alone or even a 2in1 for that matter. but because he has so many of them in one it feels shit to read it. give it a shot yourself and you will understand what i mean.
thats it, i have no negative or postive thing to say about this other than "what the fuck am i reading???"
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yilo UnbalancedQuota - 1715037786
why are you looking for another mans dick? seems sus. wanna explain yourself?https://i.postimg.cc/TPsgNm5v/i.jpg
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yilo Formless Sword - 1715036347
i am sure you will figure out what i meant by this in a chapter or two hunderd... if i spill the beans its too big of a spoiler.
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yilo Ballsdeep69 - 1715031645
aparently he is working with a micro biologist from the zoo.
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yilo UnbalancedQuota - 1715030162
wtf? stopming on them now may give you a little bit of coins. but what if you could get x100000000 ammount of coins by letting the whole ant colony worship you? sometimes you need to look father than your dick.
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yilo Dice87 - 1715007039
most likely mistranslation. my guess would be like spiked minatour.
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yilo Monad - 1714990445
right this was my line of thinking too. i am glad i am not the only one. yes i fully agree with women becoming half virgins, memories about your first time are half the experience.
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yilo Neko Majin C - 1714948206
what, so that he can eat the idiots with the clipboards? yeah surely that will go well.
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yilo Donny_Dont - 1714946409
go ahead, go ahead. hehehe, i named them evil woody 2-7. :D
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yilo Donny_Dont - 1714945683
saw the last one in r/memepiece i was like that is amazing i have to share this with you.
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<3 heheheheheheh, aight enough trolling. have a good day.
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hehehe the cross you are imagening + vs the cross i am imagening X
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yilo Neko Majin C - 1714928484
i have a sneaking suspicion that he experimented with the human girls in creating the aphrodisiac before he used that on the elves.
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yilo THOT PATROL - 1714917044
well more like he fucked the spirit of the tree. but yes by proxy he fucked the tree.
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yilo Star Cerberus - 1714915644
https://i.postimg.cc/520zsyyV/i.jpg
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i hope this will cheer you up/ for your troubles: https://i.postimg.cc/g2rMw2Yj/i.png
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yilo Lolepiking - 1714912037
we say that but then when it comes to actually killing them we just let them go to jail and then when they are released they go back to doing the same shit.
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yilo Neko Majin C - 1714911991
ah you mean the chapter? yeah.
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