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yilo
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yilo - 1725493054
oh shit its done? well that was short lived story. thanks author for not dragging it out. see you next time. https://i.postimg.cc/1zQ1TSyL/i.gif and https://i.postimg.cc/PxfsXMpy/i.jpg
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yilo Dice_24K - 1725492772
man i really loved the era where we kept getting 3chapters each day. that was a fucking bliss.
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yilo - 1725492633
holy fucking shit, this is still ongoing??? bro i havent read a single chapter since like 2021 because the end was neigh. they then decided to go from 3 chapters per day to 1 chapters every few days... they are milking the series hard at this point. i feel kinda sad. i just want it to be done so people can enjoy it in its whole from start to finish.
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yilo KiliSloe - 1725492291
dont do it, https://i.postimg.cc/V6WT20Kt/i.png
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yilo - 1725491534
--------------review time---------------------

premise: guy gets death note from the chinese supermarket, instead of names he writes characters to be summoned by meeting a certain prerequisite and you pay a hefty price for the summoning. all so that mc can live longer.

ratings:
[ art: 6/10 ] it felt kinda similair to "i am really not the evil god's lackey" but better. after thinking more upon it i take that back, the evil gods lackey draws magnificent ASSets. this one however does not. i hope i didnt accidentally get some peoples hopes up.
[ story 2/10 ] its a shitty rip off of death note, without risk and reward, without brain power, without plot twists, he doesnt even have to risk shit or pay something to write new urban legends. hell the mc is written to be so stupid the guy takes like 5 whole days to come up with 2 urban stories. bruh even the most uncreative vegetable can think off of 100 urban legends with wacky characters that have pre-reqs for summoning and deadly prices attached to summoning them. but not this guy...
[ characters 3/10 ] like what can i say without sounding like an asshole? the milf is hot looking but she has negative iq, the urban legends he writes about are kinda cool, but lack depth besides being used in 1 off's. as for the other cast members. they might aswell have used silhouettes, because i cant remember what even 1 character looked like.
[ world building 2/10 ] its just bad, you know how you have like 3 different kinds world building? there is the naruto approach of world stops if naruto isnt there, then there is the one piece method of weither luffy is there or not the world will keep on spinning where they arent even there for some major shit happening. then we have a mix between the two. where the mc has major impact on events happening in the world but stuff does happen even if he isnt there. this world chose the naruto approach and they fucking shit the bed...

[overal rating 3/10] i dont fully hate it but my god do you need to turn your brain off, close your eyes and just keep scrolling to get through this story. like there is absolutely no price for mc using the book. only his imagination. i feel sad/bad for having wasted my time on this dont make my mistakes.

so should you read this? hope this meme explains it all https://i.postimg.cc/CKFxWkNC/i.png

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yilo - 1725488458
so writing urban legends is absolutely free? he doesnt have a maximum ammount he can write? he gets a blank book with infinite time and this fker isnt smart enough to come up with the dumbest and most bizarre stories?

my expectations for this were abit higher than usual but so far i am disappointed.
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yilo - 1725487517
oooh new mahua dropped time to dive in and see who's who and what's what. i shall return with my toughts should anyone be intrested in reading this.
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yilo - 1725483311
man i love figs, but i never knew it had a double meaning like that? we even have 3 fig trees in our garden. i prefer my apple trees and 1 singular pear tree that delivers twice as much as my 4 apple trees.
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yilo - 1725482885
https://i.postimg.cc/xT9hG8pN/i.jpg
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yilo - 1725480630
oh man what a smart way to handle your enemies, by allowing them to escape after finding your hidden village, surely this wont come back to bite him in the ass. tired of this shit man. you need to behead them and send 1 of the heads in a box to the noble with the message, next time you send someone make sure to dig a grave because i will come for your head too.
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yilo - 1725479952
https://i.postimg.cc/rmtML3CX/i.png i am about to go on a murder spree. https://i.postimg.cc/WznKRwKc/i.gif
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yilo - 1725476979
if anyone dares to ruin that relationship i will do this to them: https://i.postimg.cc/2y5Bzz69/i.gif
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yilo - 1725475652
https://i.postimg.cc/fWYc5LnZ/i.jpg https://i.postimg.cc/d3c8wMCz/i.png
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yilo Chrono Triggered - 1725471755
nah it isnt even that bad, it feels it is written by someone who just finished collage is trying his/her hand at being a mangaka. they just need to gain a lttle experience and it will be much better. but it still is better than some manhua's so i aint complaining.
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yilo Donny_Dont - 1725365788
did it got axed or finish? i honestly read like 150 chapters before i dropped.
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yilo Gakuku - 1725289344
https://i.postimg.cc/nLRbv0VP/i.gif
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yilo NadeZ - 1725261908
dont worry about it.
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yilo ranamata - 1725234940
black boxes or glaring lights. pick your poison.
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yilo GI.Fullshot - 1725232251
lmk how they die in 2080, i might be still alive after world war 3.
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