It must suck to be those poor 1* party-filler dudes.

https://i.postimg.cc/3JCYzZcj/i.jpg
It's on this site and is complete, but don't expect much from it (it's pretty much hentai).

Earlier on, someone complained that only the good-looking people lived; now, the top comment is complaining about how all these cool-looking people died instantly.

Okay, so I was officially wrong about leaving the mage to protect the walls...
https://i.postimg.cc/FzQx90Gb/i.jpg

Exactly what I wrote too.
For such a creative author, he didn't think logically about this (or he didn't want the mission to switch to Easy mode).

Isn't it a mistake to not leave the fire nuker mage behind the safety of the walls, where she can calmly conjure up huge spells to wipe out scores of the enemy at a time, drink mana potions and repeat?
It's already been shown that her casting time is slow and she's immobile while doing so, making her a very bad fit for a swift raidng team.

1* means nothing when you have Plot Armour.
https://i.postimg.cc/P5Bs8YN1/i.jpg

Tf... I really felt it when those boys died.
https://i.postimg.cc/J4DqwPkj/i.jpg
The source is, Storm Inn. I did crop and label the image but I can't find that version now among the 2 million I seem to have!

The other kid got off lightly.

FYI: If a couple doesn't fuck even once, the marriage is null and void. So, can our loser MC lose his cherry in 100 days and hope for a happy ever after?
https://i.postimg.cc/YS4FKgQs/i.jpg

Horrible update schedule, so I'll bookmark and come back in a couple of years.

Is this titled, Infinite Gatcha, or, Pick me up?
It changes every chapter.

Why tf was that chapter so confusing?
Anyway, is MC now a 1* with a 4*'s stats?

https://i.postimg.cc/N042MWTS/i.jpg
I know I'm not the only one who saw something else before noticing the angels...

WTF?
I hope this wasn't an actual fucking random spoiler - that would be a complete cock thing to do.

1/5
It's just arse.

I would write a review, but why bother when you can read this and see for yourself exactly why it sucks balls in just a few chapters?
That's an ultra lazy comment, but fuck it - it's 2:35 in the morning, I'm tired, and the 9 chapters I managed to scroll through of this shit, was giving it way too much time already.

How I feel, reading this:
https://i.postimg.cc/HkRkvN2k/i.jpg

So how the fuck did army grunts know MC is the cause of the blood gates?

I hope you can find a better balance, dude.

Thanks for this; I was wondering why the first 3 chapters were (Revised).
I have to say though: the original sounds horrendous! I'm glad the beginning got changed.

With that though, after the said 3 chapters, I'm already thinking of dropping this. I'll give it a couple of chapters to improve, but so far, it's a proper shit show.