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Name Withheld Darkun2? - 1727362227
Gotcha.

I'm on chapter 14 now - it's been a good read so far.
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Name Withheld - 1727361456
That was a damn good chapter; I really like her guilty expression there, at the end, as if she's sullied the purity of their three-way relationship.
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Name Withheld Darkun2? - 1727360193
Dude, the whole thing is about a man living with two women and engaging in sexual intercourse with them both... how can it not be a love triangle?
I'm just hoping for no lesbian shit, because that'll be when I cash out!
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Name Withheld - 1727359658
Well, that's fucked up.
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Name Withheld - 1727171587
This is kind of weird... but then, some poor suckers always seem to attract these sorts of nutty women.
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Name Withheld - 1727126522
What's that about never putting your dick in crazy...?
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Name Withheld - 1727099274
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Pretty much dog shit.

Knowing this was only 40 chapters and them admittedly flying by, I went against my own judgment and pushed on to the ending... which was just as bad as the rest of this crap!
Basically, some kid goes into an ultra-realistic VR war game, where... wait for it... he dies.And then he keeps dying. Over and over.

To compare this to brilliant works like, Eternally Regressing Knight, is to do both an injustice; it takes around 19 chapters of this shit for anything to happen, as the MC respawns seemingly endlessly, with zero personal or story progression. Worse than that is the fact that, because it's a game, there's never any sense of him being in any real danger. Some may argue that the breaking of his psyche is the real threat, but it's so poorly handled, it feels more like a kid getting frustrated when dying over and over on some stupidly difficult XBox crap.
Thankfully, this does conclude and wasn't just axed, but with the final fight being nothing but blurry lines with speech bubbles thrown in, even the climax is entirely unsatisfying.

I genuinely feel like I've eaten a turd so you won't have to... yet, despite that, there were some readers who seemed to actually enjoy this!
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Name Withheld - 1727098085
A dog shit ending to a dog shit comic.
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Name Withheld - 1727031643
I'm sorry if my negativity has affected anyone's pleasure of reading this - I really should've just dropped it early on - but FFS, this has been one of the biggest bags of shit I've ever suffered to finish.
So now the VR game is actually an alternative reality?

To the author:https://i.postimg.cc/jdR4YpPN/i.jpg
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Name Withheld - 1727030453
And then someone's girlfriend gets captured, just to add cliché to the turd-fire.
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Name Withheld - 1727029985
Thank fuck there are only 8 chapters left. I wonder if making it to the end of this crap unlocks an achievement?
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Name Withheld - 1727028656
Wait... if she resets but he continues, how do they match up?
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Name Withheld - 1727027127
https://i.postimg.cc/fLpxTZBW/i.png
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Name Withheld - 1727013048
Why does it feel like, after 23 chapters, only now has something happened?
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A fair point - I must've been tired.
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Name Withheld - 1727002560
If the hot blonde turns braindead from the VR and the Waifu becomes her consciousness so her and MC can live happily ever after in the real world, this author should eat a turd.
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Name Withheld - 1727002214
Sigh. So for 19 chapters he could only die, but because the dev's give Waifu the flu, he's going to turn into an immortal Lu Bu?

FFS this is shit.
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Name Withheld - 1727001613
MC: I'll call you... Old fashioned Photograph.

WAIFU: I prefer, Kodak.
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Name Withheld - 1727000997
I wanted to drop this 5 or 6 chapters ago already, but I keep clicking, NEXT, as if I'm morbidly obsessed with making it to the ending.

That, ironically, is also the MC's attitude in this non-progressing shit-fest.
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Name Withheld - 1727000584
Is this all a metaphor:
The real enemies are the controllers? I.e.the government?
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