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oonhas
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oonhas - 1744733527
In Ch 9. MC says while looking at the guild board, that meals cost 1000 ZOR per meal (either on average, or the guild/academy, it wasn't specified),
which I already though to be a translation error of some sort.
And in this chapter the reward for taking down a B-class beast is supposed to cost 8000 ZOR, meaning 8 meals worth to risk your life (actually by all sense, B-class beast is a high one, meaning a party of regular people probably is a minimum to take it down)..? How does that make ANY sense.
This is the reason why you should explain the most basic sh1t information about currency in your world, and how much costs a night at the inn, how much a regular person makes money in a day, etc. etc.
Getting 8 meals worth of money from a B-class beast subjucation just doesn't make ANY sense, especially if it's a party to take it down.
And yeah I get that they can get more money from the body parts of the beast (possibly), but even then 8 meals worth of money makes no sense, since it's a B-class.
So either there's at least one zero too much somewhere, or one zero less somewhere than there should be to make things more sense.
Just saying.
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oonhas - 1744617386
Murderers & attempted rapists, are forgiven/given second chance on the spot? REALLY?
Also it was implied that MC would've spared them if they didn't instantly turn on him like they did, since MC waited for them to act first,
because if he was gonna kill them eitherway, then why the act of even releasing them? So stupid either way.
And I hate this sh1t when the author doesn't have the balls to make the protagonist a cold-blooded executioner, but instead the villains are killed either by monsters or by the enviroment instead, so that MC gets to keep his hands clean of murdering other people.
I've seen this same sh1t in so many isekai stories already.
I just can't take this protagonist nor this author seriously anymore after this chapter.
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oonhas - 1744610219
MC is basically a psychopath at this point, if him deciding to save the life of his childhood-friend is an "illogical" decision, instead of playing it safe and basically just sacrificing her life to bait the boss. That's the reason I dislike this protagonist.
He always thinks in the moment, and doesn't see the long term benefits for helping people to survive.
Let's not forget that this same bitch MC was crying for help in that orc fight, even though he never helped other people in their fights before.
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oonhas - 1744606896
The irony here is, that if MC as an onlooker was watching some other dude having this fight, and that other poor guy was crying for help, MC would be the last person to help.
He would just not risk it and would just keep on walking, like we have seen him done several times before.
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oonhas - 1744605969
MC just dropping heavy sh1t on his enemies is the most unimaginative thing in this manga..
All those skills to fight with, and he just squeezez them like a bug.
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oonhas - 1743887784
Considering MC had to experience the feeling of death 30x times to get those things, plus the deaths for training the rat.. Everything is super cheap in this store.
The system officially sucks äess hard.
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oonhas - 1743749808
If she hated her foster brother before she met MC, then she didn't even have any reason not to tell him that she was "related" to the bully?
Seems like it was just a lazy plot convenience to be revealed later for cheap drama.
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oonhas - 1743749035
Is this MC mentally ill? He has mood swings like he's going through some menopause sh1t. I feel embarrassed for this author. Do you want us to root for your protagonist, or do you want us despise and pity him? Which is it.
I dislike this sh|t so much right now, especially since this had potential to be decent. Now it's below average, because MC turned into a suicidal b|tch because he saw his crush leave with the guy he planned to murder..?
Yeah okey commit a suicide, but at the very least murder the bully first, and maybe even the girl before you off yourself. That's how anyone with balls would do it.
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oonhas - 1743748103
Yooo what the F was that plot development? MC's bully appears out of NOWHERE, and acts like he has been watching them fight this boss since the beginning, and knows MC is down there somewhere? I was sure MC was just having a dream in a dream type situation.
I just lost all and every amount of likability towards this author for this 3rd rate villain development.
Also why is Arisu still humoring this dude? What does the past matter, she could easily just kill him, no? For all they know, the world has ended, and the past connections shouldn't matter sh1t, like how strong or influental someones family was in the normal reality.
Also MC was prepared to kill this guy, but now his mentality is totally collapsing and acting like some b1tch..? So does he have balls or doesn't he?
This development should only make him want to kill the bully twice as much than before, and maybe the girl among him too.
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oonhas - 1743744708
MC being a lowkey retard for suggesting machine's name be their building, especially since he already saw his bully be alive murdering a person, and surely he has his posse with him.
Also, he had a 4th summon which he never even tried? At least I'm pretty sure we never saw it being used, right?
It could possibly be a cauldron with a ready meal/soup inside, or it could be full of potion/healing liquid, etc.
Seems like such an idiotic move to just erase a skill like that without first properly investigating what it does, especially since he still hasn't seen any texts he can't read.
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oonhas - 1743742789
Why wasn't she in his party? Why isn't everyone already? Seems like a plothole.
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oonhas - 1743736033
If they were gonna let you go they wouldn't force you do it with a gun.
These two, MC and his "bro" are just a bit stupid honestly. Who just goes to meet total strangers like that alone when you could've went together.
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oonhas - 1743733822
This doesn't make sense, because the hallway side of that door should already look like a warzone, having the walls, floor and the cealing be badly destroyed.
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oonhas - 1743732950
Literally the best roommate.
-Girl
-Cute
-Not loud
-Good morals
-Not slut
-Not a backstabber
-Item box skill
-Cute

Now MC just needs the nurse girl to join their little commune. That's all you need for the apolypse.
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oonhas - 1743732003
I hate this sh1t when the author makes the protagonist this anti-social d1ckhead even though there's this cute and harmless creature asking for help and a safe place to live in.
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oonhas - 1743731703
MC you better protect and take care of the neet girl so she doesn't get robbed/hurt.
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oonhas - 1743731456
I wouldn't be surprised if that's her actual name, meaning she's some reincarnated person from other dimension. That would also explain her lack of knowledge.
Anyways she's cute and I would 100% move in with her if the opportunity presented itself during an apocalypse. Clearly she needs help with certain things, and I bet she has some skills of her own to help you right back. Just a symphatetic kinda person you just want to protect and take care of.
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oonhas - 1743730255
In the name of fairness and gender equality, MC should slap her right back, but twice as hard.
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oonhas - 1743608556
Great Sage was the obvious choice.
Honestly, is there anything greater and cooler than being a literal wizard in fantasy setting?
Also summoning and spirit magic? How fricking cool would that be.
He could just do some magic spell to make everyone forget he was there, or make himself invisible, etc..
Or just say he's about to have diarrhea, and run away. Besides, can't he just lie that he chose plebeian?
And if they want to see his card, so what if he refuses and/or runs away? Are they actually gonna hunt him?
This seems like such a minor & stupid problem that's blown out of proportions.
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