I feel bad for the childhood friend ending up that way. Hopefully she redeems herself and learns from her mistakes.

So MC's "former" childhood friend is a slut with short skirts and beta-orbiters constantly hovering around her, calling her "princess" and inflating her ego?
Nooo author-san why did you do this? Did this happen to your own friend-girl?
I would've preferred if she just stayed the innocent, nice childhood friend type.

Yamada the BFF

MC should set up a situation in the dungeon, where Kayoko would be in a life threatening situation (though not really, because MC would be actually in control of the situation), and the only way to save her would be endanger Kei-kuns own life, making his to choose either saving Kayoko and possibly dying while trying, or having the option to run away, saving his own life.
That way he and Kayoko would know his true character.

This robot is clearly sentient. MC should actually use it as a therapist and talk to it about his parents passing. Clearly it still bothers him if he likes evading the topic.

She's not a good friend. Well she has been so far. Actually her ditching MC like that so suddenly is honestly out of character of what we've seen of her so far.
I dislike it when author makes the characters, acting out of character for plot convenience.

Things I dislike about this story:
-MC forgiving at all/so easily, to the person who murdered him, even though she was one if his "harem" members, meaning one of the closest people to you betrayed you.
-MC lacks emotionals awareness towards this beast girl. He totally doesn't understand the trauma and sadness she and the other girls have gone through. And after they meet after so long? "You have to go back, because reasons"? Wholy sh*t dude that's so stupid. No wonder this virgin got murdered if he's so stupid and blind to other peoples feelings and emotional distress.
Imagine being this very simple yet child minded beast girl, who lost their parental figure and their heart breaks from sadness because of it, and after meeting them once again finally after so long time, they just tell you that you gotta leave, "sorry I'd rather choose the person who murdered me and took me away from you guys in the first place"..? Yeah no wonder she also sees killing this guy as an option, no matter how messed up it is.

Yandere of not. When the female/harem members try to murder MC. Then I lose all the interest. That's just way messed up. That's not love and that's not good nor interesting writing. That's just insane people acting insane.

"Yeah it's all cool "sis", you only murdered me once, and tried to murder me a second time. Just water under the bridge. Stuff like this just happens."
😑

I liked this manga until the point of the girl/MC's wife was kidnapped. Then this plot turned to sh1t.
MC knows she has the hairpin, and the blessing from the elves. And before we saw it takes 4 hours flight to the elven village from MC's town..
So MC could've flown to elven village, take the little elf kid with him, and the perv fairy because they have a contract, who can locate MC's girl, and fly straight to her. But no, that would make too much sense, and instead the author wanted for MC to fire bomb a whole city into ashes, and created this badly written plot/excuse around it.

MC should've:
-not get enlisted, instead act alone, because he's fastest/stealthiest that way
-make rescuing her wife T-H-E top priority
-use the elf kid & perv fairy, and the sky-dragons as bloodhounds, and go straight to your wife
-murdering the crown-prince and the king as a second priority after the rescue

Why the FÜCK is MC wasting his time (days, weeks) in the frontlines, doing some bombing missions?
Wouldn't it make the most sense if MC acted alone, and didn't enlist for the military in the first place? There's no reason or excuse for him to not do just that.
I guess they tried to give some shïtty excuse when MC was talking with his "future father in-law", like civilians can't act themselves and that it would mean more massacre of civilians (as if that made any sense, it's called WAR for a reason. There's no rules). Also, MC could just massacre everybody and leave no witnesses, if that was so important.

Just use those sky-dragons as his bloodhounds, and go directly to your girl.
No sane man could do anything else if they loved their woman, and thought that she was in any risk of being violated/tortured, or worse..
This plot makes no sense at all, at least not to me anyways.

I would murder the crown-prince, then the king, and then resque your girl (preferably do the resque first, but they deserve to die nonetheless.)

If I were MC, I would just go and massacre the royal family and every person who guards them.
MC could do this VERY easily with his guns and consealment magic alone.

-Consealment magic ON
-Sneak to crown prince's bedroom
-*headshot*
-Take the body with you, throw into forrest for demons to eat.
-Repeat the same sh*t with Amy.
-Profit

Just pick out of any former or current communist countries. I'd suggest China or N-Korea.

Dunno if it's just me but this chapter look'd especially short..
Was wondering if this same artist has some other projects they draw along this manga. (Though not so interested that I'd look up myself)

Regarding this chapter.. I hope MC bails out of there as soon as possible.
Imagine if it's like that everywhere (and by that I mean that people).. It would be easier to just live alone (w/ Puppy) on some desert island honestly.

Why you wouldn't check the hideout for loot???

This writing is grabage to be honest. Like actual slob.
MC acts like a timid doormat, and this b1tch princess has an ego twice of her size.
Also why even start lying about being a villager there? There's no benefit for him for doing that.
Just say you're homeless nomad, and that your family died years ago.
This goddess is way stupider than she should be (because she can't be smarter that the author, ofc.)

The expression "bounty on his head", means literally that all you need is the guy's head (removed from the body) to get the bounty.
From that perspective MC not just killing and decapitating this guy, and going the extra way to not killing him, is just stupid.

So tired of this sh*t when you make the protagonist an adult/a young adult, then make them isekaid to a new world and into a child's body, with the same mental age as before, and after all that they act and emote exactly like a child, instead of a more mature and mentally stronger/more stable person.
Why did you even bother making the protagonist be older in the 1st life, if he's gonna act and cry like some lil' bitch? Smh...

MC is way too emotionless with the fact that his secret is out of the bag, and that the mage girl was essentially carrying a microphone, and those two guys were close by listening their conversations. Also for the fact that he was essentially blackmailed to become a hunter or else he'd become an enemy of the hunters association..?
Yeah why feel angry and deceived at all.
Also, what is even MC's deal here? He just wants to die then, if his priority is to give his body back? It was never really explained before. It's like this guy is just aimlessly drifting through life without any meaning, considering he just let himself be excecuted in the isekai world.
Also, how and why he got into another persons body? Not gonna ask that question or gonna even try to find out?
I feel like even the author doesn't know all the answers to this story at this point.
Honestly this whole story/plot feels way uninteresting to me. I don't really care for what happens to this MC or his body. Probably gonna drop this here (maybe).

This is so lame and stupid.
What a disappointing ending to that arc.
Also, "you have no right to refuse"? Of course if MC had some actual testicles in those pants of his, he would at the end of that sentence crush that guy's every limb, and then say something snarky like "It seems I have every right to refuse",
because by all logic he's the strongest human, period.
But of course since this MC is an average eunuch japanese guy, he just listens to authorities, even though he could over power them all in an instant. Heck he could conquer Japan if he wanted, and make himself the emperor.
I just imagined a way more interesting arc/direction for this current plot.
If I didn't make myself clear. I don't like this protagonist. He's so generic & boring.
I have seen this same dude so many times before in many mangas other than this.
He just changes his name and identety every time.