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oonhas
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oonhas - 1720661554
This MC's low intelligence is honesly a huge turnoff regarding this manga.
This would be so much better if MC was smart enough that he wouldn't be taken advantage of.
Now it's portrayed like a talentless idiot won at the lottery, and the people around him take advantage of his gullible nature now that the money is around.
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oonhas - 1720660935
You don't have to be an idiot to understand how much time and effort it takes, to draw/create a manga, let alone one that is so good it gets published..

So considering all of that, why would you make a manga about a protagonist, who's a clear pushover, and a gullible idiot, for being taken advantage of..
(I know that if this was first a light novel, and it had decent sales, then it makes sense, to make this into manga, from purely that perspective)

Maybe it could be explained if MC didn't know that thing's worth (honestly, he should be informed enough beforehand, knowing it's value, before showing it to the guild),
BUT, he was clearly explained, how it was a "national treasure", worth 100 golds price.. And they even said how much it had the potential to earn..
If you as the author want to make your protagonist look a like tool, that's easy to take advantage of.. Clearly you succeeded author.

I will never, never understand why anybody, whether it's a LN author, or a mangaka, would wanna make a story about an idiot like this dude.
Sometimes I wonder if japanese people just like reading stories about these pathetic, dislikable protagonists.
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oonhas - 1717350083
By not killing the slave merchant, his minions & that magician dude, MC just enabled the slaving of other innocent people in the future. Tha naivety of this protagonist is just plain insulting.
Also telling people, whose whole kingdom/home was destroyed, to not seek revenge.. How any more insulting you can be? The rational way is to always seek justice, even if it means taking revenge afterwards.
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oonhas - 1717344572
This is just a wild guess on my part, but I would bet my money that Rifreya is actually Nanami. Except she was reincarnated, (her memories locked) 16 years before the people on earth transferred to that world. If it's a God, then doing something like that is easy.

Also, MC should've just told her, that there are numerous spirits watching him right now, and making love with her, while they watch, would dirty her "honor" etc.
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oonhas - 1717341723
I think MC should've told the beast girl his name and reveal himself to her (and tell the inn he's staying at). You can never have too many friends/connections, especially in a new world.
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oonhas - 1717341245
This is so ridiculous. Why would MC think his family is no more? Just because they're not in that same reality, they are very much still alive, and if not for yourself, then for them, you should try to speak out. This dude is so pathetic. He's just escaping reality, instead of speaking out. Just by stating the name of the real killer, he would help with the investigation SO MUCH. They would actually have another suspect, and a lead to follow.

I really don't care for how this author deciced go on about this plot development.
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oonhas - 1717340645
I really hate this type of drama that essentially comes from a lack of communication. It's such a cheap, lazy way to create drama.
This is so used trope, where a victim of false persecution, is an introvert japanese person (a guy mostly), and they just decide not to stand up for themself. They wont even try. They just shut up..
For example if I were MC, I would speak out loud to myself (to the viewers, that is), when nobody was around, that "Nanami was killed by "the name of the f*cker". I would just repeat it to myself. They could easily check on it, and investigate. He could have a "streaming" sessiong just alone, where he would explain what happened.

If I was MC, I would paint it on walls in every dungeon "Nanami was killed by [the name of the guy]". Actually, I'm pretty sure the killers name wasn't mentioned in the 1st chapter?
If I would buy a house, I would paint on the side of the house. Heck, I would paint it on a side of a mountain.

That's a huge character fault. Also, this dude just collapsed after one stab. I would release a literal hell on that guy, despite knowing I was gonna die soon from a lack of blood. I would try to kill him with every second I'd have before passing out.. While this dude just gave up instantly..

It's such a shame. Almost every time japanese authors create these protagonists, they just end up being below expectations.
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oonhas - 1716823988
The chapter where MC murdered a sick and weak slave woman (his first murder of an innocent person), because of a social pressure, I was like damn, this is so disappointing, I'm never gonna be able to relate with this MC, but I'm gonna still keep on reading, if this gets better...
Until we get to the chapter where MC gangrapes 3 villager slave women with his friends, and thoroughly enjoys it. That was a cue for me to drop this since clearly I'm not the target audience of this type of content.

P.S. The fact that in the previous chapter, before that rape one, MC's dad says to MC's elder brother before making him a knight: "Love justice and hate injustice, so that God may love you", is the peak of hypocrisy with these nobles.
The men of the nobility are like the ultimate human scum of their society in this manga.
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oonhas - 1716763975
Killing an innocent person, whom only "sin", was being a slave that's weak and sick.. That's like selling your soul to the devil. That's a one way ticket to hell. There's no redemption or excuse for our MC.. What's the point of being a +40y old soul/reincarnator, and knowing better, if you're willing to murder an innocent person, doing the ultimate sin there is.. because of what? Social/peer pressure? What a joke.
Maybe, if that geezer threatened to kill Roro, or his sister/the slave girl, if MC didn't kill that woman.. Then at least there would've been an excuse to act that way.. But sadly, there was no excuse.

I really hate that the author decided to take this route. Not that I had any respect for a fictional character, but this is the most disappointing moment in this manga. Disappointing because I saw potential in this.
Ofc this can still be "great", but it's none different than knowing that a person you knew and respected, that they actually were a rapist, or a murderer of innocent victim.. You just will never think about them in the same way you did before.
This would've been a great character moment if MC actually stood his ground here, even if he was beaten and abused by that psycho geezer for standing his ground.
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oonhas - 1712764211
The fact that this angel took 4 swings with his sword (4 times attempted murder) At Dou-chan is just unforgivable.
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oonhas - 1710674978
Such bullshit from that "police"(?) guy. Regardless he should've done anything, except give moral lectures full of hot air, without using all of his resources to help the guy.
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oonhas - 1709907675
So a Baker, with Holy Knight and Martial Artist skills? I seriously wouldn't think any less of them, if a pretty woman had those skills in a fantasy world like that. She doesn't have any reason to feel embarrassed. If anything she's make a great wife. She can cook, and keep the family safe.

I'm guessing on average people/adventurers have way worse skill-combinations than her.
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oonhas - 1709181959
If there's a retard student who thinks it's okay to pull out his sword in class (why the hell is he even allowed have it on in class?), and make a threat on another person's life, let alone teachers, because the person said something that the retard didn't agree with..

-Then you as a teacher shouldn't enable this idiotic/dangerous behavior, disarming the situation by apologizing. That's basically saying you were in the wrong, and that it was okay for the retard to have the intention to murder you. It would only be a matter of time before a guy like that would end up dead or in jail, if someone understanding/forgiving person didn't correct him first, without cutting off his head that is.

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oonhas - 1708593224
I guess it's too much asked to think that MC still has those gems in his ass? Because if he doesn't, what a waste.
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oonhas - 1708591492
Tbh I think MC is pretty stupid for not creating new alias, since he's wanted man in another town/country, with adventurers guild. It's fair to assume those guilds can change information between each others, and MC being in another country isn't an obstacle if there's a manhunt started by a noble.

Actually I wouldn't think that the guild master from the Rock Cliff town would snitch MC up if someone asked, but he was well known in that place regardless, it's fair to assume that the noble who MC punched, already knows the name he used there.
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oonhas - 1707709478
There's no value in killing you

Sure there is, just imagine the food you'll save when you have one prisoner less to feed
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oonhas - 1707705972
The art style really is 5/5
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I think admiring would be actually proper term in this case.
Extremely cute & wholesome regardless.
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oonhas - 1707095379
The premise seems quite unique in this, but I also think the character writing is lacking. I mean, it's like these people don't act or talk like real people. Everything is so plain, and we don't really get any inner thoughts of these people..
Why would any sane person give up all that treasure just for pennies? Yeah, maybe on the 1st time if they didn't know any better, but I would just hide it somewhere after that, to get it back later.
The MC doesn't seem to have very high intelligence stat. He thinks it's fine to have his sister to work in a sleazy place like that? What, no comment/thoughts about it?
Nah let's not think about it. Let's just get drunk instead..
I hope nothing happens to the sister, but I think it's already quite obvious that the people of kingdom are not good or honorable people. Probably they're all psychopathic predators, since most of them aren't even human beings.
Even if the MC is dull brained, I hope at the very least he's is likable, because many authors overlook how important it is that the MC should be likable & relatable.
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