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oonhas
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oonhas - 1750040634
Things I dislike about this story:
-MC forgiving at all/so easily, to the person who murdered him, even though she was one if his "harem" members, meaning one of the closest people to you betrayed you.
-MC lacks emotionals awareness towards this beast girl. He totally doesn't understand the trauma and sadness she and the other girls have gone through. And after they meet after so long? "You have to go back, because reasons"? Wholy sh*t dude that's so stupid. No wonder this virgin got murdered if he's so stupid and blind to other peoples feelings and emotional distress.
Imagine being this very simple yet child minded beast girl, who lost their parental figure and their heart breaks from sadness because of it, and after meeting them once again finally after so long time, they just tell you that you gotta leave, "sorry I'd rather choose the person who murdered me and took me away from you guys in the first place"..? Yeah no wonder she also sees killing this guy as an option, no matter how messed up it is.

Yandere of not. When the female/harem members try to murder MC. Then I lose all the interest. That's just way messed up. That's not love and that's not good nor interesting writing. That's just insane people acting insane.
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oonhas - 1750037967
"Yeah it's all cool "sis", you only murdered me once, and tried to murder me a second time. Just water under the bridge. Stuff like this just happens."
😑
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oonhas - 1748931891
I liked this manga until the point of the girl/MC's wife was kidnapped. Then this plot turned to sh1t.
MC knows she has the hairpin, and the blessing from the elves. And before we saw it takes 4 hours flight to the elven village from MC's town..
So MC could've flown to elven village, take the little elf kid with him, and the perv fairy because they have a contract, who can locate MC's girl, and fly straight to her. But no, that would make too much sense, and instead the author wanted for MC to fire bomb a whole city into ashes, and created this badly written plot/excuse around it.

MC should've:
-not get enlisted, instead act alone, because he's fastest/stealthiest that way
-make rescuing her wife T-H-E top priority
-use the elf kid & perv fairy, and the sky-dragons as bloodhounds, and go straight to your wife
-murdering the crown-prince and the king as a second priority after the rescue
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oonhas - 1748931014
Why the FÜCK is MC wasting his time (days, weeks) in the frontlines, doing some bombing missions?
Wouldn't it make the most sense if MC acted alone, and didn't enlist for the military in the first place? There's no reason or excuse for him to not do just that.
I guess they tried to give some shïtty excuse when MC was talking with his "future father in-law", like civilians can't act themselves and that it would mean more massacre of civilians (as if that made any sense, it's called WAR for a reason. There's no rules). Also, MC could just massacre everybody and leave no witnesses, if that was so important.

Just use those sky-dragons as his bloodhounds, and go directly to your girl.
No sane man could do anything else if they loved their woman, and thought that she was in any risk of being violated/tortured, or worse..
This plot makes no sense at all, at least not to me anyways.

I would murder the crown-prince, then the king, and then resque your girl (preferably do the resque first, but they deserve to die nonetheless.)
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oonhas - 1748930169
If I were MC, I would just go and massacre the royal family and every person who guards them.
MC could do this VERY easily with his guns and consealment magic alone.
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oonhas - 1748929577
-Consealment magic ON
-Sneak to crown prince's bedroom
-*headshot*
-Take the body with you, throw into forrest for demons to eat.
-Repeat the same sh*t with Amy.
-Profit
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oonhas Quad - 1748703174
Just pick out of any former or current communist countries. I'd suggest China or N-Korea.
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oonhas - 1747154819
Dunno if it's just me but this chapter look'd especially short..
Was wondering if this same artist has some other projects they draw along this manga. (Though not so interested that I'd look up myself)

Regarding this chapter.. I hope MC bails out of there as soon as possible.
Imagine if it's like that everywhere (and by that I mean that people).. It would be easier to just live alone (w/ Puppy) on some desert island honestly.
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oonhas - 1746728580
Why you wouldn't check the hideout for loot???
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oonhas - 1746724399
This writing is grabage to be honest. Like actual slob.
MC acts like a timid doormat, and this b1tch princess has an ego twice of her size.
Also why even start lying about being a villager there? There's no benefit for him for doing that.
Just say you're homeless nomad, and that your family died years ago.
This goddess is way stupider than she should be (because she can't be smarter that the author, ofc.)
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oonhas - 1746723870
The expression "bounty on his head", means literally that all you need is the guy's head (removed from the body) to get the bounty.
From that perspective MC not just killing and decapitating this guy, and going the extra way to not killing him, is just stupid.
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oonhas - 1746722961
So tired of this sh*t when you make the protagonist an adult/a young adult, then make them isekaid to a new world and into a child's body, with the same mental age as before, and after all that they act and emote exactly like a child, instead of a more mature and mentally stronger/more stable person.
Why did you even bother making the protagonist be older in the 1st life, if he's gonna act and cry like some lil' bitch? Smh...
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oonhas - 1745390249
MC is way too emotionless with the fact that his secret is out of the bag, and that the mage girl was essentially carrying a microphone, and those two guys were close by listening their conversations. Also for the fact that he was essentially blackmailed to become a hunter or else he'd become an enemy of the hunters association..?
Yeah why feel angry and deceived at all.
Also, what is even MC's deal here? He just wants to die then, if his priority is to give his body back? It was never really explained before. It's like this guy is just aimlessly drifting through life without any meaning, considering he just let himself be excecuted in the isekai world.
Also, how and why he got into another persons body? Not gonna ask that question or gonna even try to find out?
I feel like even the author doesn't know all the answers to this story at this point.
Honestly this whole story/plot feels way uninteresting to me. I don't really care for what happens to this MC or his body. Probably gonna drop this here (maybe).
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oonhas - 1745388796
This is so lame and stupid.
What a disappointing ending to that arc.
Also, "you have no right to refuse"? Of course if MC had some actual testicles in those pants of his, he would at the end of that sentence crush that guy's every limb, and then say something snarky like "It seems I have every right to refuse",
because by all logic he's the strongest human, period.
But of course since this MC is an average eunuch japanese guy, he just listens to authorities, even though he could over power them all in an instant. Heck he could conquer Japan if he wanted, and make himself the emperor.
I just imagined a way more interesting arc/direction for this current plot.
If I didn't make myself clear. I don't like this protagonist. He's so generic & boring.
I have seen this same dude so many times before in many mangas other than this.
He just changes his name and identety every time.
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oonhas - 1745386260
Here it is once again. The all cringy "gotta CONFESS others my deepest secrets, like how I was isekaid/have super powers/possessed other persons body, and how it's shameful that I was DECEIVING you all along, and how I didn't confess these secrets on spot to everyone around me instantly when I had the chance" -trope.. 🤮🤮🤮🤮

LMAO. This is so stupid. He had no reason to confess sh*t to her,
especially since she was nowhere around when the guy was bullied to the point of suicide.
He could've/should've played stupid like before.
You can explain gates/demons/super powers/mana/magic, but not awakening the ability to use new powers?
Yeah that makes total nonsense to me too.
If opening up to her could help at all to his situation? Then sure maybe do it. If it doesn't make things better, then why bother risking it.
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oonhas - 1745381092
L-A-M-E

Why even bother talking? MC should've chopped his limbs and head off at the same moment he saw the dude.
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oonhas - 1745380792
-He didn't kill any of those nobles/royalty who framed/executed him
-He didn't kill any of his bullies
-He didn't kill these two jackoffs
I bet he won't kill the ouroboros leader either. Instead the guy gets killed by some other 3rd party, like some demon etc. that's controlling/using him against other humans.
You can see it right from the story's beginning if we are dealing with an author who makes their protagonist kill other people, or just doesn't no matter what happens.
Let's be real. This MC is what I'd call a "mentally weak". Meaning he wont be killing other people.
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oonhas - 1745378282
MC seeing her just as an angry wild boar piglet with a little bow tie on her head,
was just the most random and adorable sh*t in this chapter lol.
https://i.postimg.cc/bvfp9bTr/i.png

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oonhas - 1744816612
I think MC still doesn't have an understanding, nor has he even tried to really find out, about how valuable those plants are which he looked out for the adventurers guild. (Or have I just forgot about it?) Clearly they are way, way more precious than he has even imagined. In all honesty he should've found out about those herbs before the mission, and how valuable they actually were. Then he coul've made more informed decisions & negotiations regarding the guild and the noble guy.

Also, just my personal opinion but this MC is kinda foolish when he's put on the spot. He should've made up a lie that he has some special power, etc. which can't be thaught to other people when it comes to getting those herbs. Now he basically f*cked himself up.

But then again all he has to do is wait to get the armor, then he can just lie about teaching a group of people to get the grass, meaning he takes them with him to the spot, and just gets them killed there. Then he can just bail out to another city.
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oonhas - 1744737726
Author missed a huge chance here to show how the A-rank party's member associate back into their former lives. Like how they find out their families are still alive and waiting & hoping for their return. Just making the guild leader a sibling or a fiancee to one of the party members was a missed chance for some emotional meetup of lost loved ones.
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