I was sure that the attack which started all of this (the one with the flashback spaghetti plate), was going to be brought up again when the guy was still hanging on to his life, and then they would've revieled that whole attack was actually orchestrated/staged by some unknown 3rd party to only make it look like it was the elves (even though it wasn't), and that they wanted these elves and the mafia fighting & weakening each others, and then the guy would've died with the regret of being played for a fool (or something like that).

But I guess I was just over thinking this whole plot, smh.

I hope MC saves/adopts those treasure house sisters now.

This is actually pretty cool plot twist. Now it makes sense why MC saw different things when he peeked into the immortal realm from 'earth' when he was younger. It was hundreds if not thousands of years before those two cultivators came to visit him. Meaning the speed of time happens way fast in cultivators world than on earth.

If these people marry, have children, and even mourn their dead, then they have a culture of their own. Clearly they are 'people'. If they are partly plants doesn't matter. Eating them should considered cultivating bad karma. No wonder cultivators are hated by 'heavens' if they do shit like this.

Honestly just one chest would've been plenty. MC's treasures are about to be wasted pretty fast if he keeps giving them away this fast.

Damn you could've at least let fatty finish his speech before stabbing him in the back?? Who knows what he wanted. MC only speculated that he had bad intentions, but those were just his speculations. He could've (potentially) been MC's best friend in this life.
Also MC could've said that he was hiding inside the boat's cargo before other people came aboard, until it started to sink.
By now it's sure this MC is a total sociopath. Every person who's even a potential problem to his cultivation is to be killed it seems..
What's the point of living forever if you have to sacrifice your humanity & morals to achieve it.

Considering MC's mental/total lifespan so far, 5-6 years would be nothing.

I really don't like this protagonist. If the people he murdered/manipulated were evil themselves, you could justify this MC's actions. But he's just treating everyone else as tools for his own gains. Just because you can turn back time eventually, does that mean you can murder and manipulate people just as you like? Certainly not. The people are still hurt and killed, even if you are the only one who remembers that shit later on.
These types of sociopathic protagonists are the most boring & one-dimensional as they come. That's why most authors know to leave these types of characters to be villains of the story.

The balance is nonexistent in this manhua. She's literally a god/devil. She's just way too strong. It actually makes no sense how she even had ANY difficulties trying to kill/kidnap MC or just make him her slave against his will before this.
This is just plain terrible writing. There's NO stakes or excitement here. She's just OP, plain and simple. Also the skinner guy is already way too strong, and even he's getting stronger now?
The whole power levels are just terribly explained in this manhua. These numbers/levels really mean nothing, especially since we don't even know the power levels of these villains.
The bet MC made with this demon woman god is retarded. Her character as a whole is annoying. She's too strong, and the author bringing the skinner guy back from death was just bad writing.
Yeah this might be my stop. Just writing this comment made me realize how this has gone from mediocre to worse.

MC should by now know better not to try get into that shitty academy.

That's a terrible and a stupid bet. Surely MC could've found out that "list" all by himself (and with the help of the sword girl). Considering he's betting his soul, that's just idiotic.

You shall not succeed

Honestly this sword girl (I can't bother with these names) could've warned the golddigger that the guy she's about to meet is a serial killer cannibal who has used her from the beginning and all of his promises are lies. She certainly didn't deserve this, and the other girl should've done more to avoid this from happening. Now this sword girl comes off as a callous, indifferent, even sociopathic since she has so little care for the other girls death.
Yeah not a fan of this author.

She is dumb, a bit bitchy, and a golddigger, but does she deserve the same fate as that nurse? Certainly not. The fact this nurse couldn't even be saved was such a messed up thing from this author.

Poor snake. Was just minding its business and then these barbaric humans invade its home and murder it.

I'm really not a fan of this whole BL/fangirling over homosexual fantasies of your male friends, to the point of making underground art work of those fantasies. Imo it's just stupid and unneccessary, and doesn't add anything to this plot.
If it was at least funny I'd give it a pass, but it's just not.
Also IF you were attracted (as a female) to a guy, then why would you want them to be gay for another dude?? I would get it if the fanfic-manga they made was about a woman who looke'd like themselves with Liam. But fantasizing about the guy you as a hetero woman like, being with another man? That's some deranged self-cuck sh*t right there.

This art style/character designs are very:
-cute
-wholesome
-sweet
And every other high-fructose term

Clearly this "Donda Ruu", is just too stubborn, prejudiced and prideful to aknowledge MC's efforts, whether it's cooking or anything else. This is the type of asshole who mocks your cooking to your face, and when everyone else isn't looking, he eats down all the food MC made.

Also every cook knows this, that every meal can't please every person. MC is just being stupid here. He shouldn't waste time with this idiot. It doesn't make any sense to give any thought to this idiot's opinions.

This would be SO MUCH better read if MC wasn't such a 'scaredy cat'. This guy is way too timid and clearly lacks confidence.
If he had that "I won't take shit from anyone" attitude, it would elevate this manga.