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Flurgenheimen
1401 points
42 Comment(s)
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Flurgenheimen - 1730421079
Oh my god, a harem protagonist setting boundaries and not just leading the girls on? What sorcery is this?
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https://i.postimg.cc/pXYF8pZV/i.jpg
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I banish thee back to the depths of 4chan from whence you came!
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Flurgenheimen - 1724164030
So proud of my boy! *sniffle*
https://i.postimg.cc/zfYCM4JJ/i.jpg
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Flurgenheimen - 1723733550
https://i.postimg.cc/QdWwNZfW/i.pnghttps://i.postimg.cc/7LKWmP6d/i.jpg
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Flurgenheimen - 1721916296
On the plus side the art in this is frankly beautiful, the way that the spear fighting is drawn conveys a real sense of motion and never takes the traits of the spear for granted with changes in grip and a slight flexibility which serves to amplify the movement and speed. The characters generally feel distinct with their own personality that keeps them from being too generic, unfortunately this doesn't really extend to the main character. His personality to me feels more like the generic snarky regressor mc which, paired with the rune oath system, can make his acts of kindness seem purely transactional which clashes with his desire to do things differently than the eponymous player.
Speaking of the player, they killed off the most interesting character in the first 3 chapters, I found the way he saw the characters as nothing more than tools and his love for and desire to protect the mc since he was the only human that he could perceive as a person. I feel like there are so many interesting things they could have done with him that it's just a waste to have him die so early and if the mc being more transactional with his good deeds is supposed to be an intentional flaw it would have been better to directly compare that to the player.
TL:DR Fight scenes and art in general are really good, characters feel unique enough to stand out from each other but the MC could use some more fleshing out. Overall I would recommend this even though I feel it could be better.
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Flurgenheimen Leath - 1719979144
https://i.postimg.cc/FKZS6DpR/i.jpg
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Flurgenheimen - 1719027897
That curse is terrifying! You can't even heal without dispelling the curse
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Flurgenheimen Vrad - 1716942561
Hey, don't talk about our twink like that
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Flurgenheimen - 1716942211
I love that he's not just clumsily swinging a sword around anymore, he's gone beyond relying on what the guideline gave him and started fighting in his own way
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Flurgenheimen - 1715430658
I can't wait to see Jo Gul kick his ass!
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https://i.postimg.cc/d1bqW229/i.webp
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Flurgenheimen Prolux - 1714923516
I assume that you're talking about the telekinesis? He has unlocked the ability but he still needs to learn how to wield it
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Flurgenheimen - 1714539724
This part of the story reminds me a lot of Simon’s character arc Gurren Lagann, he found a safe place in the shadow of the sword king but when he felt that he couldn’t live up to the title Barolt left behind he went into a depression which he came out on the other side of with his own title of Wolf King much like how Simon stopped being Kamina’s little bro and became a leader on his own merit
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This is the complete form of the goblin hybrid thing that they even struggled with the assassin guy helping him and the spear kid, it makes sense that he would still struggle
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Flurgenheimen - 1708332384
I love that he hero is just straight up right, he's already ridiculously strong he just needed people for support more than strength
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Flurgenheimen - 1708017784
Like other comments have said the story is fine but the phenomenal sense of movement in the action scenes makes this well worth a look. However there are some brain-dead takes in the comments on a lot of chapters so as long as you skip the comments it's a fun read
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Flurgenheimen YAMEROOO - 1707318180
Character development out in the wild
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The sparks of romance that fly when a last desperate attack meets the bewildered face of an enemy that truly deserves it
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Bro, it’s been 3 chapters, give him his government mandated angst time
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