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Elroid Tiereon
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Elroid Tiereon - 1718059423
Seems like the life of a witch is just very lonely.

But I hope our lovely lil witch have a happy life~~
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Elroid Tiereon - 1718050755
We didn't progress anything huh... but twas cute, so it's aight.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1718045215
Honestly, I do like when politics in stories like this play this way... not overly convoluted, but making clear there's more at stake behind the words being spoken.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1718028220
Whenever this updates I have to go back to re-read a few chapters cause it takes quite a bit to update!!

Still, each chapter is quite long, and the story is interesting... so it aint that bad.
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Well, it does play on them being very young too.
So I guess they are more open minded.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1717988348
I saw that twist coming the moment the statue showed up.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1717987835
That's a record time proposal!
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Elroid Tiereon - 1717987651
It's kinda impressive how little our MC gets affected by those youkai/spirits!!
I can't tell if he's brave or just too easy going.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1717979358
She will now start to wonder "should I ship them two together" and start a dumb spiral into a new plot.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1717968111
I can totally see how this will go into a different route... but is that too predictable?

I reckon... at the start of the next chapter she will fail at confessing, but by the end of the chapter SOMEONE WILL confess.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1717959991
It's quite enjoyable to have some mysteries~~
I reckon they never left the ground and twas a bit of illusion, but who can tell.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1717877961
The detail in the last page is scary as hell.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1717860777
That credit page was perfect xD
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But she did act like she never got what was going on between them two!
She's an odd one.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1717697461
Oh!
We got the mask girl actually getting some life experience thanks to our boy...

But the end is a fantastic reveal... that the short friend maybe smarter than she shows !!!
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Elroid Tiereon - 1717697055
Unlike a protagonist having to face problems head on... our Lloyd does all the shadow work and goes into battle with all the winning cards already at hand.
How can you not love him.
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Elroid Tiereon - 1717696386
As I've read in the Light Novels, Marie was VERY popular with readers!!
Considering how bad her life was and how proactive she is to attain happiness, it's no wonder she would make an interesting heroine.
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Elroid Tiereon Shiro30 - 1717647765
I think harem endings need to have enough work to feel earned.
First off, the MC must be actually forward in trying to keep the harem, the harem members must show interest in that outcome and the world must bend after a long struggle.
An unearned harem ending would just feel annoying. And if the MC doesn't act proactively, feels even more frustrating.
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Elroid Tiereon Shiro30 - 1717641047
I think you CAN write a pure protagonist that doesn't go for the harem ending... but it NEEDS to have development.
Keeping the status quo by just doing the same all the time just sucks.
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