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Towan
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Towan - 1703333083
I do love the unique design of him, but this feels a bit rushed with him getting strong too quickly. Hopefully it goes at a slower pace the next few chapters.
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Towan User-4931159888 - 1702990997
To be fair, she does it out of love for her brother. She was being manipulated by the ministers. Gotta remember that. Still interesting regardless. Really lewd. =3
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Towan - 1702923173
For a moment I thought he would wake up with a woman. And seeing as Granny was out of commission I assumed teenage girl would land in bed with him, which might have been troublesome. xD
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Towan Haxe - 1702669781
You act as if Jill is the same age as Alicia. Doesn't he have a significant age gap too? Not that I personally think it matters. It is a nice story, so I am excited to see it play out. =3
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Towan - 1702490415
Expression with an idea? That is the expression of freaking HORNY! xD It makes me think she has a fetish for committing crimes or something.
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Towan - 1702419429
I agree with the sentiment of everyone here. The way he mentioned it in an earlier chapter, calling her aggressive, made it sound like she was jumping his bones. Sure, a heartfelt moment is fine to have, but following that up with her being aggressive would have been better as the implication is here that he did indeed take advantage of a drunk girl.
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Towan Clifton1331 - 1702407803
Could be. I honestly just thought until now that it was just different color for each character. xD

And I am rooting for the prince. That meeting with the 76% where she asked him about love was oof. He didn't do well at all, answering that question. And when I read that 76% it broke my heart a bit as it was clear MC would abandon that route entirely because of the time pressure. Well, again the prince's answer ruined it too. A real rollercoaster and the way she is handling Eclis isn't going too well either. I said it time and time again, but that dude needs friends. If Eclis had friends, he wouldn't be as possessive as he is. It would make him a more well rounded individual. Instead, he seems to become now the most unstable love interest. Gotta pray things won't totally go off the rails.
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Towan Arnish - 1702201256
Yup. She showed it a bit last chapter too, which honestly was rather cute. I like her. Hope we see a lot more of her. =3
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Towan Yandere_Fetish - 1702200939
Fair enough, but considering Evangeline seems to have a crush on Ash and will turn into a tall adult beauty in two years time, chances are Ash and her will be the pairing. Either way though, let us hope that Lily will never retire! xD
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Towan Mandarin - 1702160168
Probably. But they sure look damn good. xD
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Towan - 1702150211
So, "Black Rain" is the last thing he can remember before turning into a monster. This rain somehow seems to have been the downfall of Lake Kingdom. I wonder if Lake Kingdom has always been at the bottom of the lake or if it sunk down after the disaster that caused all of this.

...You know, it is reaaaaaally frustrating that MC is this dense. He is written as a smart strategist, but cannot even put 1+1 together. The sewage worker alone should have given him a clue. Everyone reading this story knew he was a normal human just from what information we were provided. This is the biggest gripe I have with this story. It is nonsensical that MC is this dense.
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Towan Xavier Uncle - 1702149280
And the bird couldn't care less in all of these panels. xD Well, he is just glad if he can be lazy, so it makes sense.
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Towan - 1701802843
Lily is the reason I am reading this. Shall she never die and always work! xD
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Towan - 1701612526
It is disappointing a bit. They make the male cucked lead a villain purposefully. This is a rather cheap and easy way out of problems. It would have been more interesting if the dude was a good guy.
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Towan - 1701603662
It is quite cute that the noble girl got embarrassed while trying to talk to them. =3
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Towan User-6792152436 - 1701599402
I would love to agree but...we only have 30 upvotes a day. And now I cannot even upvote your comment, dammit! xD Who's idea was that limit?
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Towan - 1701592441
Girl is sorry, but at the same time she is not, isn't she? xD
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Towan - 1701591841
I love the last one. Bro is angry, but then instantly worried as his friend slipped and fell on his face. It is really sweet.
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Towan JDinKorea - 1701588057
Bruh, no need to be mean and judgemental towards others. There is no harm in doing NNN or DDD and people should therefore be able to do that.
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Towan User-8353746225 - 1701587842
My interpretation is that the one that was replaced might now be happy in normal world, but his memories of his experiences in lewd world seeped into MC and visited him as "nightmares". So, MC saw a memory of them cosplaying for his other replaced self. Maybe even more if he didn't wake up. =3 Fun, but awkward morning ensues!
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