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Towan
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Towan blorb - 1700321140
Perfectly balanced.

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Towan YoRHa Unit 17 E - 1700077332
I personally like how it is handled here. MC back then avoided taking lifes, as that is a grave action that will weigh on his soul. But in this war, he knew it would be stupid not to and therefore did kill. It wasn't something he wanted to do, but he knew it needed to be done. It is a lot more mature than just having an MC slaughter by the thousands without a second thought.
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Towan - 1700070137
I am kinda disappointed. I really like that more feral Lamia design, dammit! xD
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Towan - 1699828502
I thought he had figured it out many chapters ago, but seemingly not. xD
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Towan - 1699826338
It is hard to watch the Fake MCs adventures. Dude is misunderstanding things too much and being too naive in his delusions with the gods happily ridiculing him and relishing in his suffering. I fear he will end up dead or have some other bad ending. Him trying to imitate Shield Hero is going to backfire. It is obvious. I only hope there will be a redemption arc in a sense. He showed good qualities, wanting his comrade to be healed and even begging the cold Saintess. He is flawed, but not bad. Fake MC needs to snap out of it.
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Towan - 1699818064
The Fake MC has my sympathies. He was led on by the gods who purposefully fueled his delusions, only to risk him getting killed to get a laugh out of it. And then they punished him on top for getting angry. He was shamed and ridiculed. Humbled, you could say. I do hope he will grow and overcome this situation.
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Towan - 1699810935
I hate the gods. They are terrible beings. If you fool around, making jokes one of them doesn't like? Curse. If you talk smack to them for finding amusement in a girl being crippled? Curse. Gods in this are trash, aside from the Outsider Goddess.
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Towan - 1699799513
I assume they heard him speaking in monster tongue and that caused this. I did wish he would have kept his mouth shut, seeing how much trouble it could cause.
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Towan Dat Folk - 1699786758
It is right in the first chapter. Lloyd died while drinking in a bar seemingly, throwing up blood. Albeit the MC took over after waking up on the ground. This was seemingly right after Lloyd got drunk and demolished the bar before stumbling home. It is therefore not quite clear.

Did Lloyd throw up blood after destroying the bar, before stumbling home? If so, why did no one report it? Was the novel a bit off maybe and Lloyd passed out on the ground and died right there? We can only assume he died because of alcohol poisoning, as per the story the MC knew, however there seem to be some small changes, like the blood that wasn't puked out.
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Towan The First - 1699712006
A bit late to ask yourself that. xD
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Towan Dat Folk - 1699711954
It does make sense. He had to be somewhere after all. xD I mean, I thought maybe he was trapped inside the body, but that is interesting. I wonder how he died in the original. Maybe he did die at the start like he did in the story and then our MC took over? Probably need to reread this.
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Towan Demonh8 - 1699606941
Hm... I stand in the middle. Pride, sure, but also not too much of it. Humbleness is a virtue too. So being Humble and Prideful at just the right times. I remember Avatar's Uncle Shiro. A great and humble man in a family that was filled with prideful beings.
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Towan Aab - 1699606748
I likened it to a fairytale where nothing bad ever happens, but that is a good take on it too. Corrupt her! Rather lewd sounding, so I like it. =3 Purity begone! Let's give her adult material to read! xD
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Is she self-centered? She sounds more...confused? I mean, she doesn't think of herself as confused, but the way she acts is strange. It is as if she can't read the room at all. Seemingly she thinks some things are going to happen the way she thinks they will happen, as if she imagines the world as a fairytale where a Happy Ending is around every corner and nothing ever goes wrong. I think that is a good way to describe it.

What I do have a problem with are the other students though. I mean, how the heck do they think she got expelled? What is with these rumors? Considering that one dude got punished and the prince that likes her I doubt the story of the kidnapping wasn't spread around. People must have talked about such an outrageous thing, yet they are this nasty to her.
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Towan Henrul - 1699603604
I like that too, but I am a bit stumped on how he did it. I mean, he was on camera the whole time. He can't just get his phone and ask her to come here with how pressed he was by the journalists.
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Towan TheImage - 1699603349
I love the sarcasm. xD Power corrupts sadly. Lord knows media much like companies swallow up other companies, growing more and more until they are close to a monopoly and can in the medias case manipulate the narrative however they please. Hence why distrust in media is on the rise and why Youtubers and others are getting more popular.
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Towan Uchiha-DeadPool - 1699603238
That's fair. I believe the dude is stuck between a rock and a hard place. I mean, just think about it, he is stuck between a rotten association and S-classes that casually destroy buildings without a care in the world. He would want to have law work and to keep the S-classes in check. Of course now he questions if the Association is the right way to go about it with how corrupt it has become. I believe he simply tries his best, but is also unsure on how to best solve this.

In short, he seemed to have bet on the wrong people to keep the S-classes in check. Here is the hope he bets on MC and helps him tear the Association down.
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Towan Reimans - 1699475235
Seriously. She goes: "Bring whoever you want, even Shiva! The sky is the limit!" and then after the group is gathered: "LOL, no. Fuck off and get another group. Pray I won't arbitrarily reject them as well."

A real WTF moment right there. I now instantly disliked her for basically lying to the MC and wasting everyones time, even the readers.
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Towan User-5611550814 - 1699469649
Hella satisfying. I honestly liked the fire dude. He was a jerk and a villain at first, but learned the joy of hard work from our MC. So, I was none too happy about his death. It is nice to see MC sharing my rage. Bury that MOFO!
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Bruh. Don't do the Younger Brother dirty like that. xD He actually cares about her a lot by now. Also feeling the Swordsman deserves better too. MC made a former enslaved noble that has lost everything dependent on her. This is a recipe for disaster. Eclis needs friends to better balance himself, but MC is accidentally raising him into a Yandere.

Also Kallisto is love, Kallisto is life. Agreed. =3
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