The last 20 chapters were confusing. No idea what was happening. Cogmos, Han Woo, nothing interesting was happening. The reunion was glossed over. I regret reading this in all honesty. This is wasted potential in its purest form.

Maybe not for everyone, but I like it. We get a whole lot of intel and this can give the story a lot more depth. =3

It is also quite gut wrenching. 0 means death. Death of his new mother, father, brother, the dragon dude and so many more who are in and outside of the duchy. Even the girlfriend of our pretty swordmaster here. This is big. So much bigger than the bone dragon was.

They are afraid that they will not get any food if he finds out. xD Luckily there are no mirrors, so as long as no one tells him, he will not find out about it.

He did, but he was always VERY embarrassed when he did it, so it is consistent with his character. =3 Also, it might feel more personal to say that to his brother, which might make it harder too.

I do feel like that poor girl is getting a lot of hate for no reason. xD At least she hasn't really shown any abhorrent side yet. She seems more curious and headstrong than anything.

I feel sorry for the dude that was executed. Sure, he was an ass, but he did try to argue with the other two to not kill MCs mother, so he should have deserved some more mercy. Being killed for not spreading what has happened is a bit too cruel for my taste.

That is also an option. Just write everything new, so something one can go for as well. I personally prefer of course if one uses an image with text and only changes a small bit of it, so that the text is more accurate to the source with only minimal changes for fun. =3

I do hope the vanguard isn't angry about the deducted reward, but instead accepting of it and regretful about leaving those two behind. They did seem nice, even if they were a tad inexperienced.

Yup. And now follows the bad NTR scene. xD In all honesty, I am worried how knight buddy will react to it. Seems like things can come crashing down. It wouldn't be the first time. I wonder, is MC on a character arc to learn what NTR is good and which is going to end up fucking him over? It will be interesting to find out.

Editing tip for you. If you want to be realistic, it helps to search for the needed letters in the pages and use those instead of editing. Here an example of mine. I changed "Did you lie to him?" to "Did you lie to me?!". I hope it helps! =3

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This entire scene feels like a declaration of war. Not in the negative sense though. More like a challenge between two people that have feelings for each other to up the game. I like it. =3

I do like the overweight lady and the artisan. They seem interesting to me, both in their own ways. Excellent ally's no doubt.

Bro, don't slut shame her. That would be like you lambasting any dude that gets raped for reaching the finish. She is clearly a victim here.

Previously she said MC needs to be 300 years for something (something about getting Tower Coins for quests, so maybe working?). So I assume 300 years is when you become an adult in dragon years. This means that "300 Years = 18 Years" and if you calculate this means "200 Years = 12 Years". Sorry guys, it is a loli! xD

"Let's live every moment to the fullest," he said and then quickly carries bee waifu off to make many more bees! =3

Agreed. Skimmed over the chapter again with the principal and still getting pissed. "Bring everyone, even Shiva!" and then "Lol, fuck no, rejected. Try again." That women's attitude is grating on my nerves. It would have been different if she said she had to review the candidates first and approve of them, but no, she said anyone is fine and then it wasn't.

Dammit. Getting too worked up again. xD

What are you talking about? Haruto was adopted into the family, so they are siblings, albeit not blood related.

That's why we love her. Best little sister! =D

I do love the unique design of him, but this feels a bit rushed with him getting strong too quickly. Hopefully it goes at a slower pace the next few chapters.