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Cookie Muncher
1500 points
2097 Comment(s)
576 Upvote(s)
Cookie Muncher - 1708897536
The story is good, but it's too bubbly and like slife? I think

Feels kinda like its going nowhere... Good art, not my genre
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it starts a lot of problems too πŸ™ƒπŸ™ƒπŸ™ƒ
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Cookie Muncher King - 1708896398
but wasn't that the moment just before jesus was betrayed and crucified

Life lessons: Always be careful around free food... Especially candy
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doesn't feel like the traditional copy-pasta that is the isekai genre where villains sprout up like whack-a-mole in unoriginal ways. They instead use circumstantial incidents as an antagonist with real character development
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Cookie Muncher - 1708886791
it's just but 1 simple request.... Prove your worth (to a noble of high standing)
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Cookie Muncher - 1708883309
Finally 11 chapters (18 additional subsections in between) and MC finally gets his 1st step to his dream
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my opinion is they may have added it as a means to help the users who wish to remain at -999 instead of +999. Before they fixed the comments section when you looked at your own profile it automatically changed +50 points. Since you have to deliberately pick one
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Cookie Muncher - 1708808083
that footnote... Didn't almus' wife try that in the beginning??? Isn't that foreshadowing???
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Cookie Muncher - 1708805985
for military strategy

A purposeful left weakness is almost always a trap
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Cookie Muncher - 1708805568
at least the ash head received a portion of his power
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Cookie Muncher - 1708800149
I agree with <Touch Me>. If the king was receiving benefits, he should be protecting said benefits. Thinking MC forgot this concept because he isn't used to actually ruling
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Cookie Muncher - 1708798990
THE PROGENITORRRRRRR

Sory chunnibyo syndrome flew out for a second there
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Cookie Muncher Mitxel - 1708796999
definitely overstepping boundaries on that question
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Cookie Muncher Mitxel - 1708795801
It's not harem if he becomes king right?
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Cookie Muncher - 1708780126
this took soooooo long to read to from chapter 1. Just because it was that good. You could actually feel the connection of the characters, and it truly conveyed the feeling of going on an adventure. The character growth was also immaculate so far. You really get to see the shifts in personality
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totally done this before and I'm not embarrassed to admit it
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Cookie Muncher - 1708776035
at this point I'm curious why he hasn't picked up an adventuring party
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motion is in essence the shift of the equilibrium with perception. So, if he was sitting up front watching the road staring straight the hole time it wouldn't have been a huge problem. Not eliminate but feel much better as his senses would be aligned with perception.
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Cookie Muncher Gakuku - 1708771724
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Edit* wouldn't let me like till i went to the chapter to go through captcha
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yeah... I'm more of a fan of stats being low myself. It's especially off putting when you see lvl 10000000000. It'd be even better if the stories gave us an actual table to understand these numbers at the beginning. Hate being lost in the scope of "normal"
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